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articles/purview/tutorial-azure-purview-tools.md

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-title: Learn about Microsoft Purview open-source tools and utilities
-description:  This tutorial lists various tools and utilities available in Microsoft Purview and discusses their usage.
+title: Learn about open-source tools and utilities for Microsoft Purview governance services
+description:  This tutorial lists various tools and utilities available for Microsoft Purview governance services and discusses their usage.
 author: abandyop
 ms.author: arindamba
 ms.service: purview
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 # Customer Intent: As a Microsoft Purview administrator, I want to kickstart and be up and running with Microsoft Purview service in a matter of minutes; additionally, I want to perform and set up automations, batch-mode API executions and scripts that help me run Microsoft Purview smoothly and effectively for the long-term on a regular basis.
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-# Microsoft Purview open-source tools and utilities
+# Microsoft Purview governance services open-source tools and utilities
 
-This article lists several open-source tools and utilities (command-line, python, and PowerShell interfaces) that help you get started quickly on Microsoft Purview service in a matter of minutes! These tools have been authored & developed by collective effort of the Microsoft Purview Product Group and the open-source community. The objective of such tools is to make learning, starting up, regular usage, and long-term adoption of Microsoft Purview breezy and super fast.
+This article lists several open-source tools and utilities (command-line, python, and PowerShell interfaces) that help you get started quickly with Microsoft Purview governance services, like Microsoft Purview Data Map, Data Catalog, and Data Estate Insights in a matter of minutes! These tools have been authored & developed by collective effort of the Microsoft Purview Product Group and the open-source community. The objective of such tools is to make learning, starting up, regular usage, and long-term adoption of Microsoft Purview fast and easy.
 
 ### Intended audience
 
 - Microsoft Purview community including customers, developers, ISVs, partners, evangelists, and enthusiasts. 
 
-- Microsoft Purview catalog is based on [Apache Atlas](https://atlas.apache.org/) and extends full support for Apache Atlas APIs. We welcome Apache Atlas community, enthusiasts, and developers to wholeheartedly build on and evangelize Microsoft Purview.
+- The Microsoft Purview Data Catalog is based on [Apache Atlas](https://atlas.apache.org/) and extends full support for Apache Atlas APIs. We welcome Apache Atlas community, enthusiasts, and developers to wholeheartedly build on and evangelize Microsoft Purview.
 
 ### Microsoft Purview customer journey stages
 
-- *Microsoft Purview Learners*: Learners who are starting fresh with Microsoft Purview service and are keen to understand and explore how a multi-cloud unified data governance solution works. A section of learners includes users who want to compare and contrast Microsoft Purview with other competing solutions in the data governance market and try it before adopting for long-term usage.
+- *Microsoft Purview Learners*: Learners who are starting fresh with Microsoft Purview governance services and are keen to understand and explore how a multi-cloud unified data governance solution works. A section of learners includes users who want to compare and contrast Microsoft Purview with other competing solutions in the data governance market and try it before adopting for long-term usage.
 
-- *Microsoft Purview Innovators*: Innovators who are keen to understand existing and latest features, ideate, and conceptualize features upcoming on Microsoft Purview. They are adept at building and developing solutions for customers, and have futuristic forward-looking ideas for the next-gen cutting-edge data governance product.
+- *Microsoft Purview Innovators*: Innovators who are keen to understand existing and latest features, ideate, and conceptualize features upcoming on Microsoft Purview. They're adept at building and developing solutions for customers, and have futuristic forward-looking ideas for the next-gen cutting-edge data governance product.
 
 - *Microsoft Purview Enthusiasts/Evangelists*: Enthusiasts who are a combination of Learners and Innovators. They have developed solid understanding and knowledge of Microsoft Purview, hence, are upbeat about adoption of Microsoft Purview. They can help evangelize Microsoft Purview as a service and educate several other Microsoft Purview users and probable customers across the globe.
 
-- *Microsoft Purview Adopters*: Adopters who have migrated from starting up and exploring Microsoft Purview and are smoothly using Microsoft Purview for more than a few months.
+- *Microsoft Purview Adopters*: Adopters who have migrated from starting up and exploring the Microsoft Purview governance portal and are smoothly using Microsoft Purview for more than a few months.
 
