edit pass: modeling-simulation-workbench-how-to-articles

Author: ShawnJackson

articles/modeling-simulation-workbench/how-to-guide-download-data.md

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-title: Export data from an Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench
-description: Learn how to export data from a chamber in Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench
+title: Export data from Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench
+description: Learn how to export data from a chamber in Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench.
 author: lynnar
 ms.author: lynnar
 ms.reviewer: yochu
 ms.service: modeling-simulation-workbench
 ms.topic: how-to
 ms.date: 01/01/2023
-# Customer intent: As a Modeling and Simulation Workbench Chamber User, I want to export data from my chamber
+# Customer intent: As a Chamber User in Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench, I want to export data from my chamber.
 ---
 
-# Export data from an Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench
+# Export data from Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench
 
-<!--- SCREENSHOT OF CHAMBER --->
+Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench uses a two-key approval process for optimal security and privacy when you're exporting data. A Chamber Admin provides the first key approval. A Workbench Owner provides the second key approval.
 
-Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench uses a two key approvals process to ensure optimal security and privacy when exporting data.  A Chamber Admin provides the first key approval.  A Workbench Owner provides the second key approval. 
-This article explains the steps to export data from Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench."
+This article explains the steps to export data from Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
 - An Azure account with an active subscription. [Create an account for free](https://azure.microsoft.com/free/?WT.mc_id=A261C142F).
-- An instance of Modeling and Simulation Design Workbench installed with at least one chamber.
-- A user who is a Workbench Owner (Subscription Owner/Contributor) and a user provisioned as a Chamber Admin or Chamber User.
-- [AzCopy](/azure/storage/common/storage-ref-azcopy) installed on machine, with access to the configured network for the target chamber. Only machines that are on the specified network path for the chamber can export files.
+- An instance of Azure Modeling and Simulation Design Workbench installed with at least one chamber.
+- A user who's a Workbench Owner (Subscription Owner or Subscription Contributor), and a user who's provisioned as a Chamber Admin or Chamber User.
+- [AzCopy](/azure/storage/common/storage-ref-azcopy) installed on the machine, with access to the configured network for the target chamber. Only machines on the specified network path for the chamber can export files.
 
 ## Sign in to Azure portal
 
 Open your web browser and go to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com/). Enter your credentials to sign in to the portal.
 
-## Copy export file to data out folder
+## Copy the export file to the data-out folder
 
-To export a file, first you need to copy the file to the data out folder in the data pipeline.
+To export a file, you first need to copy the file to the data-out folder in the data pipeline.
 
-  > [!NOTE]
-  > Supported filename characters are alphanumerics, underscores, periods, and hyphens.
-  > Data pipeline will only process files in /mount/datapipeline/dataout.
+> [!NOTE]
+> Supported characters for the file name are alphanumeric characters, underscores, periods, and hyphens.
+>
+> The data pipeline processes only files in */mount/datapipeline/dataout*.
 
-1. Type *Modeling and Simulation Workbench* in the global search and select **Modeling and Simulation Workbench** under **Services**.
+1. Enter **Modeling and Simulation Workbench** in the global search. Then, under **Services**, select **Modeling and Simulation Workbench**.
 
-1. Select your Modeling and Simulation Workbench from the resource list.
+1. Select your workbench from the resource list.
 
-1. Select **Settings > Chamber** in the left side menu. A resource list displays. Select the chamber you want to export data from.
+1. On the left menu, select **Settings** > **Chamber**. A resource list appears. Select the chamber that you want to export data from.
 
-1. Select **Settings > Connector** in the left side menu.  A resource list displays. Select the displayed connector.
+1. On the left menu, select **Settings** > **Connector**.  In the resource list, select the displayed connector.
 
-1. Select the "Dashboard URL" link that should take you to the ETX dashboard.
+1. Select the **Dashboard URL** link to open the ETX dashboard.
 
