Removed a few "allows"

memildin · memildin · commit c43764474530 · 2021-11-09T10:12:54.000+02:00
diff --git a/articles/security-center/continuous-export.md b/articles/security-center/continuous-export.md
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ Continuous export can be configured and managed via the Microsoft Defender for C
 
 The API provides additional functionality not available from the Azure portal, for example:
 
-* **Greater volume** - The API allows you to create multiple export configurations on a single subscription. The **Continuous Export** page in Defender for Cloud's portal UI supports only one export configuration per subscription.
+* **Greater volume** - You can create multiple export configurations on a single subscription with the API. The **Continuous Export** page in Defender for Cloud's portal UI supports only one export configuration per subscription.
 
 * **Additional features** - The API offers additional parameters that aren't shown in the UI. For example, you can add tags to your automation resource as well as define your export based on a wider set of alert and recommendation properties than those offered in the **Continuous Export** page in Defender for Cloud's portal UI.
 
diff --git a/articles/security-center/defender-for-key-vault-introduction.md b/articles/security-center/defender-for-key-vault-introduction.md
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ Enable **Microsoft Defender for Key Vault** for Azure-native, advanced threat pr
 
 ## What are the benefits of Microsoft Defender for Key Vault?
 
-Microsoft Defender detects unusual and potentially harmful attempts to access or exploit Key Vault accounts. This layer of protection allows you to address threats without being a security expert, and without the need to manage third-party security monitoring systems.  
+Microsoft Defender detects unusual and potentially harmful attempts to access or exploit Key Vault accounts. This layer of protection helps you address threats even if you're not a security expert, and without the need to manage third-party security monitoring systems.  
 
 When anomalous activities occur, Defender shows alerts and optionally sends them via email to relevant members of your organization. These alerts include the details of the suspicious activity and recommendations on how to investigate and remediate threats. 
 
diff --git a/articles/security-center/defender-for-sql-on-machines-vulnerability-assessment.md b/articles/security-center/defender-for-sql-on-machines-vulnerability-assessment.md
@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ Metadata information about the connected machine is also collected. Specifically
 -	UUID (BIOS ID)
 -	SQL server name and underlying database names
 
-SQL Vulnerability Assessment allows you to specify the region where your data will be stored by choosing the Log Analytics workspace location. Microsoft may replicate to other regions for data resiliency, but Microsoft does not replicate data outside the geography.
+You can specify the region where your SQL Vulnerability Assessment data will be stored by choosing the Log Analytics workspace location. Microsoft may replicate to other regions for data resiliency, but Microsoft does not replicate data outside the geography.
 
 ## Next steps
 
diff --git a/articles/security-center/enhanced-security-features-overview.md b/articles/security-center/enhanced-security-features-overview.md
@@ -139,4 +139,4 @@ This article explained Defender for Cloud's pricing options. For related materia
 
 - [How to optimize your Azure workload costs](https://azure.microsoft.com/blog/how-to-optimize-your-azure-workload-costs/)
 - [Pricing details in your currency of choice, and according to your region](https://azure.microsoft.com/pricing/details/security-center/)
-- You may want to manage your costs and limit the amount of data collected for a solution by limiting it to a particular set of agents. [Solution targeting](../azure-monitor/insights/solution-targeting.md) allows you to apply a scope to the solution and target a subset of computers in the workspace. If you're using solution targeting, Defender for Cloud lists the workspace as not having a solution.
+- You may want to manage your costs and limit the amount of data collected for a solution by limiting it to a particular set of agents. Use [solution targeting](../azure-monitor/insights/solution-targeting.md) to apply a scope to the solution and target a subset of computers in the workspace. If you're using solution targeting, Defender for Cloud lists the workspace as not having a solution.
diff --git a/articles/security-center/quickstart-onboard-gcp.md b/articles/security-center/quickstart-onboard-gcp.md
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ With cloud workloads commonly spanning multiple cloud platforms, cloud security
 
 Microsoft Defender for Cloud protects workloads in Azure, Amazon Web Services (AWS), and Google Cloud Platform (GCP).
 
-Adding a GCP account to an Azure subscription allows Defender for Cloud to connect with GCP Security Command. Defender for Cloud can then protect your resources across both of these cloud environments and provide:
+Adding a GCP account to an Azure subscription connects Defender for Cloud with GCP Security Command. Defender for Cloud can then protect your resources across both of these cloud environments and provide:
 
 - Detection of security misconfigurations
 - A single view showing Defender for Cloud recommendations and GCP Security Command Center findings
