Minor updates to improve Acrolinx score

Author: DenKenMSFT

articles/cognitive-services/openai/concepts/models.md

@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ Similar to text search embeddings, there are two types: one for embedding code s
 |---|---|
 | Code search and relevance | code-search-ada-code-001, <br> code-search-ada-text-001, <br> code-search-babbage-code-001, <br> code-search-babbage-text-001 |
 
-When using our embedding models, please keep in mind their limitations and risks.
+When using our embedding models, keep in mind their limitations and risks.
 
 ## Finding the right model
 

articles/cognitive-services/openai/how-to/embeddings.md

@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ An embedding is a special format of data representation that can be easily utili
 
 ## How to get embeddings
 
-To obtain an embedding vector for a piece of text we make a request to the embeddings endpoint as shown in the following code snippets:
+To obtain an embedding vector for a piece of text, we make a request to the embeddings endpoint as shown in the following code snippets:
 
 ```console
 curl https://YOUR_RESOURCE_NAME.openai.azure.com/openai/deployments/YOUR_DEPLOYMENT_NAME/embeddings?api-version=2022-06-01-preview\
@@ -33,19 +33,19 @@ curl https://YOUR_RESOURCE_NAME.openai.azure.com/openai/deployments/YOUR_DEPLOYM
 
 ### Verify inputs don't exceed the maximum length
 
-The maximum length of input text for our embedding models are 2048 tokens (approximately equivalent to around 2-3 pages of text). You should verify that your inputs don't exceed this limit before making a request.
+The maximum length of input text for our embedding models is 2048 tokens (equivalent to around 2-3 pages of text). You should verify that your inputs don't exceed this limit before making a request.
 
 ### Choose the best model for your task
 
-For the search models you can obtain embeddings in two ways. The `<search_model>-doc` model is used for longer pieces of text (to be searched over) and the `<search_model>-query` model is used for shorter pieces of text, typically queries or class labels in zero shot classification. You can read more about all of the Embeddings models in our [Models](../concepts/models.md) guide.
+For the search models, you can obtain embeddings in two ways. The `<search_model>-doc` model is used for longer pieces of text (to be searched over) and the `<search_model>-query` model is used for shorter pieces of text, typically queries or class labels in zero shot classification. You can read more about all of the Embeddings models in our [Models](../concepts/models.md) guide.
 
 ### Replace newlines with a single space
 
-Unless you are embedding code, we suggest replacing newlines (\n) in your input with a single space, as we have observed inferior results when newlines are present.
+Unless you're embedding code, we suggest replacing newlines (\n) in your input with a single space, as we have observed inferior results when newlines are present.
 
 ## Limitations & risks
 
-Our embedding models may be unreliable or pose social risks in certain cases, and may cause harm in the absence of mitigations. Please review our Responsible AI content for more information on how to approach their use responsibly.
+Our embedding models may be unreliable or pose social risks in certain cases, and may cause harm in the absence of mitigations. Review our Responsible AI content for more information on how to approach their use responsibly.
 
 ## Next steps
 

articles/cognitive-services/openai/includes/studio.md

@@ -14,8 +14,8 @@ keywords:
 ## Prerequisites
 
 - An Azure subscription - <a href="https://azure.microsoft.com/free/cognitive-services" target="_blank">Create one for free</a>
-- Access granted to service in the desired Azure subscription. This service is currently invite only. You can fill out a new use case request here: <a href="https://aka.ms/oai/access" target="_blank">https://aka.ms/oai/access</a>
-- An Azure OpenAI Service resource with a model deployed. If you don't have a resource/model the process is documented in our [resource deployment guide](../how-to/create-resource.md)
+- Access granted to service in the desired Azure subscription. Currently, this service is available only by invitation. You can fill out a new use case request here: <a href="https://aka.ms/oai/access" target="_blank">https://aka.ms/oai/access</a>
+- An Azure OpenAI Service resource with a model deployed. If you don't have a resource/model, the process is documented in our [resource deployment guide](../how-to/create-resource.md)
 
 ## Go to the Azure OpenAI Studio
 
@@ -27,22 +27,22 @@ You'll first land on our main page for the Azure OpenAI Studio and from here you
 
 :::image type="content" source="../media/quickstarts/studio-start.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the landing page of the Azure OpenAI Studio with sections highlighted." lightbox="../media/quickstarts/studio-start.png":::
 
-- Resources without a deployment will be prompted to create one. This is required to be able to inference with your models
+- Resources without a deployment will be prompted to create one. A deployment is required to be able to inference with your models
 - Get started with a few simple examples that demonstrate the capabilities of the service
 - Navigate to different parts of the Studio including the **Playground** for experimentation and our fine-tuning workflow
 - Find quick links to other helpful resources like documentation and community forums
 
-From here, select the **create new deployment** button in the banner at the top. If you don't see this, you already have a deployment and can proceed to the 'playground' step.
+From here, select the **create new deployment** button in the banner at the top. If you don't see this button, you already have a deployment and can proceed to the [Playground](#playground) step.
 
 ## Deployments
 
-Before you can generate text or inference, you need to deploy a model. This is done by clicking the **create new deployment** on the deployments page. From here you can select from one of our many available models. For getting started we recommend `text-davinci-002` for users in South Central and `text-davinci-001` for users in West Europe (`text-davinci-002` isn't available in this region).
+Before you can generate text or inference, you need to deploy a model by clicking the **create new deployment** button on the deployments page. From here you can select from one of our many available models. For getting started we recommend selecting the `text-davinci-002` model.
 
 Once this is complete, select the 'Playground' button on the left nav to start experimenting.
 
 ## Playground
 
-The best way to start exploring completions is through our Playground. It's simply a text box where you can submit a prompt to generate a completion. From this page you can easily iterate and experiment with the capabilities. The following is an overview of the features available to you on this page:
+The best way to start exploring completions is through our Playground. It's simply a text box where you can submit a prompt to generate a completion. From this page, you can easily iterate and experiment with the capabilities. The following list is an overview of the features available to you on this page:
 
 :::image type="content" source="../media/quickstarts/playground-load.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the playground page of the Azure OpenAI Studio with sections highlighted." lightbox="../media/quickstarts/playground-load.png":::