PR review edit, Microsoft style

Author: ktoliver

articles/purview/register-scan-hive-metastore-source.md

@@ -135,11 +135,9 @@ Follow the steps below to scan Hive Metastore databases to automatically identif
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        > [!NOTE]
-       > When you copy the URL from *hive-site.xml*, be sure you remove `amp;` from the string or the scan will fail.
-       > To this URL, append the path to the location where SSL certificate is placed on your VM. The SSL certificate can be downloaded from [here](../mysql/howto-configure-ssl.md).
-       > Remember to change the Windows path separator character from "\" to "/". For example: If your MariaDB JAR file is "C:\mariadb-jdbc.jar" you should convert it to "C:/mariadb-jdbc.jar". Same applies to the Metastore JDBC URL "sslCA" parameter.  Change it from "D:\Drivers\SSLCert\BaltimoreCyberTrustRoot.crt.pem" to "D:/Drivers/SSLCert/BaltimoreCyberTrustRoot.crt.pem"
+       > When you copy the URL from *hive-site.xml*, be sure you remove `amp;` from the string or the scan will fail. To this URL, append the path to the location where the SSL certificate is placed on your VM. You can [download the SSL certificate](../mysql/howto-configure-ssl.md). Remember to change the Windows path separator character from `\` to `/`. For example: If your MariaDB JAR file is *C:\mariadb-jdbc.jar*, change it to *C:/mariadb-jdbc.jar*. Make the same change to the Metastore JDBC URL `sslCA` parameter: Change it from *D:\Drivers\SSLCert\BaltimoreCyberTrustRoot.crt.pem* to *D:/Drivers/SSLCert/BaltimoreCyberTrustRoot.crt.pem*.
 
-       The **Metastore JDBC URL** will finally look like:
+       The **Metastore JDBC URL** will look like this example:
 
        `jdbc:mariadb://consolidated-westus2-prod-metastore-addl-1.mysql.database.azure.com:3306/organization1829255636414785?trustServerCertificate=true&useSSL=true&sslCA=D:/Drivers/SSLCert/BaltimoreCyberTrustRoot.crt.pem`