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 title: Red Hat Enterprise Linux Extended Lifecycle Support
-description: Learn about adding Red Hat Enterprise Extended Lifecycle support add on
+description: Learn about adding Red Hat Enterprise Extended Lifecycle support add-on
 author: arukum
 ms.service: virtual-machines
 ms.subservice: redhat
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 ## Red Hat Enterprise Linux Extended Update Support
 
-Microsoft Azure follows the [Red Hat Enterprise Linux Lifecycle](https://access.redhat.com/support/policy/updates/errata/#:~:text=Red%20Hat%20Enterprise%20Linux%20Version%208%20and%209,Support%20Phases%20followed%20by%20an%20Extended%20Life%20Phase.). If you have valid Extend Update Support agreement from Red Hat or a Red Hat Partner you will continue to receive support on Azure, including our integrated customer support (subject to our [support terms](/troubleshoot/azure/cloud-services/support-linux-open-source-technology)).
+Microsoft Azure follows the [Red Hat Enterprise Linux Lifecycle](https://access.redhat.com/support/policy/updates/errata/#:~:text=Red%20Hat%20Enterprise%20Linux%20Version%208%20and%209,Support%20Phases%20followed%20by%20an%20Extended%20Life%20Phase.). If you have valid Extend Update Support agreement from Red Hat or a Red Hat Partner you continue to receive support on Azure, including our integrated customer support  (subject to our [support terms](/troubleshoot/azure/cloud-services/support-linux-open-source-technology)).
 
 ## Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6 Lifecycle
-Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6 will reach permanent end of maintenance (including extended support) on June 30, 2024. It is strongly recommended upgrading to Red Hat Enterprise Linux 7 with extended lifecycle support (ELS), 8 or 9. Check [FAQ: Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6 reaches End of Maintenance Phase and transitions to Extended Life Phase](https://access.redhat.com/articles/4665701) for more details on RHEL6 ELS.
+Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6 will reach permanent end of maintenance (including extended support) on June 30, 2024. It is recommended upgrading to Red Hat Enterprise Linux 7 with extended lifecycle support (ELS), 8 or 9. Check [FAQ: Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6 reaches End of Maintenance Phase and transitions to Extended Life Phase](https://access.redhat.com/articles/4665701) for more details on RHEL6 ELS.
 
 ## Red Hat Enterprise Linux 7 Lifecycle
-Starting June 30, 2024, Red Hat Enterprise Linux 7 will reach the end of maintenance support 2 phase. The maintenance phase is followed by the Extended Life Phase. As Red Hat Enterprise Linux 7 transitions out of the Full/Maintenance Phases, it's strongly recommended upgrading to Red Hat Enterprise Linux 8 or 9. If customers must stay on Red Hat Enterprise Linux 7, it's recommended to add the Red Hat Enterprise Linux Extended Life Cycle Support (ELS) Add-On.
+Starting June 30, 2024, Red Hat Enterprise Linux 7 will reach the end of maintenance support 2 phase. The maintenance phase is followed by the Extended Life Phase. As Red Hat Enterprise Linux 7 transitions out of the Full/Maintenance Phases, it's recommended upgrading to Red Hat Enterprise Linux 8 or 9. If customers must stay on Red Hat Enterprise Linux 7, it's recommended to add the Red Hat Enterprise Linux Extended Life Cycle Support (ELS) Add-On.
 
 ## Steps to add Extended Lifecycle Support thru Azure Marketplace
-1. ELS can be purchased thru the following Azure marketplace offers: 
+1. "ELS" can be purchased thru the following Azure marketplace offers: 
     - For customers outside of EMEA Regions - [Red Hat Enterprise Linux 7 Extended Life Cycle Support (ELS) by Red Hat Inc](https://azuremarketplace.microsoft.com/en-us/marketplace/apps/redhat.rh-rhel-els-7?tab=Overview) 
     - For customers in EMEA Regions - [Red Hat Enterprise Linux 7 Extended Life Cycle Support (ELS) by Red Hat Limited](https://azuremarketplace.microsoft.com/en-us/marketplace/apps/redhat-limited.rh-rhel-els-7?tab=Overview) 
-1. After purchasing the SaaS offer from Marketplace, implement the steps outlined in [Enabling Red Hat Enterprise Linux 7 Extended Life-cycle Support via Cloud Marketplaces](https://access.redhat.com/articles/rhel-7-els-on-cloud) to configure the ELS add-on repos in Azure RHEL VM.
+1. "After" purchasing the SaaS offer from Marketplace, implement the steps outlined in [Enabling Red Hat Enterprise Linux 7 Extended Life-cycle Support via Cloud Marketplaces](https://access.redhat.com/articles/rhel-7-els-on-cloud) to configure the ELS add-on repos in Azure RHEL Virtual Machine.
 
