Update security-best-practices.md

Author: JJJessieWang

articles/batch/security-best-practices.md

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 title: Batch security and compliance best practices
 description: Learn best practices and useful tips for enhancing security with your Azure Batch solutions.
-ms.date: 08/08/2024
+ms.date: 11/19/2024
 ms.topic: conceptual
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 ### Batch pool compute nodes
 
-The Batch service communicates with a Batch node agent that runs on each node in the pool. For example, the service instructs the node agent to run a task, stop a task, or get the files for a task. Communication with the node agent is enabled by one or more load balancers, the number of which depends on the number of nodes in a pool. The load balancer forwards the communication to the desired node, with each node being addressed by a unique port number. By default, load balancers have public IP addresses associated with them. You can also remotely access pool nodes via RDP or SSH, see [Configure remote access to compute nodes in an Azure Batch pool](azure/batch/pool-endpoint-configuration).
+The Batch service communicates with a Batch node agent that runs on each node in the pool. For example, the service instructs the node agent to run a task, stop a task, or get the files for a task. Communication with the node agent is enabled by one or more load balancers, the number of which depends on the number of nodes in a pool. The load balancer forwards the communication to the desired node, with each node being addressed by a unique port number. By default, load balancers have public IP addresses associated with them. You can also remotely access pool nodes via RDP or SSH, see [Configure remote access to compute nodes in an Azure Batch pool](pool-endpoint-configuration).
 
 #### Batch compute node OS
 
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 #### Limit remote access to pool nodes
 
-Pools created using API version earlier than `2024-07-01`, Batch by default allows a node user with network connectivity to connect externally to a compute node in a Batch pool by using RDP or SSH. You can limit the remote access by creating you pools using API with  version `2024-07-01` or later.
+For pools created using an API version earlier than 2024-07-01, Batch by default allows a node user with network connectivity to connect externally to a compute node in a Batch pool by using RDP or SSH. You can limit the remote access by creating you pools using an API with version 2024-07-01 or later.
 
 To limit remote access to nodes in pools created by API with version earlier than `2024-07-01`, use one of the following methods: