Merge pull request #204477 from meaghanlewis/fix-pr-feedback

BCS2022 · web-flow · commit ce2e1ed24e1b · 2022-07-12T14:51:26.000-07:00
Updates based on PR feedback
diff --git a/articles/orbital/TOC.yml b/articles/orbital/TOC.yml
@@ -9,33 +9,31 @@ items:
     href: space-partner-program-overview.md
 - name: Quickstart
   items:
-  - name: Onboard to the Azure Orbital Preview
-    href: orbital-preview.md
-  - name: Register a Spacecraft
+  - name: Register a spacecraft
     href: register-spacecraft.md
-  - name: Configure a Contact Profile
+  - name: Configure a contact profile
     href: contact-profile.md
-  - name: Schedule a Contact
+  - name: Schedule a contact
     href: schedule-contact.md
 - name: Tutorials
   items:
   - name: Prepare network to send and receive data
-    href: howto-prepare-network.md
+    href: prepare-network.md
   - name: License your spacecraft
-    href: howto-licensing.md
+    href: license-spacecraft.md
   - name: Receive real-time telemetry
-    href: howto-realtime-telem.md
-  - name: Update the Spacecraft TLE
+    href: receive-real-time-telemetry.md
+  - name: Update the spacecraft TLE
     href: update-tle.md
-  - name: Cancel a Contact
+  - name: Cancel a contact
     href: delete-contact.md
 - name: How-to guides
   items:
   - name: Earth Observation
     items:
     - name: Schedule a contact with NASA's AQUA public satellite
-      href: howto-downlink-aqua.md 
-    - name: Collect and Process AQUA satellite payload
+      href: downlink-aqua.md 
+    - name: Collect and process AQUA satellite payload
       href: satellite-imagery-with-orbital-ground-station.md
     - name: Integrate partner network ground stations
       href: partner-network-integration.md     
@@ -45,7 +43,7 @@ items:
     href: concepts-contact.md
   - name: Contact profile
     href: concepts-contact-profile.md
-  - name: Geospatial Reference Architecture
+  - name: Geospatial reference architecture
     href: geospatial-reference-architecture.md
   - name: Spacecraft object
     href: spacecraft-object.md  
diff --git a/articles/orbital/concepts-contact-profile.md b/articles/orbital/concepts-contact-profile.md
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ See [how to configure a contact profile](contact-profile.md) for the full list o
 
 ## Prerequisites 
 
-- Subnet that is created in the VNET and resource group you desire. See [Prepare network for Orbital GSaaS integration.](howto-prepare-network.md)
+- Subnet that is created in the VNET and resource group you desire. See [Prepare network for Orbital GSaaS integration.](prepare-network.md)
 
 ## Creating a contact profile 
 
@@ -40,9 +40,7 @@ At the moment autotrack is disabled and autotracking options are not applied.
 
 A whole band, unique in direction, and unique in polarity is called a link. Channels, which are children under links, specify center frequency, bandwidth, and endpoints. Typically there's only one channel per link but some applications require multiple channels per link. Refer to the Ground Station manual for a full list of supported bands and antenna capabilities.
 
-You can specify an EIRP and G/T requirement for each link. EIRP applies to uplinks and G/T applies to downlinks. These parameters are not used currently but will be used in the future to ensure that antennas in the network can meet your requirements.
-
-You can give a name to each link and channel to keep track of these properties. Eventually these names will help links to other features such as real-time telemetry.
+You can specify an EIRP and G/T requirement for each link. EIRP applies to uplinks and G/T applies to downlinks. You can give a name to each link and channel to keep track of these properties.
 
 Look at the example below to see how to specify an RHCP channel and an LHCP channel if your mission requires dual-polarization on downlink.  
 
diff --git a/articles/orbital/contact-profile.md b/articles/orbital/contact-profile.md
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ Configure a contact profile with Azure Orbital to save and reuse contact configu
 
 ## Sign in to Azure
 
-Sign in to the [Azure portal - Orbital Preview](https://aka.ms/orbital/portal).
+Sign in to the [Azure portal - Orbital](https://aka.ms/orbital/portal).
 
 ## Create a contact profile resource
 
@@ -74,6 +74,6 @@ Sign in to the [Azure portal - Orbital Preview](https://aka.ms/orbital/portal).
 
