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Author: timlt

articles/iot-develop/quickstart-send-telemetry-central.md

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 title: Quickstart - connect a device and send telemetry to Azure IoT Central
-description: "This quickstart shows device developers how to connect a device securely to Azure IoT Central. You use an Azure IoT device SDK for C, C#, Python, Node.js, or Java, to build a device client for Windows, Linux, or Raspberry Pi (Raspbian), then you connect and send telemetry."
+description: "This quickstart shows device developers how to connect a device securely to Azure IoT Central. You use an Azure IoT device SDK for C, C#, Python, Node.js, or Java, to build a device client for Windows, Linux, or Raspberry Pi (Raspbian). Then you connect and send telemetry."
 author: timlt
 ms.author: timlt
 ms.service: iot-develop
 ms.topic: quickstart
-ms.date: 04/27/2021
+ms.date: 10/13/20022
 ms.collection: embedded-developer, application-developer
 zone_pivot_groups: iot-develop-set1
 ms.custom: mode-other, contperf-fy22q2
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ ms.custom: mode-other, contperf-fy22q2
 ## View telemetry
 After the device connects to IoT Central, it begins sending telemetry. You can view the telemetry and other details about connected devices in IoT Central. 
 
-In IoT Central, select **Devices**, click your device name, then select the **Overview** tab. This view displays a graph of the temperatures from the two thermostat devices.
+In IoT Central, select **Devices**, select your device name, then select the **Overview** tab. This view displays a graph of the temperatures from the two thermostat devices.
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/quickstart-send-telemetry-central/iot-central-telemetry-output-overview.png" alt-text="IoT Central device telemetry overview":::
 

articles/iot-develop/quickstart-send-telemetry-iot-hub.md

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 title: Send device telemetry to Azure IoT Hub quickstart
-description: "This quickstart shows device developers how to connect a device securely to Azure IoT Hub. You use an Azure IoT device SDK for C, C#, Python, Node.js, or Java, to build a device client for Windows, Linux, or Raspberry Pi (Raspbian), then you connect and send telemetry."
+description: "This quickstart shows device developers how to connect a device securely to Azure IoT Hub. You use an Azure IoT device SDK for C, C#, Python, Node.js, or Java, to build a device client for Windows, Linux, or Raspberry Pi (Raspbian). Then you connect and send telemetry."
 author: timlt
 ms.author: timlt
 ms.service: iot-develop
 ms.topic: quickstart
-ms.date: 08/03/2021
+ms.date: 10/13/2022
 ms.collection: embedded-developer, application-developer
 zone_pivot_groups: iot-develop-set1
 ms.custom: mode-other, devx-track-azurecli, contperf-fy22q2