Merge pull request #207337 from w-azure/winona-upload-final

Adjusting inconsistent wording

Author: BCS2022

articles/iot-hub/iot-hub-csharp-csharp-file-upload.md

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ ms.custom: "mqtt, devx-track-csharp"
 
 [!INCLUDE [iot-hub-file-upload-language-selector](../../includes/iot-hub-file-upload-language-selector.md)]
 
-This article shows you how to use the file upload feature of IoT Hub with the Azure IoT .NET device and service SDKs.
+This article demonstrates how to [file upload capabilities of IoT Hub](iot-hub-devguide-file-upload.md) upload a file to [Azure blob storage](../storage/index.yml), using an Azure IoT .NET device and service SDKs. 
 
 The [Send telemetry from a device to an IoT hub](../iot-develop/quickstart-send-telemetry-iot-hub.md?pivots=programming-language-csharp) quickstart and [Send cloud-to-device messages with IoT Hub](iot-hub-csharp-csharp-c2d.md) article show the basic device-to-cloud and cloud-to-device messaging functionality of IoT Hub. The [Configure Message Routing with IoT Hub](tutorial-routing.md) article shows a way to reliably store device-to-cloud messages in Microsoft Azure blob storage. However, in some scenarios, you can't easily map the data your devices send into the relatively small device-to-cloud messages that IoT Hub accepts. For example:
 
@@ -25,48 +25,46 @@ The [Send telemetry from a device to an IoT hub](../iot-develop/quickstart-send-
 * Vibration data sampled at high frequency
 * Some form of preprocessed data
 
-These files are typically batch processed in the cloud using tools such as [Azure Data Factory](../data-factory/introduction.md) or the [Hadoop](../hdinsight/index.yml) stack. When you need to upload files from a device, you can still use the security and reliability of IoT Hub. This article shows you how.
+These files are typically batch processed in the cloud, using tools such as [Azure Data Factory](../data-factory/introduction.md) or the [Hadoop](../hdinsight/index.yml) stack. When you need to upload files from a device, you can still use the security and reliability of IoT Hub. This article shows you how.
 
-At the end of this article you run two .NET console apps:
+At the end of this article, you run two .NET console apps:
 
 * **FileUploadSample**. This device app uploads a file to storage using a SAS URI provided by your IoT hub. You'll run this app from the Azure IoT C# samples repository that you download in the prerequisites.
 
 * **ReadFileUploadNotification**. This service app receives file upload notifications from your IoT hub. You'll create this app.
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> IoT Hub supports many device platforms and languages, including C, Java, Python, and JavaScript, through Azure IoT device SDKs. Refer to the [Azure IoT Developer Center](https://azure.microsoft.com/develop/iot) for step-by-step instructions on how to connect your device to Azure IoT Hub.
+> IoT Hub supports many device platforms and languages (including C, Java, Python, and JavaScript) through Azure IoT device SDKs. Refer to the [Azure IoT Developer Center](https://azure.microsoft.com/develop/iot) to learn how to connect your device to Azure IoT Hub.
 
 [!INCLUDE [iot-hub-include-x509-ca-signed-file-upload-support-note](../../includes/iot-hub-include-x509-ca-signed-file-upload-support-note.md)]
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-* An active Azure account. If you don't have an account, you can create a [free account](https://azure.microsoft.com/pricing/free-trial/) in just a couple of minutes.
-
 * An IoT Hub. Create one with the [CLI](iot-hub-create-using-cli.md) or the [Azure portal](iot-hub-create-through-portal.md).
 
 * A registered device. Register one in the [Azure portal](iot-hub-create-through-portal.md#register-a-new-device-in-the-iot-hub).
 
 * The sample applications you run in this article are written using C# with .NET Core.
 
-    You can download the .NET Core SDK for multiple platforms from [.NET](https://dotnet.microsoft.com/download).
+  Download the .NET Core SDK for multiple platforms from [.NET](https://dotnet.microsoft.com/download).
 
-    You can verify the current version of the .NET Core SDK on your development machine using the following command:
+  Verify the current version of the .NET Core SDK on your development machine using the following command:
 
     ```cmd/sh
     dotnet --version
     ```
 
-* Download the Azure IoT C# samples from [https://github.com/Azure-Samples/azure-iot-samples-csharp/archive/main.zip](https://github.com/Azure-Samples/azure-iot-samples-csharp/archive/main.zip) and extract the ZIP archive.
+* Download the Azure IoT C# samples from [Download sample](https://github.com/Azure-Samples/azure-iot-samples-csharp/archive/main.zip) and extract the ZIP archive.
 
