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articles/spatial-anchors/concepts/guidelines-effective-anchor-experiences.md

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 # Create an effective anchor experience by using Azure Spatial Anchors
 
-This article provides guidelines and considerations to help you effectively create and locate anchors by using Spatial Anchors.
+This article provides guidelines and considerations to help you effectively create and locate anchors by using Azure Spatial Anchors.
 
 ## Anchor improvement over time
 
-With Azure Spatial Anchors, each time you locate anchors, we attempt to improve the quality of future locate operations. We do this by using the environment data collected to augment the visual information on the anchors we are looking for. This process runs under the hood and is an offline optimization run by Azure Spatial Anchors to optimize for your environment. The additional data gathered during each operation builds a stronger understanding of the environment. This improves quality and allows you to better locate anchors through environment change, time passing, and for users looking at anchors from different angles and perspectives.
+With Azure Spatial Anchors, each time you locate anchors, we attempt to improve the quality of future locate operations. We do this by using the environment data collected to augment the visual information on the anchors we are looking for. This process runs under the hood and is an offline optimization run by the Azure Spatial Anchors service to optimize for your environment. The additional data gathered during each operation builds a stronger understanding of the environment. This improves quality and allows you to better locate anchors through environment change, time passing, and for users looking at anchors from different angles and perspectives.
 
 ## Good anchors
 
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ Visual tracking systems rely on the visual features in an environment. The more
 
 Follow the general guidelines in this section to build a UX that encourages a useful scan of the environment.
 
-First, if the user doesn't locate an anchor within a few seconds, the app should encourage users to move the device to capture more perspectives. The app can also encourage users to move themselves around the environment to scan for the anchor from more perspectives. The more feature perspectives that the device sees, the better.
+First, if the user doesn't locate an anchor within a few seconds, the app should encourage users to move the device to capture more perspectives. The app can also encourage users to move themselves around the environment to scan for the anchor from more perspectives. The more feature perspectives that the device sees, the better, as it will increase the likelihood that an anchor is located, and it will also collect more environment data that will be used to improve the quality of the anchor.
 
 For target scenarios, ask the user to move around the target to view it from different perspectives. In other words, ask the user to capture the target from new perspectives until the anchor is located.
 

articles/spatial-anchors/overview.md

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 Some example use cases enabled by Spatial Anchors include:
 
-- [Multi-user experiences](tutorials/tutorial-share-anchors-across-devices.md). Spatial Anchors makes it easy for people in the same place to participate in multi-user mixed reality applications. For example, two people can start a game of mixed reality chess by placing a virtual chess board on a table. Then, by pointing their device at the table, they can view and interact with the virtual chess board together.
+- [Multi-user experiences](tutorials/tutorial-share-anchors-across-devices.md). Azure Spatial Anchors makes it easy for people in the same place to participate in multi-user mixed reality applications. For example, two people can start a game of mixed reality chess by placing a virtual chess board on a table. Then, by pointing their device at the table, they can view and interact with the virtual chess board together.
 
 - [Way-finding](concepts/anchor-relationships-way-finding.md). Developers can also connect Spatial Anchors together creating relationships between them. For example, an app may include an experience that has two or more points of interest that a user must interact with to complete a task. Those points of interest can be created in a connected fashion. Later, when the user is completing the multi-step task, the app can ask for anchors that are nearby the current one to direct the user towards the next step in the task.