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Author: ChJenk

articles/virtual-desktop/manage-resources-using-ui.md

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 # Tutorial: Deploy a management tool
 
-The management tool provides a user interface (UI) for managing Microsoft Virtual Desktop Preview resources. In this tutorial, you'll learn how to deploy and use the management tool.
-
-This tutorial assumes:
-
-- You've already created a virtual machine (VM). If not, see [Prepare and customize a master VHD image](set-up-customize-master-image.md#create-a-vm).
-- You have elevated access on the VM, whether it's provisioned in Azure or Hyper-V Manager. If not, see [Elevate access to manage all Azure subscription and management groups](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/role-based-access-control/elevate-access-global-admin).
+The management tool provides a user interface (UI) for managing Microsoft Virtual Desktop Preview resources. In this tutorial, you'll learn how to deploy and connect to the management tool.
 
 >[!NOTE]
 >These instructions are for a Windows Virtual Desktop Preview-specific configuration that can be used with your organization's existing processes.
@@ -29,51 +24,45 @@ This management tool is a sample. Microsoft will provide important security and
 
 ## What you need to run the Azure Resource Manager template
 
-Here's what you need before deploying the Azure Resource Manager template:
+Before deploying the Azure Resource Manager template, you will need an Azure Active Directory user account that:
 
-- AAD credentials without Azure Multi-Factor Authentication (MFA) enabled
-- Permission for the AAD credentials to create resources in your Azure subscription.
-- Your Windows Virtual Desktop credentials
+- Has Azure Multi-Factor Authentication (MFA) disabled
+- Has permission to create resources in your Azure subscription
+- Has permissions to read your Windows Virtual Desktop tenant
 
 ## Run the Azure Resource Manager template to provision the management UI
 
-Before you start, ensure the server and client apps have consent by visiting [Windows Virtual Desktop Consent Page](https://rdweb.wvd.microsoft.com) for the AAD represented.
+Before you start, ensure the server and client apps have consent by visiting the [Windows Virtual Desktop Consent Page](https://rdweb.wvd.microsoft.com) for the Azure Active Directory (AAD) represented.
 
-Use the following instructions to install the Azure Resource Management template.
+Use the following instructions to deploy the Azure Resource Management template.
 
 1. Go to the [GitHub Azure RDS-Templates page](https://github.com/Azure/RDS-Templates/tree/master/wvd-templates/wvd-management-ux/deploy).
 2. Deploy the template to Azure.
     - If you're deploying in an Enterprise subscription, scroll down and select **Deploy to Azure**. See [Guidance for template parameters](#guidance-for-template-parameters).
     - If you're deploying in a Cloud Solution Provider subscription, follow these instructions to deploy to Azure:
         1. Scroll down and right-click **Deploy to Azure**, then select **Copy Link Location**.
         2. Open a text editor like Notepad and paste the link there.
-        3. Right after “https://portal.azure.com/” and before the hashtag (#) enter an at sign (@) followed by the tenant domain name. Here's an example of the format: https://portal.azure.com/@Contoso.onmicrosoft.com#create/.
+        3. Right after <https://portal.azure.com/> and before the hashtag (#) enter an at sign (@) followed by the tenant domain name. Here's an example of the format: <https://portal.azure.com/@Contoso.onmicrosoft.com#create/>.
         4. Sign in to the Azure portal as a user with Admin/Contributor permissions to the Cloud Solution Provider subscription.
         5. Paste the link you copied to the text editor into the address bar.
 
 ### Guidance for template parameters
-Below is guidance for parameters you'll enter while configuring the tool.
+Here's how to enter parameters for configuring the tool.
 
-- Here's an example of an RD broker URL: https://rdbroker.wvd.microsoft.com/
-- Here's an example  of a resource URL: https://mrs-prod.ame.gbl/mrs-RDInfra-prod
-- Use AAD credentials with MFA disabled for Azure Login ID and password.
-- Use a unique name for the app; for example, Apr3UX.
+- This is the RD broker URL:  <https://rdbroker.wvd.microsoft.com/>
+- This is the resource URL:  <https://mrs-prod.ame.gbl/mrs-RDInfra-prod>
+- Use AAD credentials with MFA disabled for Azure Login ID and password. See [What you need to run the Azure Resource Manager template](#what-you-need-to-run-the-azure-resource-manager-template).
+- Use a unique name for the application that will be registered in your Azure Active Directory for the management tool; for example, Apr3UX.
 
-## Using the management tool
+## Use the management tool
 
-After the GitHub Azure Resource Manager template completes, you'll find a resource group containing two app services along with one app service plan on the Azure portal.
+After the GitHub Azure Resource Manager template completes, you'll find a resource group containing two app services along with one app service plan in the Azure portal.
 
 Use the following instructions to launch the tool.
 
-1. Select appservice with the name you provided in the template (for example, Apr3UX) and navigate to the URL associated with it; for example,  https://rdmimgmtweb-210520190304.azurewebsites.net.
+1. Select appservice with the name you provided in the template (for example, Apr3UX) and navigate to the URL associated with it; for example,  <https://rdmimgmtweb-210520190304.azurewebsites.net>.
 2. Sign in using your Windows Virtual Desktop credentials.
 3. When prompted to choose a Tenant Group, select **Default Tenant Group** from the drop-down list.
 
-Note: If you have a custom Tenant Group, enter the name manually instead of choosing from the drop-down list.
-
-## Next steps
-
-In this tutorial, you learned how to deploy the management tool. To learn how to manage app groups using PowerShell, see the Manage app groups tutorial for Windows Virtual Desktop Preview.
-
-> [!div class="nextstepaction"]
-> [Manage app groups tutorial](./manage-app-groups.md)
+> [!NOTE]
+> If you have a custom Tenant Group, enter the name manually instead of choosing from the drop-down list.

articles/virtual-desktop/set-up-service-alerts.md

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 # Tutorial: Set up service alerts
 
-As with any other service on Azure, you can monitor Windows Virtual Desktop with Azure Service Health. You can set up Azure Service Health to send you notifications on service issues and you can access the notifications in the Azure portal where the service alerts are set up. Different types of alerts can be set up (for example, email or sms) and you can set them up to notify you in a timely manner.  
+As with any other service on Azure, you can monitor Windows Virtual Desktop with Azure Service Health. You can set up Azure Service Health to send you notifications on service issues and you can access the notifications in the Azure portal where the service alerts are set up. Different types of alerts can be set up (for example, email or SMS) and you can set them up to notify you in a timely manner.  
 
 ## Service alert recommendations
 
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ Learn how to configure service alerts with Azure Service Health here:
 
 ## Next steps
 
-Once you've set up alerts, use the following instructions if you receive an alert that requires you to troubleshoot Windows Virtual Desktop issues.
+Once you've set up alerts, you can troubleshoot issues that require your attention. See the following articles to learn how to troubleshoot and address issues.
 
 - For an overview on troubleshooting Windows Virtual Desktop and the escalation tracks, see [Troubleshooting overview, feedback, and support](troubleshoot-set-up-overview.md).
 - To use the diagnostics feature to identify issues, see [Identify issues with the diagnostics feature](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/virtual-desktop/diagnostics-role-service)