Merge pull request #112237 from stevemunk/power-bi-visual-add-3d-column-layer

Grammar improvements in power-bi-visual-add-3d-column-layer.md

Author: Jak-MS

articles/azure-maps/power-bi-visual-add-3d-column-layer.md

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 title: Add a 3D column layer to an Azure Maps Power BI visual
 titleSuffix: Microsoft Azure Maps
-description: In this article, you will learn how to use the 3D column layer in an Azure Maps Power BI visual.
+description: This article demonstrates how to use the 3D column layer in an Azure Maps Power BI visual.
 author: deniseatmicrosoft
 ms.author: limingchen
 ms.date: 11/29/2021
@@ -12,34 +12,34 @@ services: azure-maps
 
 # Add a 3D column layer
 
-The **3D column layer** is useful for taking data to the next dimension by allowing visualization of location data as 3D cylinders on the map. Similar to the bubble layer, the 3D column chart can easily visualize two metrics at the same time using color and relative height. In order for the columns to have height, a measure needs to be added to the **Size** bucket of the **Fields** pane. If a measure is not provided, columns with no height show as flat squares or circles depending on the **Shape** option.
+The **3D column layer** is useful for taking data to the next dimension by allowing visualization of location data as 3D cylinders on the map. Similar to the bubble layer, the 3D column chart can easily visualize two metrics at the same time using color and relative height. In order for the columns to have height, a measure needs to be added to the **Size** bucket of the **Fields** pane. If a measure isn't provided, columns with no height show as flat squares or circles depending on the **Shape** option.
 
 :::image type="content" source="./media/power-bi-visual/3d-column-layer-styled.png" alt-text="A map displaying point data using the 3D column layer":::
 
 Users can tilt and rotate the map to view your data from different perspectives. The map can be tilted or pitched using one of the following methods.
 
-- Turn on the **Navigation controls** option in the **Map settings** of the **Format** pane. This will add a button to tilt the map.
-- Press the right mouse button down and drag the mouse up or down.
+- Turn on the **Navigation controls** option in the **Map settings** of the **Format** pane to add a button that tilts the map.
+- Hold down the right mouse button and drag the mouse up or down.
 - Using a touch screen, touch the map with two fingers and drag them up or down together.
 - With the map focused, hold the **Shift** key, and press the **Up** or **Down arrow** keys.
 
 The map can be rotated using one of the following methods.
 
-- Turn on the **Navigation controls** option in the **Map settings** of the **Format** pane. This will add a button to rotate the map.
-- Press the right mouse button down and drag the mouse left or right.
+- Turn on the **Navigation controls** option in the **Map settings** of the **Format** pane to add a button that rotates the map.
+- Hold down the right mouse button and drag the mouse left or right.
 - Using a touch screen, touch the map with two fingers and rotate.
 - With the map focused, hold the **Shift** key, and press the **Left** or **Right arrow** keys.
 
 The following are all settings in the **Format** pane that are available in the **3D column layer** section.
 
 | Setting              | Description      |
 |----------------------|------------------|
-| Column shape         | The shape of the 3D column.<br/><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;• Box – columns rendered as rectangular boxes.<br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;• Cylinder – columns rendered as cylinders. |
-| Height               | The height of each column. If a field is passed into the **Size** bucket of the **Fields** pane, columns will be scaled relative to this height value. |
+| Column shape         | The shape of the 3D column.<br><br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;• Box – columns rendered as rectangular boxes.<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;• Cylinder – columns rendered as cylinders. |
+| Height               | The height of each column. If a field is passed into the **Size** bucket of the **Fields** pane, columns are scaled relative to this height value. |
 | Scale height on zoom | Specifies if the height of the columns should scale relative to the zoom level. |
 | Width                | The width of each column.  |
 | Scale width on zoom  | Specifies if the width of the columns should scale relative to the zoom level.  |
-| Fill color           | Color of each column. This option is hidden when a field is passed into the **Legend** bucket of the **Fields** pane and a separate **Data colors** section will appear in the **Format** pane. |
+| Fill color           | Color of each column. This option is hidden when a field is passed into the **Legend** bucket of the **Fields** pane and a separate **Data colors** section appears in the **Format** pane. |
 | Transparency         | Transparency of each column. |
 | Min zoom             | Minimum zoom level tiles are available. |
 | Max zoom             | Maximum zoom level tiles are available. |