Merge pull request #210757 from Juliako/patch-18

Update release-notes.md

Author: LJSpiller

articles/azure-video-indexer/observed-people-featured-clothing.md

@@ -8,14 +8,9 @@ ms.author: juliako
 
 # People's featured clothing (preview)
 
-When indexing a video using Azure Video Indexer advanced video settings, you can view the featured clothing of an observed person. The featured clothing insight provides the following information: key items worn by individuals within a video and the specific time in which the clothing appears. 
+When indexing a video using Azure Video Indexer advanced video settings, you can view the featured clothing of an observed person. The insight provides information of key items worn by individuals within a video and the timestamp in which the clothing appears. This allows high-quality in-video contextual advertising, where relevant clothing ads are matched with the specific time within the video in which they are viewed.
 
-This insight enables scenarios like 
-
-* Placing more targeted ads
-* Creating a summary of the most interesting outfits appearing in the video
-
-The article discusses how to view the featured clothing insight and how the featured clothing images are ranked.
+This article discusses how to view the featured clothing insight and how the featured clothing images are ranked.
 
 ## Viewing featured clothing
 
@@ -26,7 +21,7 @@ The featured clothing insight is available when indexing your file by choosing t
 The featured clothing images are ranked based on some of the following factors: key moments of the video, general emotions from text or audio. The `id` property indicates the ranking index. For example, `"id": 1` signifies the most important featured clothing.
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> The featured clothing currently can be viewed only from the artifact file.  
+> The featured clothing currently can only be viewed from the artifact file.  
 
 1. In the right-upper corner, select to download the artifact zip file: **Download** -> **Artifact (ZIP)**
 1. Open `featuredclothing.zip`. 

articles/azure-video-indexer/release-notes.md

@@ -58,11 +58,13 @@ The [Azure Video Indexer website](https://vi.microsoft.com) session length was e
 
 ## July 2022
 
-### Featured clothing insight (preview)
+### The featured clothing insight (preview)
 
-When indexing a video using Azure Video Indexer advanced video settings, you can view the featured clothing of an observed person. The featured clothing insight provides information of key items worn by individuals within a video and the specific time in which the clothing appears. Based on this insight, you can enable more targeted ads placement.
+The featured clothing insight enables more targeted ads placement. 
 
-For details on how featured clothing images are ranked and how to view this insight, see [observed people featured clothing](observed-people-featured-clothing.md).
+The insight provides information of key items worn by individuals within a video and the timestamp in which the clothing appears. This allows high-quality in-video contextual advertising, where relevant clothing ads are matched with the specific time within the video in which they are viewed.
+
+To view the featured clothing of an observed person, you have to index the video using Azure Video Indexer advanced video settings. For details on how featured clothing images are ranked and how to view this insight, see [featured clothing](observed-people-featured-clothing.md).
 
 ## June 2022
 
@@ -302,7 +304,7 @@ Azure Video Indexer has a new [Developer Portal](https://api-portal.videoindexer
 
 SDK is now available to embed Azure Video Indexer's insights widget in your own service and customize its style and data. The SDK supports the standard Azure Video Indexer insights widget and a fully customizable insights widget. Code sample is available in [Azure Video Indexer GitHub repository](https://github.com/Azure-Samples/media-services-video-indexer/tree/master/Embedding%20widgets/widget-customization). With this advanced customization capabilities, solution developer can apply custom styling and bring customer’s own AI data and present that in the insight widget (with or without Azure Video Indexer insights).
 
-### Azure Video Indexer deployed in the US North Central , US West and Canada Central
+### Azure Video Indexer deployed in the US North Central, US West and Canada Central
 
 You can now create an Azure Video Indexer paid account in the US North Central, US West and Canada Central regions