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articles/defender-for-iot/organizations/eiot-defender-for-endpoint.md

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-title: Get started with enterprise IoT monitoring in Microsoft Defender XDR | Microsoft Defender for IoT
-description: Learn how to get added value for enterprise IoT devices in Microsoft Defender XDR.
+title: Set up enterprise IoT security - Defender for IoT
+description: Enable enterprise IoT security for your IoT devices, using added security value in Microsoft Defender for IoT.
 ms.topic: quickstart
 ms.date: 09/13/2023
 ms.custom: enterprise-iot
-#CustomerIntent: As a Microsoft 365 administrator, I want to understand how to turn on support for enterprise IoT monitoring in Microsoft Defender XDR and where I can find the added security value so that I can keep my EIoT devices safe.
+#CustomerIntent: As a security administrator, I want to understand how to set up enterprise IoT monitoring so that I can keep my EIoT devices safe.
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-# Get started with enterprise IoT monitoring in Microsoft Defender XDR
+# Get started with enterprise IoT security monitoring
 
-This article describes how [Microsoft Defender for Endpoint](/microsoft-365/security/defender-endpoint/) customers can monitor enterprise IoT devices in their environment, using added security value in Microsoft Defender XDR.
+This article describes how [Microsoft Defender for Endpoint](/microsoft-365/security/defender-endpoint/) customers can enable enterprise IoT security for their IoT devices, using added security value in Microsoft Defender for IoT.
 
-While IoT device inventory is already available for Defender for Endpoint P2 customers, turning on enterprise IoT security adds alerts, recommendations, and vulnerability data, purpose-built for IoT devices in your enterprise network.
+While the IoT device inventory is already available for Defender for Endpoint P2 customers, turning on enterprise IoT security adds alerts, recommendations, and vulnerability data, purpose-built for IoT devices in your enterprise network.
 
 IoT devices include printers, cameras, VOIP phones, smart TVs, and more. Turning on enterprise IoT security means, for example, that you can use a recommendation in Microsoft Defender XDR to open a single IT ticket for patching vulnerable applications across both servers and printers.
 
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     For more information, see [Enterprise IoT security in Microsoft Defender XDR](concept-enterprise.md#enterprise-iot-security-in-microsoft-defender-xdr).
 
-## Turn on enterprise IoT monitoring
+## Turn on enterprise IoT security monitoring
 
 This procedure describes how to turn on enterprise IoT monitoring in Microsoft Defender XDR, and is relevant only for ME5/E5 Security customers.
 

articles/defender-for-iot/organizations/update-ot-software.md

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-title: Update Defender for IoT OT monitoring software versions
-description: Learn how to update (upgrade) Defender for IoT software on OT sensors.
-ms.date: 12/17/2023
+title: Defender for IoT - Update OT monitoring software
+description: Learn how to update the OT software on your Defender for IoT sensors so that you can manage updates efficiently.
+ms.date: 01/20/2025
 ms.topic: upgrade-and-migration-article
+
+#Customer intent: As an IT admin, I want to update OT sensors remotely via the Azure portal so that I can manage updates efficiently.
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-# Update Defender for IoT OT monitoring software
+# Defender for IoT - Update OT monitoring software
 
-This article describes how to update Defender for IoT software versions on OT sensor.
+This article describes how to update the OT software on your Defender for IoT sensors so that you can manage updates and stay up to date with the latest version.
 
 You can purchase pre-configured appliances for your sensors, or install software on your own hardware machines. In either case, you'll need to update software versions to use new features for OT sensors.
 
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     For more information, see [Networking requirements](networking-requirements.md) and [Sensor management options from the Azure portal](how-to-manage-sensors-on-the-cloud.md#sensor-management-options-from-the-azure-portal).
 
-## Update OT sensors
+## Update OT sensors with the latest OT monitoring software
 
 This section describes how to update Defender for IoT OT sensors using any of the supported methods.