 1. Select an available workload and open a terminal session.
 
-1. Copy the file you want to export to the data pipeline's data out folder: */mount/datapipeline/dataout.*
+1. Copy the file that you want to export to the data pipeline's data-out folder: */mount/datapipeline/dataout*.
 
 ## Request to export the file
 
-After the file is copied to the data out folder, a Chamber Admin completes the following steps to request to export the file.
+After you copy the file to the data-out folder, a Chamber Admin completes the following steps to request an export of the file:
 
-1. Select **Data Pipeline > File** in the chamber you're exporting data from.
+1. In the chamber that you're exporting data from, select **Data Pipeline** > **File**.
 
-1. Select the file you want to export from the displayed resource list. Files are named *mount-datapipeline-datain-\<filename\>.*
+1. In the resource list, select the file that you want to export. Files are named *mount-datapipeline-datain-\<filename\>.*
 
-1. Confirm the data pipeline direction in the File overview section is **outbound**. Then select **Request download.**
+1. Confirm that the data pipeline direction in the **File overview** section is **outbound**. Then select **Request download**.
 
-1. Enter a reason in the Description field and select **File Request.**
+1. Enter a reason in the **Description** box, and then select **File Request**.
 
    > [!div class="mx-imgBorder"]
-   > ![Screenshot of the Azure portal manage screen showing how to request file export](./media/howtoguide-download-data/file-request-download.png)
+   > ![Screenshot of the Azure portal pane for requesting a file download for export.](./media/howtoguide-download-data/file-request-download.png)
 
 ## Approve or reject an export request
 
-The next phase, approving (or rejecting) the export request, is completed by the Workbench Owner.
+The Workbench Owner completes the next phase, approving (or rejecting) the export request:
 
-1. Select **Data Pipeline > File Request** in the chamber you're exporting data from.
+1. In the chamber that you're exporting data from, select **Data Pipeline** > **File Request**.
 
-1. Select the file request you want to manage from the displayed resource list. In the File Request overview section, the status of the file request must display as **Requested** in order to approve it.
+1. In the resource list, select the file request that you want to manage.
 
-1. Select **Manage** in the File Request overview section.
+   In the **File Request overview** section, the status of the file request must appear as **Requested** for you to approve it.
 
-1. Select **Approve** or **Reject** in the Action drop-down and enter a description in the Description field.
+1. Select **Manage** in the **File Request overview** section.
+
+1. In the **Action** drop-down list, select **Approve** or **Reject**. In the **Description** box, enter a description.
 
    > [!div class="mx-imgBorder"]
-   > ![Screenshot of the Azure portal manage screen showing how to select Approved Action](./media/howtoguide-download-data/file-request-approve.png)
+   > ![Screenshot of the Azure portal that shows the Action and Description boxes in the pane for managing a file download request.](./media/howtoguide-download-data/file-request-approve.png)
+
+1. Select **Manage**.
 
-1. Select **Manage.**
+The status of the file export request appears in the **File Request overview** section as either **Approved** or **Rejected**. The status must be **Approved** to enable users to download the file.
 
-1. The status of the file export request displays in the File Request overview section as either Approved or Rejected.  The status must show as **Approved** to enable users to download the file.
+## Download an approved export file from the chamber
 
-## Download approved export file from chamber
+Complete the following steps to download an approved export file from a chamber:
 
-Complete the following steps to download an approved export file from a chamber.
+1. In the chamber that you're exporting data from, select **Data Pipeline** > **File Request**.
 
-1. Select **Data Pipeline > File Request** in the chamber you're exporting data from.
+1. In the resource list, select the approved file request that you want to download. The status of the file request must appear as **Approved** for you to download it.
 
-1. Select the approved file request you want to download from the displayed resource list. The status of the file request must display as **Approved** in order to download it.
+1. In the **File Request overview** section, select the **Download URL** button.
 
-1. Select the **Download URL** button in the file request overview section, and copy the displayed Download URL from the popup.
+1. In the pop-up dialog, copy the **Download URL** value.
 