-- *Microsoft Purview Long-Term Regular Users*: Long-term users who have been using Microsoft Purview for more than one year and are now confident and comfortable using most advanced Microsoft Purview use cases on the Azure portal and Microsoft Purview governance portal; furthermore they have near perfect knowledge and awareness of the Microsoft Purview REST APIs and the other use cases supported via Microsoft Purview APIs.
+- *Microsoft Purview Long-Term Regular Users*: Long-term users who have been using the Microsoft Purview governance portal for more than one year and are now confident and comfortable using most advanced use cases on the Azure portal and Microsoft Purview governance portal; furthermore they have near perfect knowledge and awareness of the Microsoft Purview REST APIs and the other use cases supported via Microsoft Purview APIs.
 
 
 ## Microsoft Purview open-source tools and utilities list
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     - **Recommended customer journey stages**: *Learners, Innovators, Enthusiasts, Adopters, Long-Term Regular Users*
     - **Description**: This utility is based on and covers the entire set of [Microsoft Purview REST API Reference](/rest/api/purview/) Microsoft Docs. [Download & Install from PowerShell Gallery](https://aka.ms/purview-api-ps). It helps you execute all the documented Microsoft Purview REST APIs through a breezy fast and easy to use PowerShell interface. Use and automate Microsoft Purview APIs for regular and long-term usage via command-line and scripted methods. This is an alternative for customers looking to do bulk tasks in automated manner, batch-mode, or scheduled cron jobs; as against the GUI method of using the Azure portal and Microsoft Purview governance portal. Detailed documentation, sample usage guide, self-help, and examples are available on [GitHub:Azure-Purview-API-PowerShell](https://github.com/Azure/Azure-Purview-API-PowerShell).
 
-1. [Purview-Starter-Kit](https://aka.ms/PurviewKickstart)
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-    - **Recommended customer journey stages**: *Learners, Innovators, Enthusiasts*
-    - **Description**: PowerShell script to perform initial setup of Microsoft Purview account. Useful for anyone looking to set up several fresh new Microsoft Purview account(s) in less than 5 minutes!
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 1. [Microsoft Purview Lab](https://aka.ms/purviewlab)
 
     - **Recommended customer journey stages**: *Learners, Innovators, Enthusiasts*
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 1. [Microsoft Purview Demo](https://aka.ms/pvdemo)
 
     - **Recommended customer journey stages**: *Learners, Innovators, Enthusiasts*
-    - **Description**: An Azure Resource Manager (ARM) template-based tool to automatically set up and deploy fresh new Microsoft Purview account quickly and securely at the issue of just one command. It is similar to [Purview-Starter-Kit](https://aka.ms/PurviewKickstart), the extra feature being it deploys a few more pre-configured data sources - Azure SQL Database, Azure Data Lake Storage Gen2 Account, Azure Data Factory, Azure Synapse Analytics Workspace
+    - **Description**: An Azure Resource Manager (ARM) template-based tool to automatically set up and deploy fresh new Microsoft Purview account quickly and securely at the issue of just one command. It's similar to [Purview-Starter-Kit](https://aka.ms/PurviewKickstart), the extra feature being it deploys a few more pre-configured data sources - Azure SQL Database, Azure Data Lake Storage Gen2 Account, Azure Data Factory, Azure Synapse Analytics Workspace
 
 1. [PyApacheAtlas: Interface between Microsoft Purview and Apache Atlas](https://github.com/wjohnson/pyapacheatlas) using Atlas APIs
 
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 ## Feedback and disclaimer
 
-None of the tools come with an express warranty from Microsoft verifying their efficacy or guarantees of functionality. They are certified to be free of any malicious activity or viruses, and guaranteed to not collect any private or sensitive data.
+None of the tools come with an express warranty from Microsoft verifying their efficacy or guarantees of functionality. They're certified to be free of any malicious activity or viruses, and guaranteed to not collect any private or sensitive data.
 
 For feedback or questions about efficacy and functionality during usage, contact the respective tool owners and authors on the contact details mentioned in the respective GitHub repo.