 ## Next steps
 
-- [How-to Receive real-time telemetry](howto-realtime-telem.md)
+- [How-to Receive real-time telemetry](receive-real-time-telemetry.md)
 - [Quickstart: Schedule a contact](schedule-contact.md)
 - [Tutorial: Cancel a contact](delete-contact.md)
diff --git a/articles/orbital/downlink-aqua.md b/articles/orbital/downlink-aqua.md
@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@ description: How to schedule a contact with NASA's AQUA public satellite using A
 author: wamota
 ms.service: orbital
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.custom: public-preview
-ms.date: 04/14/2022
+ms.custom: ga
+ms.date: 07/12/2022
 ms.author: wamota
 # Customer intent: As a satellite operator, I want to ingest data from NASA's AQUA public satellite into Azure.
 ---
diff --git a/articles/orbital/index.yml b/articles/orbital/index.yml
@@ -10,8 +10,8 @@ metadata:
   ms.topic: landing-page
   author: wamota
   ms.author: wamota
-  ms.date: 05/26/2022
-  ms.custom: public-preview
+  ms.date: 07/12/2022
+  ms.custom: ga
 
 # linkListType: architecture | concept | deploy | download | get-started | how-to-guide | learn | overview | quickstart | reference | tutorial | whats-new
 
@@ -29,17 +29,13 @@ landingContent:
   # Card
   - title: Get started with Earth Observation
     linkLists:
-      - linkListType: get-started
-        links:
-          - text: Onboard to the Azure Orbital Preview
-            url: orbital-preview.md
       - linkListType: quickstart
         links:
-          - text: Register Spacecraft 
+          - text: Register spacecraft 
             url: register-spacecraft.md
-          - text: Configure a Contact Profile
+          - text: Configure a contact profile
             url: contact-profile.md
-          - text: Schedule a Contact
+          - text: Schedule a contact
             url: schedule-contact.md
 
   # Card
@@ -48,13 +44,15 @@ landingContent:
       - linkListType: how-to-guide
         links:
           - text: Prepare network to receive and send data
-            url: howto-prepare-network.md
-          - text: License your Spacecraft
-            url: howto-licensing.md
-          - text: Update the Spacecraft TLE
+            url: prepare-network.md
+          - text: License your spacecraft
+            url: license-spacecraft.md
+          - text: Update the spacecraft TLE
             url: update-tle.md
           - text: Integrate partner network ground stations
-            url: partner-network-integration.md   
+            url: partner-network-integration.md
+          - text: Receive real-time telemetry
+            url: receive-real-time-telemetry.md    
 
   # Card
   - title: Azure Space Partner Community
@@ -70,8 +68,8 @@ landingContent:
       - linkListType: how-to-guide
         links:
           - text: Schedule a contact with NASA's AQUA public satellite
-            url: howto-downlink-aqua.md
-          - text: Collect and Process AQUA satellite payload
+            url: downlink-aqua.md
+          - text: Collect and process AQUA satellite payload
             url: satellite-imagery-with-orbital-ground-station.md
 
   # Card
@@ -83,7 +81,7 @@ landingContent:
             url: concepts-contact.md
           - text: Contact profile
             url: concepts-contact-profile.md
-          - text: Geospatial Reference Architecture
+          - text: Geospatial reference architecture
             url: geospatial-reference-architecture.md
           - text: Spacecraft object
             url: spacecraft-object.md
diff --git a/articles/orbital/license-spacecraft.md b/articles/orbital/license-spacecraft.md
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ author: hrshelar
 ms.service: orbital
 ms.topic: how-to
 ms.custom: ga
-ms.date: 06/21/2022
+ms.date: 07/12/2022
 ms.author: hrshelar
 ---
 
diff --git a/articles/orbital/prepare-network.md b/articles/orbital/prepare-network.md
@@ -1,15 +1,15 @@
 ---
-title: Prepare network to send and receive data
-description: Learn how to deliver and receive data from Orbital.
+title: Prepare network to send and receive data - Azure Orbital
+description: Learn how to deliver and receive data from  Azure Orbital.
 author: hrshelar
 ms.service: orbital
 ms.topic: how-to
 ms.custom: ga
-ms.date: 07/07/2022
+ms.date: 07/12/2022
 ms.author: hrshelar
 ---
 