-1. Using the AzCopy command, copy out your file. for example, `azcopy copy "<downloadURL>" <targetFilePath>`
+1. Use the AzCopy command to copy out your file. For example, use `azcopy copy "<downloadURL>" <targetFilePath>`.
 
-  > [!IMPORTANT]
-  >
-  > If you're exporting multiple smaller files, it's recommended to zip or tarball them into a single file.
-  >
-  > GB sized tarballs/zipped files are supported, depending on your connection type and network speed.
+> [!IMPORTANT]
+> If you're exporting multiple smaller files, we recommend that you zip or tarball them into a single file. Gigabyte-sized tarballs and zipped files are supported, depending on your connection type and network speed.
 
 ## Next steps
 
-Check out [Manage chamber storage](./how-to-guide-manage-storage.md) to learn how to manage chamber storage in Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench.
+To learn how to manage chamber storage in Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench, see [Manage chamber storage](./how-to-guide-manage-storage.md).

articles/modeling-simulation-workbench/how-to-guide-licenses.md

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ ms.reviewer: yochu
 ms.service: modeling-simulation-workbench
 ms.topic: how-to
 ms.date: 09/15/2023
-# Customer intent: As an Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench Chamber admin, I want to activate a license service in a chamber so that chamber users can run applications that require licenses.
+# Customer intent: As a Chamber Admin in Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench, I want to activate a license service in a chamber so that Chamber Users can run applications that require licenses.
 ---
 
 # Manage a license service for Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench

articles/modeling-simulation-workbench/how-to-guide-manage-storage.md

@@ -1,73 +1,68 @@
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 title: Manage chamber storage in Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench
-description: Learn how to manage chamber storage within a Modeling and Simulation Workbench
+description: Learn how to manage chamber storage in Azure  Modeling and Simulation Workbench.
 author: lynnar
 ms.author: lynnar
 ms.reviewer: yochu
 ms.service: modeling-simulation-workbench
 ms.topic: how-to
 ms.date: 01/01/2023
-# Customer intent: As a Modeling and Simulation Workbench Chamber Admin, I want to manage chamber storage
+# Customer intent: As a Chamber Admin in Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench, I want to manage chamber storage.
 ---
 
 # Manage chamber storage in Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench
 
-Chamber Admins and Workbench Owners can manage the storage capacity within Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench to fit your organization's specific needs. For example, they can increase or decrease the amount of chamber storage, as well as change the performance tier.  
+Chamber Admins and Workbench Owners can manage the storage capacity in Azure Modeling and Simulation Workbench to fit their organization's specific needs. For example, they can increase or decrease the amount of chamber storage. They can also change the performance tier.  
 
-This article explains how Chamber Admins and Workbench Owners manage chamber storage
+This article explains how Chamber Admins and Workbench Owners manage chamber storage.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
 - An Azure account with an active subscription. [Create an account for free](https://azure.microsoft.com/free/?WT.mc_id=A261C142F).
-- An instance of Modeling and Simulation Design Workbench installed with at least one chamber.
-- You must be a Chamber Admin or Workbench Owner to manage chamber storage.
+- An instance of Azure Modeling and Simulation Design Workbench installed with at least one chamber.
+- A user who's provisioned as a Chamber Admin or Workbench Owner.
 
 ## Sign in to Azure portal
 
 Open your web browser and go to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com/). Enter your credentials to sign in to the portal.
 
-## Access storage options in chamber
+## Access storage options in a chamber
 
 If you're a Workbench Owner or Chamber Admin, complete the following steps to access the chamber storage options:
 
-1. Enter *Modeling and Simulation Workbench* in the global search and select **Modeling and Simulation Workbench** under **Services**.
+1. Enter **Modeling and Simulation Workbench** in the global search. Then, under **Services**, select **Modeling and Simulation Workbench**.
 
-1. Select your Modeling and Simulation Workbench from the resource list.
+1. Select your workbench from the resource list.
 
