Update enable-sap-insights.md

Author: Suzi Zuber

articles/sap/monitor/enable-sap-insights.md

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ author: akarshprabhu
 ms.service: sap-on-azure
 ms.subservice: sap-monitor
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 05/10/2023
+ms.date: 08/21/2024
 ms.author: akak
 #Customer intent: I am an SAP BASIS or cloud infrastructure team member, I want to enable SAP Insights on my Azure monitor for SAP Instance.
 ---
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ ms.author: akak
 
 [!INCLUDE [Azure Monitor for SAP solutions public preview notice](./includes/preview-sap-insights.md)]
 
-The Insights capability in Azure Monitor for SAP Solutions helps you troubleshoot Availability and Performance issues on your SAP workloads. It helps you correlate key SAP components issues with SAP logs, Azure platform metrics and health events. 
+The Insights capability in Azure Monitor for SAP Solutions helps you troubleshoot Availability and Performance issues on your SAP workloads. It helps you correlate key SAP components issues with SAP logs, Azure platform metrics, and health events. 
 In this how-to-guide, learn to enable Insights in Azure Monitor for SAP solutions. You can use SAP Insights with only the latest version of the service, *Azure Monitor for SAP solutions* and not *Azure Monitor for SAP solutions (classic)*
 
 > [!NOTE]
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ cd <script_path>
 ```PowerShell
 $armId = "<AMS ARM ID>"
 ```
-7.	If the VMs belong to a different subscription than AMS, set the list of subscriptions in which VMs of the SAP system are present (use subscription IDs): 
+7.	If the virtual machines (VMs) belong to a different subscription than AMS, set the list of subscriptions in which VMs of the SAP system are present (use subscription IDs): 
 ```PowerShell
 $subscriptions = "<Subscription ID 1>","<Subscription ID 2>"
 ```
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ This capability helps you get an overview regarding availability of your SAP sys
 #### Steps to use availability insights
 1.	Open the AMS instance of your choice and visit the insights tab under Monitoring on the left navigation pane. 
 :::image type="content" source="./media/enable-sap-insights/visit-insights-tab.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the landing page of Insights on AMS.":::
-1. If you completed all [the steps mentioned](#steps-to-enable-insights-in-azure-monitor-for-sap-solutions), you should see the above screen asking for context to be set up. You can set the Time range, SID and the provider (optional, All selected by default).
+1. If you completed all [the steps mentioned](#steps-to-enable-insights-in-azure-monitor-for-sap-solutions), you should see the screen shown in step 1 asking for context to be set up. You can set the Time range, SID, and the provider (optional, All selected by default).
 1.	On the top, you're able to see all the fired alerts related to SAP system and instance availability on this screen. 
 :::image type="content" source="./media/enable-sap-insights/availability-overview.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the overview page of availability insights.":::
 1.	If you're able to see SAP system availability trend, categorized by VM - SAP process list. If you selected a fired alert in the previous step, you're able to see these trends in context with the fired alert. If not, these trends respect the time range you set on the main Time range filter. 
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ This capability helps you get an overview regarding availability of your SAP sys
 It has two categories of insights:
     * Azure platform: VM health events filtered by the time range set, either by the workbook filter or the selected alert. This pane also consists of VM availability metric trend for the chosen VM.
     :::image type="content" source="./media/enable-sap-insights/availability-vm-health.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the VM health events of availability insights.":::
-    * SAP Application: Process availability and contextual insights on the process like error messages (SM21), Lock entries (SM12) and Canceled jobs (SM37) which can help you find issues that might exist in parallel in the system, at the point in time. 
+    * SAP Application: Process availability and contextual insights on the process like error messages (SM21), Lock entries (SM12), and Canceled jobs (SM37) which can help you find issues that might exist in parallel in the system, at the point in time. 
 
 ### Performance Insights
 This capability helps you get an overview regarding performance of your SAP system in one place. You can also correlate key SAP performance issues with related SAP application logs alongside Azure platform utilization metrics and SAP workload configuration drifts easing the overall root-causing process. 
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ This capability helps you get an overview regarding performance of your SAP syst
 
 #### Scope of the preview
 We have insights only for a limited set of issues as part of the preview. We extend this capability to most of the issues supported by AMS alerts before this capability is Generally Available(GA). 
-* Availability insights let you detect and troubleshoot unavailability of Netweaver system, instance and HANA DB. 
+* Availability insights let you detect and troubleshoot unavailability of Netweaver system, instance, and HANA DB. 
 * Performance insights are provided for NetWeaver metrics - High response time(ST03) and Long running batch jobs. 
 
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