edit pass: mongodbatlas-public-preview

Author: ShawnJackson

articles/partner-solutions/includes/create-resource.md

@@ -13,4 +13,4 @@ Begin by signing in to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com/).
 
 1. Select the **+ Create** option.
 
-The **Create** resource pane appears in the working pane with the **Basics** tab open by default.
+The pane for creating a resource pane appears with the **Basics** tab open by default.

articles/partner-solutions/includes/delete-resource.md

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.author: kkendrick
 
 If you finished using your resource and you want to delete it, follow these steps:
 
-1. On the working pane's command bar, select **Delete**.
+1. On the command bar, select **Delete**.
 
     The **Delete Resource** pane appears in the sidebar.
 

articles/partner-solutions/includes/manage.md

@@ -11,4 +11,4 @@ Begin by signing in to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com/).
 
 1. On the **Resource** menu, choose the resource.
 
-The resource appears on the working pane with **MongoDB Resource Overview** open by default.
+The resource appears with **MongoDB Resource Overview** open by default.

articles/partner-solutions/includes/review-create.md

@@ -19,6 +19,6 @@ To resolve errors:
 
 1. Select **Create**.
 
-On the working pane, the message "Deployment is in progress" appears. When the deployment is complete, the message "Your deployment is complete" appears.
+The message "Deployment is in progress" appears. When the deployment is complete, the message "Your deployment is complete" appears.
 
 After the resource is created, select **Go to Resource** to view your resource.

articles/partner-solutions/includes/subscribe-from-azure-portal.md

@@ -11,12 +11,12 @@ Begin by signing in to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com/).
 
 1. In the Azure portal, on the service menu's global search bar, search for **marketplace**. In the **Services** results, select **Marketplace**.
 
-    The Azure Marketplace **Get Started** page appears on the working pane.
+    The Azure Marketplace **Get Started** pane appears.
 
 1. On the command bar, enter the name of the service in the **Search the Marketplace** search box.
 
-1. In the search results displayed on the working pane, choose the provider.
+1. In the search results, choose the provider.
 
 1. Choose your preferred plan, and then select **Subscribe**.
 
-The **Create** resource pane appears on the working pane.
+The pane for creating a resource appears.

articles/partner-solutions/mongo-db/create.md

@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ The **Basics** tab has three sections. In each section, enter the following valu
 
 1. Select **Next**.
 
-:::image type="content" source="media/create/basics-tab.png" alt-text="Screenshot of basic settings for creating a MongoDB Atlas organization on the Azure portal's working pane.":::
+:::image type="content" source="media/create/basics-tab.png" alt-text="Screenshot of basic settings for creating a MongoDB Atlas organization in the Azure portal.":::
 
 ### Tags tab (optional)
 

articles/partner-solutions/mongo-db/manage.md

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ This article describes how to manage the settings for MongoDB Atlas resources.
 
 [!INCLUDE [manage](../includes/manage.md)]
 
-:::image type="content" source="media/manage/resource-overview.png" alt-text="Screenshot of a MongoDB Atlas resource in the Azure portal with the overview displayed on the working pane." lightbox="media/manage/resource-overview.png":::
+:::image type="content" source="media/manage/resource-overview.png" alt-text="Screenshot of a MongoDB Atlas resource overview in the Azure portal." lightbox="media/manage/resource-overview.png":::
 
 The details under **Essentials** include:
 
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ To manage your resource, select the links next to corresponding details.
 
 To access your MongoDB Atlas organization, select **Go to MongoDB Atlas** on the working pane.
 
-:::image type="content" source="media/manage/set-password.png" alt-text="Screenshot of a MongoDB Atlas resource in the Azure portal with an overview displayed in the working pane. The Go to MongoDB Atlas link is emphasized.":::
+:::image type="content" source="media/manage/set-password.png" alt-text="Screenshot of a MongoDB Atlas resource overview in the Azure portal. The Go to MongoDB Atlas link is emphasized.":::
 
 ## Delete a MongoDB Atlas resource
 

articles/partner-solutions/mongo-db/troubleshoot.md

@@ -20,4 +20,4 @@ Begin by signing in to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com/).
 
 1. In the Azure portal, go to the resource.
 1. On the service menu, select **Help** > **New Support Request**.
-1. On the working pane, select the partner's link to log a support request.
+1. Select the partner's link to log a support request.