-1. Select **Settings > Chamber** in the left side menu. A resource list displays. Select the chamber where you want to manage the storage for.
+1. On the left menu, select **Settings** > **Chamber**. A resource list appears. Select the chamber where you want to manage the storage.
 
-1. Select **Settings > Storage** in the left side menu. A resource list displays. Select the displayed storage.
+1. On the left menu, select **Settings** > **Storage**. In the resource list, select the displayed storage.
 
-<!---    [!div class="mx-imgBorder"]
-   ![Screenshot of the Azure portal chamber storage overview screen](./media/howtoguide-manage-storage/storage-overview.png)
---->
 ### Resize chamber storage
 
-Workbench Owners and Chamber Admins can increase or decrease your chamber's storage capacity by resizing the storage size.  
+If you're a Workbench Owner or Chamber Admin, you can increase or decrease a chamber's storage capacity by changing the storage size.  
 
-The storage size can't be changed to less than what's currently being used for that storage instance.  In addition, the storage size can't be changed to more than the available capacity for the region your workbench is installed in.  The default storage quota limit is 25 TB across all workbenches installed in your subscription per region. Contact your Microsoft account manager for additional information about regional capacity resource limits.
+You can't change the storage size to less than what you're currently using for that storage instance. In addition, you can't change the storage size to more than the available capacity for the region where your workbench is installed. The default storage quota limit is 25 TB across all workbenches installed in your subscription per region. For more information about resource capacity limits, contact your Microsoft account manager.
 
-**Complete the following steps to increase or decrease the storage size:**
+Complete the following steps to increase or decrease the storage size:
 
-1. Select **Resize** option chamber storage overview.
-1. Enter desired storage size in the Resize popup.
-1. Select **Change** button to confirm resize request.
-1. Select **Refresh** to show the new size in the storage overview display.
+1. In the storage overview, select **Resize**.
+1. In the **Resize** pop-up dialog, enter the desired storage size.
+1. Select the **Change** button to confirm the resize request.
+1. Select **Refresh** to show the new size in the storage overview.
 
-  > [!IMPORTANT]
-  > Azure Net App Files Capacity availability is limited per region.
-  > In addition, Azure Net App Files Quota availability is limited per region and customer customer subscription.
-  > Contact your Microsoft account manager to request an increase in storage quota.
+> [!IMPORTANT]
+> Azure NetApp Files capacity availability is limited per region. Azure NetApp Files quota availability is limited per region and customer subscription. To request an increase in storage quota, contact your Microsoft account manager.
 
-### Change performance tier
+### Change the performance tier
 
-Workbench Owners and Chamber Admins can change the performance tier for your storage.
+If you're a Workbench Owner or a Chamber Admin, you can change the performance tier for storage.
 
-The storage performance tier can be changed to a higher tier, such as from standard to ultra, at any time.  The storage performance tier can be changed to a lower tier, such as from ultra to standard, after the cool-down period.  The Azure Net App Files cool-down period is one week from when the storage was created or one week from the last time the storage tier was increased.
+You can change the storage performance tier to a higher tier, such as from standard to ultra, at any time. You can change the storage performance tier to a lower tier, such as from ultra to standard, after the cool-down period. The Azure Net App Files cool-down period is one week from when you created the storage or one week from the last time that you increased the storage tier.
 
-**Complete the following steps to change the performance tier:**
+Complete the following steps to change the performance tier:
 
-1. Select **Change tier** option chamber storage overview.
-1. Select from combo box the desired storage tier in the Change tier popup.
-1. Select **Update** button to confirm change tier request.
-1. Select **Refresh** to show the new tier in the storage overview display.
+1. In the chamber storage overview, select **Change tier**.
+1. In the **Change tier** pop-up dialog, select the desired storage tier from the combo box.
+1. Select the **Update** button to confirm the request to change the tier.
+1. Select **Refresh** to show the new tier in the storage overview.