Merge pull request #295428 from DENKEN02MSFT/ADTFreshnessTop40_Row20

ADT Freshness - row 20

Author: JillGrant615

articles/digital-twins/media/includes/azure-digital-twins-explorer-portal-access.png

@@ -3,20 +3,20 @@ author: baanders
 ms.service: azure-digital-twins
 description: include for accessing Azure Digital Twins Explorer
 ms.topic: include
-ms.date: 10/03/2022
+ms.date: 02/27/2025
 ms.author: baanders
 ---
 
 Next, select the **Open Azure Digital Twins Explorer (preview)** button.
 
 :::image type="content" source="../articles/digital-twins/media/includes/azure-digital-twins-explorer-portal-access.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Azure portal showing the Overview page for an Azure Digital Twins instance. There's a highlight around the Open Azure Digital Twins Explorer (preview) button." lightbox="../articles/digital-twins/media/includes/azure-digital-twins-explorer-portal-access.png":::
 
-This will open Azure Digital Twins Explorer in a new tab. If this is your first time using the Explorer, you'll see a welcome modal summarizing its key features.
+This action opens Azure Digital Twins Explorer in a new tab. If this is your first time using the Explorer, you see a welcome modal summarizing its key features.
 
-Azure Digital Twins Explorer might automatically connect to your instance. If not, you'll see the following screen asking you to specify an Azure Digital Twins URL. (If you don't see this box on your screen, Azure Digital Twins Explorer has already completed this step automatically.)
+Azure Digital Twins Explorer might automatically connect to your instance. If not, you see the following screen asking you to specify an Azure Digital Twins URL. (If you don't see this box on your screen, Azure Digital Twins Explorer completed this step automatically.)
 
 :::image type="content" source="../articles/digital-twins/media/includes/azure-digital-twins-explorer-no-environment.png" alt-text="Screenshot of Azure Digital Twins Explorer. The Azure Digital Twins URL modal displays an empty editable box for the Azure Digital Twins URL." lightbox="../articles/digital-twins/media/includes/azure-digital-twins-explorer-no-environment.png":::
 
-If you see this box, enter *https://* into the field, followed by the host name of your instance (this can be found back on the instance's **Overview** page in the portal). These values together make up the instance URL. Select **Save** to connect to your instance.
+If you see this box, enter *https://* into the field, followed by the host name of your instance (this value can be found back on the instance's **Overview** page in the portal). These values together make up the instance URL. Select **Save** to connect to your instance.
 
 [!INCLUDE [digital-twins-explorer-private-note.md](digital-twins-explorer-private-note.md)]

articles/digital-twins/media/quickstart-azure-digital-twins-explorer/delete-instance.png

@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
 ---
  title: include file
- description: include file for creating an Azure Digital Twins instance in the quickstarts
+ description: Include file for creating an Azure Digital Twins instance in the quickstarts.
  services: digital-twins
  author: baanders
  ms.service: azure-digital-twins
  ms.topic: include
- ms.date: 5/9/2022
+ ms.date: 2/10/2025
  ms.author: baanders
  ms.custom: include file
 ---
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
 
 [!INCLUDE [digital-twins-setup-portal.md](digital-twins-setup-portal.md)]
 
-3. Fill in the fields on the **Basics** tab of setup, including your Subscription, Resource group, a Resource name for your new instance, and Region. Check the **Assign Azure Digital Twins Data Owner Role** box to give yourself permissions to manage data in the instance.
+3. Fill in the fields on the **Basics** tab of setup, including your subscription, resource group, a resource name for your new instance, and region. Check the **Assign Azure Digital Twins Data Owner Role** box to give yourself permissions to manage data in the instance.
 
     :::image type="content" source="../articles/digital-twins/media/quickstart-azure-digital-twins-explorer/create-azure-digital-twins-basics.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Create Resource process for Azure Digital Twins in the Azure portal. The described values are filled in.":::
 
@@ -23,11 +23,11 @@
     >
     > Common roles that meet this requirement are **Owner**, **Account admin**, or the combination of **User Access Administrator** and **Contributor**.  
 
-4. Select **Review + Create** to finish creating your instance.
+4. Select **Review + create** to finish creating your instance.
 
-5. You will see a summary page showing the details you've entered. Confirm and create the instance by selecting **Create**.
+5. You see a summary page showing the details you entered. Confirm and create the instance by selecting **Create**.
 
-This will take you to an Overview page tracking the deployment status of the instance.
+This action takes you to an Overview page tracking the deployment status of the instance.
 
 :::image type="content" source="../articles/digital-twins/media/quickstart-azure-digital-twins-explorer/deployment-in-progress.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the deployment page for Azure Digital Twins in the Azure portal. The page indicates that deployment is in progress.":::