Update for acro

Author: timlt

includes/iot-develop-send-telemetry-iot-hub-c.md

@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ sudo apt-get update
 sudo apt-get install -y git cmake build-essential curl libcurl4-openssl-dev libssl-dev uuid-dev
 ```
 
-Verify the version of `cmake` is above **2.8.12** and the version of **GCC** is above **4.4.7**.
+Verify the version of `cmake` is **2.8.12** or greater, and the version of **GCC** is **4.4.7** or greater.
 
 ```sh
 cmake --version
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ To complete this quickstart on Windows, install Visual Studio 2022 and add the r
 [!INCLUDE [iot-hub-include-create-hub-iot-explorer](iot-hub-include-create-hub-iot-explorer.md)]
 
 ## Run the device sample
-In this section, you use the C SDK to send messages from a device to your IoT hub. You'll run a sample that implements a temperature controller with two thermostat sensors.
+In this section, you use the C SDK to send messages from a device to your IoT hub. You run a sample that implements a temperature controller with two thermostat sensors.
 
 ### Build the sample
 1. Open a new console to install the Azure IoT C device SDK and run the code sample. For Windows, select **Start**, type *Developer Command Prompt for VS 2019*, and open the console. For Linux and Raspberry Pi OS, open a terminal for Bash commands.