edit pass: record-calls

Author: ShawnJackson

articles/communication-services/how-tos/calling-sdk/includes/install-sdk/install-sdk-ios.md

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ You're not going to create tests during this quickstart. Feel free to clear the
 
 ### Install the package and dependencies by using CocoaPods
 
-1. Create a Podfile for your application, like this:
+1. Create a Podfile for your application, like this example:
 
     ```
     platform :ios, '13.0'
@@ -32,9 +32,9 @@ You're not going to create tests during this quickstart. Feel free to clear the
 
 ### Request access to the microphone
 
-To access the device's microphone, you need to update your app's information property list with `NSMicrophoneUsageDescription`. You set the associated value to a string that will be included in the dialog that the system uses to request access from the user.
+To access the device's microphone, you need to update your app's information property list by using `NSMicrophoneUsageDescription`. You set the associated value to a string that will be included in the dialog that the system uses to request access from the user.
 
-Right-click the `Info.plist` entry of the project tree, and then select **Open As** > **Source Code**. Add the following lines in the top-level `<dict>` section, and then save the file.
+Right-click the *Info.plist* entry of the project tree, and then select **Open As** > **Source Code**. Add the following lines in the top-level `<dict>` section, and then save the file.
 
 ```xml
 <key>NSMicrophoneUsageDescription</key>
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ public func fetchTokenSync(then onCompletion: TokenRefreshOnCompletion) {
 }
 ```
 
-Pass the `CommunicationTokenCredential` object that you created to `CallClient`, and set the display name.
+Pass the `CommunicationTokenCredential` object that you created to `CallClient`, and set the display name:
 
 ```swift
 self.callClient = CallClient()

articles/communication-services/how-tos/calling-sdk/includes/install-sdk/install-sdk-windows.md

@@ -5,22 +5,22 @@ ms.topic: include
 ms.date: 05/30/2023
 ms.author: jowang
 ---
-## Setting up
+## Set up
 
 ### Create the Visual Studio project
 
-For UWP app, in Visual Studio 2022, create a new `Blank App (Universal Windows)` project. After entering the project name, feel free to pick any Windows SDK later than `10.0.17763.0`.
+For a UWP app, in Visual Studio 2022, create a new **Blank App (Universal Windows)** project. After you enter the project name, feel free to choose any Windows SDK later than 10.0.17763.0.
 
-For a WinUI 3 app, create a new project with the `Blank App, Packaged (WinUI 3 in Desktop)` template to set up a single-page WinUI 3 app. [Windows App SDK version 1.3](/windows/apps/windows-app-sdk/stable-channel#version-13) or later is required.
+For a WinUI 3 app, create a new project with the **Blank App, Packaged (WinUI 3 in Desktop)** template to set up a single-page WinUI 3 app. [Windows App SDK version 1.3](/windows/apps/windows-app-sdk/stable-channel#version-13) or later is required.
 
-### Install the package and dependencies with NuGet Package Manager
+### Install the package and dependencies by using NuGet Package Manager
 
 The Calling SDK APIs and libraries are publicly available via a NuGet package.
 
 The following steps exemplify how to find, download, and install the Calling SDK NuGet package:
 
 1. Open NuGet Package Manager (**Tools** > **NuGet Package Manager** > **Manage NuGet Packages for Solution**).
-2. Select **Browse**, and then enter **Azure.Communication.Calling.WindowsClient** in the search box.
+2. Select **Browse**, and then enter `Azure.Communication.Calling.WindowsClient` in the search box.
 3. Make sure that the **Include prerelease** check box is selected.
 4. Select the `Azure.Communication.Calling.WindowsClient` package, and then select `Azure.Communication.Calling.WindowsClient` [1.4.0-beta.1](https://www.nuget.org/packages/Azure.Communication.Calling.WindowsClient/1.4.0-beta.1) or a newer version.
 5. Select the checkbox that corresponds to the Communication Services project on the right-side tab.

articles/communication-services/how-tos/calling-sdk/includes/record-calls/record-calls-ios.md

@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ let serverCallId = call.info.getServerCallId(){ (serverId, error) in }
 
 When you start recording from the server, the event `didChangeRecordingState` is triggered and the value of `recordingFeature.isRecordingActive` is `true`.
 
-Just like starting the call recording, if you want to stop the call recording, you need to get the `ServerCallId` and send it to your recording server so that it can stop the recording.
+Just like starting the call recording, if you want to stop the call recording, you need to get `ServerCallId` and send it to your recording server so that it can stop the recording:
 
 ```swift
 // Send serverCallId to your recording server to stop the call recording.