Update articles/reliability/reliability-sustainability-data-solutions-fabric.md

Author: anaharris-ms

articles/reliability/reliability-sustainability-data-solutions-fabric.md

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 ### Region-down experience
 
-During a region failure, any Azure emissions data already ingested into Fabric remains there, and is accessible as long as Microsoft Fabric is available. For information on how to the multi-region support in Microsoft Fabric and how to enable disaster recovery and business continuity, see [Reliability in Microsoft Fabric ](./reliability-fabric.md).
+During a region failure, Azure emissions data that's already ingested into Fabric is accessible as long as Microsoft Fabric is available. For information on how to plan for disaster recovery and configure multi-region support in Microsoft Fabric, see [Reliability in Microsoft Fabric ](./reliability-fabric.md).
 
 Ingestion of new Azure emissions data will resume after Microsoft restores services into the region. Any missing data is expected to be ingested at this time. This process might take several days, but during that time any previous data continues to be available.