 > [!Note]
 > In Japan ELS is available thru the Azure Marketplace via private offer. Please contact Red Hat support directly to request the private offer, alternatively open a support ticket through Microsoft support.
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 RIs (Reserved Instances) are not available.
 
 #### What if I don’t have a Red Hat account?
-An account will be linked and created if necessary, during the purchasing and provisioning process. 
+An account is linked and created if necessary, during the purchasing and provisioning process. 
 
 #### I am running Red Hat Enterprise Linux 7 and can’t migrate to a later version now. What options do I have?
 Continue to run Red Hat Enterprise Linux 7 and purchase the Extended Life Cycle Support (ELS) Add-On to continue to receive limited software maintenance and technical support. Migrate to Red Hat Enterprise Linux 8 or 9 as soon as you can.
 
 #### Where is the ELS content pulled from
-Content comes from the RHT CDN
+Content comes from the Red Hat CDN
 
-#### Is the offer available through CSP?
-Select CSPs may be enabled for this offer per request / validation of Red Hat partner program membership. CSP customers can purchase ELS directly from Red Hat as well. Please contact Red Hat directly.[Contact Red Hat](https://www.redhat.com/en/contact) 
+#### Is the offer available through Cloud Service Provider(CSP)?
+Select CSPs may be enabled for this offer per request / validation of Red Hat partner program membership. CSP customers can purchase ELS directly from Red Hat as well. Contact Red Hat directly.[Contact Red Hat](https://www.redhat.com/en/contact) 
 
 #### Is the RHEL 7 ELS offer available in GovCloud?
-SaaS offers are not available in GovCloud. Please contact Red Hat directly [Contact Red Hat](https://www.redhat.com/en/contact) 
+SaaS offers are not available in GovCloud. Contact Red Hat directly [Contact Red Hat](https://www.redhat.com/en/contact) 
 
 #### Is this offer Microsoft Azure Consumption Commitment (MACC) eligible?
 Yes
 
-#### Can I use this offer for any RHEL offer / image deployed in marketplace? (E.g. custom image, CIS image, subscription through reseller, etc.) 
+#### Can I use this offer for any RHEL offer / image deployed in marketplace? (For example, custom image, CIS image, subscription through reseller, etc.) 
 Yes
 
 #### What about RHEL 7 systems without ELS. Will they stop functioning? 
 They continue to run but will no longer receive security updates and support, leaving customers at risk. Azure customer support will still assist customers with Azure specific issues but may not be able to assist customers further or refer them to Red Hat without active ELS add-on.
 [FAQ: Red Hat Enterprise Linux 7 reaches End of Maintenance Phase and transitions to Extended Life Phase - Red Hat Customer Portal] (https://access.redhat.com/articles/7005471)
 
 #### Why is the SaaS offer asking for Resource Group (RG) information when purchasing? 
-Azure provides four levels of management: management groups, subscriptions, resource groups, and resources. Resource Groups are used to [organize your Azure resources more effectively](https://learn.microsoft.com/en-us/azure/cloud-adoption-framework/ready/azure-setup-guide/organize-resources). If you are applying the RHEL 7 ELS offer to VM’s within a Resource Group, Azure will prompt you for the name of the Resource Group. The offer will be applied to each of the RHEL 7 ELS VM’s within it.
+Azure provides four levels of management: management groups, subscriptions, resource groups, and resources. Resource Groups are used to [organize your Azure resources more effectively](https://learn.microsoft.com/en-us/azure/cloud-adoption-framework/ready/azure-setup-guide/organize-resources). If you are applying the RHEL 7 ELS offer to VM’s within a Resource Group, Azure prompts you for the name of the Resource Group. The offer is applied to each of the RHEL 7 ELS VM’s within it.