Acrolinx feedback on a -service.md include

Author: fauhse

includes/storage-files-migration-deploy-azure-file-sync-storage-sync-service.md

@@ -12,10 +12,10 @@ ms.subservice: files
 In this step, you need your Azure subscription credentials.
 
 The core resource to configure Azure File Sync is called a "Storage Sync Service".
-We recommend you deploy only one for all servers in the company that syncing the same set of files now or in the future. You should only create multiple Storage Sync Services if you have distinct sets of servers that must never exchange data. (for example sync the same Azure file share). Otherwise a single Storage Sync Service is the best practice.
+We recommend you deploy only one for all servers in the company that syncing the same set of files now or in the future. Only create multiple Storage Sync Services if you have distinct sets of servers that must never exchange data. (for example: sync the same Azure file share). Otherwise a single Storage Sync Service is the best practice.
 
 Choose an Azure region for your Storage Sync Service that is close to your office location. All other cloud resources must be deployed in the same region.
-Best practice is to create a new resource group in your subscription to house sync and storage resources for easier management.
+To simplify management, create a new resource group in your subscription that houses sync and storage resources.
 
 The following article describes how to deploy a Storage Sync Service. Only follow this part of the doc. There will be links to other subsections of this doc in later steps.