-# Prepare network for Orbital GSaaS integration
+# Prepare the network for Azure Orbital GSaaS integration
 
 The Orbital GSaaS platform interfaces with your resources using VNET injection, which is used in both uplink and downlink directions. This page describes how to ensure your Subnet and Orbital GSaaS objects are configured correctly.
 
diff --git a/articles/orbital/receive-real-time-telemetry.md b/articles/orbital/receive-real-time-telemetry.md
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
 ---
-title: Receive real-time telemetry
+title: Receive real-time telemetry - Azure Orbital
 description: Learn how to receive real-time telemetry during contacts.
 author: hrshelar
 ms.service: orbital
 ms.topic: how-to
 ms.custom: ga
-ms.date: 06/21/2022
+ms.date: 07/12/2022
 ms.author: mikailasmith
 ---
 
diff --git a/articles/orbital/satellite-imagery-with-orbital-ground-station.md b/articles/orbital/satellite-imagery-with-orbital-ground-station.md
@@ -28,10 +28,10 @@ Optional setup for capturing the ground station telemetry are included in the [A
 
 ## Step 1: Prerequisites
 
-You must first follow the steps listed in [Tutorial: Downlink data from NASA's AQUA public satellite](howto-downlink-aqua.md). 
+You must first follow the steps listed in [Tutorial: Downlink data from NASA's AQUA public satellite](downlink-aqua.md). 
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> In the section [Prepare a virtual machine (VM) to receive the downlinked AQUA data](howto-downlink-aqua.md#prepare-a-virtual-machine-vm-to-receive-the-downlinked-aqua-data), use the following values:
+> In the section [Prepare a virtual machine (VM) to receive the downlinked AQUA data](downlink-aqua.md#prepare-a-virtual-machine-vm-to-receive-the-downlinked-aqua-data), use the following values:
 >
 >   - **Name:** receiver-vm
 >   - **Operating System:** Linux (CentOS Linux 7 or higher)
@@ -316,5 +316,5 @@ Other helpful resources: 
 
 For an end-to-end implementation that involves extracting, loading, transforming, and analyzing spaceborne data by using geospatial libraries and AI models with Azure Synapse Analytics, see: 
 
-- [Spaceborne data analysis with Azure Synapse Analytics](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/architecture/industries/aerospace/geospatial-processing-analytics)
+- [Spaceborne data analysis with Azure Synapse Analytics](/azure/architecture/industries/aerospace/geospatial-processing-analytics)
 
diff --git a/articles/orbital/schedule-contact.md b/articles/orbital/schedule-contact.md
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
 ---
-title: 'How to schedule a contact on Azure Orbital Earth Observation service' 
-description: 'How to schedule a contact'
+title: How to schedule a contact on Azure Orbital Earth Observation service
+description: Learn how to schedule a contact.
 author: wamota
 ms.service: orbital
 ms.topic: quickstart
-ms.custom: public-preview
-ms.date: 11/16/2021
+ms.custom: ga
+ms.date: 07/12/2022
 ms.author: wamota
 # Customer intent: As a satellite operator, I want to ingest data from my satellite into Azure.
 ---
@@ -22,12 +22,12 @@ Schedule a contact with the selected satellite for data retrieval/delivery on Az
 
 ## Sign in to Azure
 
-Sign in to the [Azure portal - Orbital Preview](https://aka.ms/orbital/portal).
+Sign in to the [Azure portal - Orbital](https://aka.ms/orbital/portal).
 
 ## Select an available contact
 
-1. In the Azure portal search box, enter **Spacecrafts**. Select **Spacecrafts** in the search results.
-2. In the **Spacecrafts** page, select the spacecraft for the contact.
+1. In the Azure portal search box, enter **Spacecraft**. Select **Spacecraft** in the search results.
+2. In the **Spacecraft** page, select the spacecraft for the contact.
 3. Select **Schedule contact** on the top bar of the spacecraft’s overview.
  
    :::image type="content" source="media/orbital-eos-schedule.png" alt-text="Schedule a contact at spacecraft resource page" lightbox="media/orbital-eos-schedule.png":::
