Update tutorial-managed-virtual-network-on-premise-sql-server.md

Author: jonburchel

articles/data-factory/tutorial-managed-virtual-network-on-premise-sql-server.md

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 # Tutorial: How to access on-premises SQL Server from Data Factory Managed VNet using Private Endpoint
 
-This tutorial provides steps for using the Azure portal to setup Private Link Service and access on-premises SQL Server from Managed VNet using Private Endpoint.
+This tutorial provides steps for using the Azure portal to setup Private Link Service and access on-premises SQL Server from a managed virtual network using a private endpoint. Using a managed virtual network ensures that traffic to and from your on-premises SQL source will all pass through your own private endpoint, thereby securing exposure to the public cloud with an extra layer of security and isolation. The required resources mentioned below are necessary to support the scenario.
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > The solution presented in this article describes SQL Server connectivity, but you can use a similar approach to connect and query other available [on-premises connectors](connector-overview.md) that are supported in Azure Data Factory.