Merge pull request #104287 from stevemunk1/SM-about-AM-updates

Minor updates to the about Azure Maps article

Author: Court72

articles/azure-maps/about-azure-maps.md

@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ For more details, read the [Geolocation service documentation](/rest/api/maps/ge
 
 ### Render service
 
-[Render service V2](/rest/api/maps/render-v2) introduces a new version of the [Get Map Tile V2 API](/rest/api/maps/render-v2/get-map-tile) that supports using Azure Maps tiles not only in the Azure Maps SDKs but other map controls as well. It includes raster and vector tile formats, 256x256 or 512x512 (where applicable) tile sizes and numerous map types such as road, weather, contour, or map tiles created using Azure Maps Creator. For a complete list see [TilesetID](/rest/api/maps/render-v2/get-map-tile#tilesetid) in the REST API documentation. It's recommended that you use Render service V2 instead of Render service V1. You are required to display the appropriate copyright attribution on the map anytime you use the Azure Maps Render service V2, either as basemaps or layers, in any third-party map control. For more information see [How to use the Get Map Attribution API](how-to-show-attribution.md).
+[Render service V2](/rest/api/maps/render-v2) introduces a new version of the [Get Map Tile V2 API](/rest/api/maps/render-v2/get-map-tile) that supports using Azure Maps tiles not only in the Azure Maps SDKs but other map controls as well. It includes raster and vector tile formats, 256x256 or 512x512 (where applicable) tile sizes and numerous map types such as road, weather, contour, or map tiles created using Azure Maps Creator. For a complete list, see [TilesetID](/rest/api/maps/render-v2/get-map-tile#tilesetid) in the REST API documentation. It's recommended that you use Render service V2 instead of Render service V1. You're required to display the appropriate copyright attribution on the map anytime you use the Azure Maps Render service V2, either as basemaps or layers, in any third-party map control. For more information, see [How to use the Get Map Attribution API](how-to-show-attribution.md).
 
 :::image type="content" source="./media/about-azure-maps/intro_map.png" border="false" alt-text="Example of a map from the Render service V2":::
 
@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ For more information, see the [Traffic service documentation](/rest/api/maps/tra
 
 ### Weather services
 
-Weather services offer APIs that developers can use to retrieve weather information for a particular location. The information contains details such as observation date and time, brief description of the weather conditions, weather icon, precipitation indicator flags, temperature, and wind speed information. Additional details such as RealFeel™ Temperature and UV index are also returned.
+Weather services offer APIs that developers can use to retrieve weather information for a particular location. The information contains details such as observation date and time, brief description of the weather conditions, weather icon, precipitation indicator flags, temperature, and wind speed information. Other details such as RealFeel™ Temperature and UV index are also returned.
 
 Developers can use the [Get Weather along route API](/rest/api/maps/weather/getweatheralongroute) to retrieve weather information along a particular route. Also, the service supports the generation of weather notifications for waypoints that are affected by weather hazards, such as flooding or heavy rain.