Half-hearted Acrolinx review. Many more preposition opportunies.

Author: v-dalc

articles/databox-online/azure-stack-edge-gpu-manage-access-power-connectivity-mode.md

@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ If you need to be able to connect to the Azure Stack Edge appliance from an outs
 
 ## Manage resource access
 
-To create your Azure Stack Edge / Data Box Gateway, IoT Hub, and Azure Storage resource, you need permissions as a contributor or higher at a resource group level. You also need the corresponding resource providers to be registered. For any operations that involve activation key and credentials, permissions to the Microsoft Graph API are also required. These are described in the following sections. 
+To create your Azure Stack Edge / Data Box Gateway, IoT Hub, and Azure Storage resource, you need permissions as a contributor or higher at a resource group level. You also need the corresponding resource providers to be registered. For any operations that involve activation key and credentials, permissions to the Microsoft Graph API are also required. These requirements are described in the following sections.
 
 ### Manage Microsoft Graph API permissions