Update data-box-cable-adapter.md

Author: LakshJ-MS

includes/data-box-cable-adapter.md

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 > [!IMPORTANT]
-> - Data Box Next Gen 120 TB and 525 TB devices use QSFP28 cables. For in house testing, the Q28-PC01 100G DAC QSFP28 Passive Direct Attach Copper Twinax cable was used. <br>
+> - Data Box Next Gen 120 TB and 525 TB devices use QSFP28 cable (for example, Q28-PC01 100G DAC QSFP28 Passive Direct Attach Copper Twinax cable). <br>
 > :::image type="content" source="media/data-box-cable-adapter/qsfp-sml.png" alt-text="Image highlighting the differences between the SFP+, SFP28, and QSFP28 cables." lightbox="media/data-box-cable-adapter/qsfp-lrg.png":::
->  - SFP+/SFP28 cables used with the original 80 TB devices can't be inserted directly into Data Box Next Gen devices without an appropriate adapter. Recommended QSFP to SFP+ adaptors are Mellanox MAM1Q00A-QSA or Cisco 100G QSFP28. <br>
+>  - To connect SFP+/SFP28 cables to Data Box Next Gen devices, use an appropriate adapter. For example, QSFP to SFP+ adapters include Mellanox MAM1Q00A-QSA or Cisco 100G QSFP28. <br>
 >  - To connect a QSFP28 device to an LC fiber backend using the Mellanox MAM1Q00A-QSA adapter or another compatible adapter, you need:
->    - Mellanox MAM1Q00A-QSA Adapter – Converts the QSFP28 port to an SFP+ or SFP28 slot.
->    - Compatible SFP+ or SFP28 Transceiver – Choose an optical transceiver that matches your LC fiber backbone (for example, SFP+ SR for multimode fiber or SFP+ LR for single-mode fiber).
->    - LC Fiber Cable – Connects the transceiver to your fiber backbone.  
+>    - A Mellanox MAM1Q00A-QSA Adapter which converts the QSFP28 port to an SFP+ or SFP28 slot.
+>    - A Compatible optical SFP+ or SFP28 Transceiver that matches your LC fiber backbone (for example, SFP+ SR for multimode fiber or SFP+ LR for single-mode fiber).
+>    - A LC Fiber Cable which connects the transceiver to your fiber backbone.