Merge pull request #111517 from aashishb/patch-6

Clarify TLS use

Author: PRMerger20

articles/machine-learning/concept-enterprise-security.md

@@ -238,9 +238,9 @@ Azure Databricks can be used in Azure Machine Learning pipelines. By default, th
 
 ### Encryption in transit
 
-You can use TLS to secure internal communication between Azure Machine Learning microservices and to secure external calls to the scoring endpoint. All Azure Storage access also occurs over a secure channel.
+Azure Machine Learning uses TLS to secure internal communication between various Azure Machine Learning microservices. All Azure Storage access also occurs over a secure channel.
 
-For more information, see [Use TLS to secure a web service through Azure Machine Learning](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/machine-learning/how-to-secure-web-service).
+To secure external calls to the scoring endpoint Azure Machine Learning uses TLS. For more information, see [Use TLS to secure a web service through Azure Machine Learning](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/machine-learning/how-to-secure-web-service).
 
 ### Using Azure Key Vault