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articles/backup/backup-azure-backup-sql.md

@@ -87,10 +87,9 @@ To protect SQL Server databases in Azure, first create a backup policy:
     > [!TIP]
     > For quick recovery, keep a few short-term recovery points on your disk. These recovery points are used for operational recovery. Azure serves as a good offsite location, providing higher SLAs and guaranteed availability.
     >
+    > Use DPM to schedule Azure Backups after the local disk backups finish. When you follow this practice, the latest disk backup is copied to Azure.
     >
 
-    **Best practice**: Use DPM to schedule Azure Backups after the local disk backups finish. When you follow this practice, the latest disk backup is copied to Azure.
-
 1. Choose the retention policy schedule. For more information about how the retention policy works, see [Use Azure Backup to replace your tape infrastructure](backup-azure-backup-cloud-as-tape.md).
 
     ![Choose a retention policy](./media/backup-azure-backup-sql/pg-retentionschedule.png)

articles/backup/backup-azure-sql-mabs.md

@@ -78,9 +78,9 @@ To protect SQL Server databases in Azure, first create a backup policy:
     > [!TIP]
     > For quick recovery, keep a few short-term recovery points on your disk. These recovery points are used for operational recovery. Azure serves as a good offsite location, providing higher SLAs and guaranteed availability.
     >
+    > Use Data Protection Manager (DPM) to schedule Azure Backups after the local disk backups finish. When you follow this practice, the latest disk backup is copied to Azure.
     >
 
-    **Best practice**: Use Data Protection Manager (DPM) to schedule Azure Backups after the local disk backups finish. When you follow this practice, the latest disk backup is copied to Azure.
 
 1. Choose the retention policy schedule. For more information about how the retention policy works, see [Use Azure Backup to replace your tape infrastructure](backup-azure-backup-cloud-as-tape.md).
 

articles/backup/backup-mabs-system-state-and-bmr.md

@@ -102,8 +102,6 @@ When the backup finishes, the file is transferred to the Backup Server computer.
 
 ## Back up system state and bare metal
 
-Set up a protection group as described in [Deploy protection groups](https://docs.microsoft.com/system-center/dpm/create-dpm-protection-groups). Remember that you can't protect BMR and system state for the same computer in different groups. Also, when you select BMR, system state is automatically enabled.
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 To back up system state and bare metal:
 
 1. To open the Create New Protection Group Wizard, in the Backup Server Administrator Console, select **Protection** > **Actions** > **Create Protection Group**.
@@ -181,7 +179,8 @@ To run recovery on the Backup Server computer:
     * You can create and split a clone to make it writable.
     * The protected computer and Backup Server computer are connected to the same network.
 
-1. Set up notification options. On the **Confirmation** page, select **Recover**.
+1. Set up notification options. 
+1. On the **Confirmation** page, select **Recover**.
 
 To set up the share location:
 
@@ -224,7 +223,8 @@ To run recovery in Backup Server:
     * You can create and split a clone to make it writable. 
     * The protected computer and Backup Server server are connected to the same network.
 
-1. Set up notification options. On the **Confirmation** page, select **Recover**.
+1. Set up notification options. 
+1. On the **Confirmation** page, select **Recover**.
 
 To run Windows Server Backup: