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articles/operator-nexus/howto-baremetal-review-read-output.md

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1. You can manage & download the output file from the **Overview** pop-out.
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For information on running the `run-read-command` see:
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For information on running the `run-read-command`, see:
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- [Troubleshoot Baremetal Machine issues using the run-read command](howto-baremetal-run-read.md)

articles/operator-nexus/howto-baremetal-run-read.md

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There may be situations where a user needs to investigate & resolve issues with an on-premises BMM. Operator Nexus provides the `az networkcloud baremetalmachine run-read-command` so users can run a curated list of read only commands to get information from a BMM.
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The command execution will produce an output file containing the results that can be found in the Cluster Manager's Storage account.
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The command execution produces an output file containing the results that can be found in the Cluster Manager's Storage account.
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## Prerequisites
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## Executing a run-read command
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The run-read command will execute a read-only command on the specified BMM.
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The run-read command executes a read-only command on the specified BMM.
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The current list of supported commands are:
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`--debug` is required to get the operation status that can be queried to get the URL for the output file.
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### This example will execute the `hostname` command and a `ping` command.
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### This example executes the `hostname` command and a `ping` command.
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```azurecli
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az networkcloud baremetalmachine run-read-command --name "bareMetalMachineName" \
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## Checking command status and viewing output
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The debug output of the command execution will contain the 'Azure-AsyncOperation' response header. Note the URL provided.
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The debug output of the command execution contains the 'Azure-AsyncOperation' response header. Note the URL provided.
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```azurecli
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cli.azure.cli.core.sdk.policies: 'Azure-AsyncOperation': 'https://management.azure.com/subscriptions/xxxxxx-xxxxxx-xxxx-xxxx-xxxxxx/providers/Microsoft.NetworkCloud/locations/EASTUS/operationStatuses/0797fdd7-28eb-48ec-8c70-39a3f893421d*A0123456789F331FE47B40E2BFBCE2E133FD3ED2562348BFFD8388A4AAA1271?api-version=2022-09-30-preview'

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