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Author: gsteve88

includes/iot-hub-howto-connect-service-iothub-entra-java.md

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ ms.date: 11/19/2024
 
 A backend app that uses Microsoft Entra must successfully authenticate and obtain a security token credential before connecting to IoT Hub. This token is passed to a IoT Hub connection method. For general information about setting up and using Microsoft Entra for IoT Hub, see [Control access to IoT Hub by using Microsoft Entra ID](/azure/iot-hub/authenticate-authorize-azure-ad).
 
-For an overview of Java SDK authentication, see [Getting started with user authentication on Azure](/azure/developer/java/sdk/authentication/azure-hosted-apps).
+For an overview of Java SDK authentication, see [Azure authentication with Java and Azure Identity](/azure/developer/java/sdk/authentication/overview).
 
 For simplicity, this section focuses on describing authentication using client secret.
 
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ For more information about the pros and cons of using `DefaultAzureCredential`,
 
 You can authenticate Microsoft Entra app credentials using [DefaultAzureCredentialBuilder](/java/api/com.azure.identity.defaultazurecredentialbuilder). Save connection parameters such as client secret tenantID, clientID, and client secret values as environmental variables. Once the `TokenCredential` is created, pass it to [ServiceClient](/java/api/com.azure.core.annotation.serviceclient) or other builder as the 'credential' parameter.
 
-In this example, `DefaultAzureCredentialBuilder` attempts to authenticate a connection from the list described in [DefaultAzureCredential](/java/api/com.azure.identity.defaultazurecredential). The result of a successful Microsoft Entra authentication is a security token credential that is passed to a constructor.
+In this example, `DefaultAzureCredentialBuilder` attempts to authenticate a connection from the list described in [DefaultAzureCredential](/java/api/com.azure.identity.defaultazurecredential). The result of a successful Microsoft Entra authentication is a security token credential that is passed to a constructor such as [ServiceClient](/java/api/com.azure.core.annotation.serviceclient).
 
 ```java
 TokenCredential defaultAzureCredential = new DefaultAzureCredentialBuilder().build();

includes/iot-hub-howto-module-twins-dotnet.md

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ ms.date: 11/19/2024
 ms.custom: mqtt, devx-track-csharp, devx-track-dotnet
 ---
 
-  * Requires Visual Studio.
+  * Requires Visual Studio
 
 ## Overview
 
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ registryManager = RegistryManager.CreateFromConnectionString(connectionString);
 
 #### Connect using Microsoft Entra
 
-[!INCLUDE [iot-hub-howto-connect-service-iothub-entra-java](iot-hub-howto-connect-service-iothub-entra-java.md)]
+[!INCLUDE [iot-hub-howto-connect-service-iothub-entra-dotnet](iot-hub-howto-connect-service-iothub-entra-dotnet.md)]
 
 ### Read and update module identity fields
 

includes/iot-hub-howto-module-twins-node.md

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ ms.date: 11/19/2024
 ms.custom: mqtt, devx-track-js
 ---
 
-  * Requires Node.js version 10.0.x or later.
+  * Requires Node.js version 10.0.x or later
 
 ## Overview
 
@@ -338,10 +338,9 @@ You can connect a backend service to IoT Hub using the following methods:
 
 Use [fromConnectionString](/javascript/api/azure-iothub/registry?#azure-iothub-registry-fromconnectionstring) to connect to IoT hub.
 
-The SDK methods in this section require these shared access policy permissions:
+The SDK methods in this section require this shared access policy permission:
 
 * **Registry Write** - required to add a module (or device) to the IoT Hub registry
-* **Service Connect** - required to add desired properties to a module
 
 As a parameter to `CreateFromConnectionString`, supply a shared access policy connection string that includes these permissions. For more information about shared access policies, see [Control access to IoT Hub with shared access signatures](/azure/iot-hub/authenticate-authorize-sas).
 

includes/iot-hub-howto-module-twins-python.md

@@ -177,9 +177,8 @@ You can connect a backend service to IoT Hub using the following methods:
 
 Connect to IoT hub using [from_connection_string](/python/api/azure-iot-hub/azure.iot.hub.iothubregistrymanager?#azure-iot-hub-iothubregistrymanager-from-connection-string).
 
-The SDK methods in this section require these shared access policy permissions:
+The SDK methods in this section require this shared access policy permission:
 
-* **Registry Write** - required to add a module (or device) to the IoT Hub registry
 * **Service Connect** - required to add desired properties to a module
 
 As a parameter to `CreateFromConnectionString`, supply a shared access policy connection string that includes these permissions. For more information about shared access policies, see [Control access to IoT Hub with shared access signatures](/azure/iot-hub/authenticate-authorize-sas).