-* Make sure that port 8883 is open in your firewall. The sample in this article uses MQTT protocol, which communicates over port 8883. This port may be blocked in some corporate and educational network environments. For more information and ways to work around this issue, see [Connecting to IoT Hub (MQTT)](iot-hub-mqtt-support.md#connecting-to-iot-hub).
+* Port 8883 should be open in your firewall. The sample in this article uses MQTT protocol, which communicates over port 8883. This port may be blocked in some corporate and educational network environments. For more information and ways to work around this issue, see [Connecting to IoT Hub (MQTT)](iot-hub-mqtt-support.md#connecting-to-iot-hub).
 
 [!INCLUDE [iot-hub-associate-storage](../../includes/iot-hub-include-associate-storage.md)]
 
 ## Upload file from a device app
 
-In this article, you'll use a sample from the Azure IoT C# samples repository you downloaded earlier as the device app. You can open the files below using Visual Studio, Visual Studio Code, or a text editor of your choice.  
+In this article, you use a sample from the Azure IoT C# samples repository you downloaded earlier as the device app. You can open the files below using Visual Studio, Visual Studio Code, or a text editor of your choice.  
 
-The sample is located in the **azure-iot-samples-csharp-main\iot-hub\Samples\device\FileUploadSample** under the folder where you extracted the Azure IoT C# samples.
+The sample is located at **azure-iot-samples-csharp/iot-hub/Samples/device/FileUploadSample** in the folder where you extracted the Azure IoT C# samples.
 
 Examine the code in **FileUpLoadSample.cs**. This file contains the main sample logic. After creating an IoT Hub device client, it follows the standard three-part procedure for uploading files from a device:
 

articles/iot-hub/iot-hub-java-java-file-upload.md

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ ms.custom: [amqp, mqtt, devx-track-java]
 
 [!INCLUDE [iot-hub-file-upload-language-selector](../../includes/iot-hub-file-upload-language-selector.md)]
 
-This article shows you how to use the file upload capabilities of IoT Hub using Java. For an overview of the file upload process, see [Upload Files with IoT Hub](iot-hub-devguide-file-upload.md).
+This article demonstrates how to [file upload capabilities of IoT Hub](iot-hub-devguide-file-upload.md) upload a file to [Azure blob storage](../storage/index.yml), using Java.
 
 The [Send telemetry from a device to an IoT hub](../iot-develop/quickstart-send-telemetry-iot-hub.md?pivots=programming-language-java) quickstart and [Send cloud-to-device messages with IoT Hub](iot-hub-java-java-c2d.md) articles show the basic device-to-cloud and cloud-to-device messaging functionality of IoT Hub. The [Configure message routing with IoT Hub](tutorial-routing.md) tutorial shows a way to reliably store device-to-cloud messages in Azure blob storage. However, in some scenarios, you can't easily map the data your devices send into the relatively small device-to-cloud messages that IoT Hub accepts. For example:
 
@@ -25,10 +25,11 @@ The [Send telemetry from a device to an IoT hub](../iot-develop/quickstart-send-
 * Vibration data sampled at high frequency
 * Some form of preprocessed data.
 
-These files are typically batch processed in the cloud using tools such as [Azure Data Factory](../data-factory/introduction.md) or the [Hadoop](../hdinsight/index.yml) stack. When you need to upload files from a device, you can still use the security and reliability of IoT Hub. This article shows you how. Also, there are two samples located at [https://github.com/Azure/azure-iot-sdk-java/tree/main/device/iot-device-samples/file-upload-sample/src/main/java/samples/com/microsoft/azure/sdk/iot](https://github.com/Azure/azure-iot-sdk-java/tree/main/device/iot-device-samples/file-upload-sample/src/main/java/samples/com/microsoft/azure/sdk/iot) in GitHub.
+These files are typically batch processed in the cloud, using tools such as [Azure Data Factory](../data-factory/introduction.md) or the [Hadoop](../hdinsight/index.yml) stack. When you need to upload files from a device, you can still use the security and reliability of IoT Hub. This article shows you how. View two samples from [azure-iot-sdk-java
+](https://github.com/Azure/azure-iot-sdk-java/tree/main/device/iot-device-samples/file-upload-sample/src/main/java/samples/com/microsoft/azure/sdk/iot) in GitHub.
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> IoT Hub supports many device platforms and languages (including C, .NET, and JavaScript) through Azure IoT device SDKs. Refer to the [Azure IoT Developer Center](https://azure.microsoft.com/develop/iot) for step-by-step instructions on how to connect your device to Azure IoT Hub.
+> IoT Hub supports many device platforms and languages (including C, .NET, and JavaScript) through Azure IoT device SDKs. Refer to the [Azure IoT Developer Center](https://azure.microsoft.com/develop/iot) to learn how to connect your device to Azure IoT Hub.
 
 [!INCLUDE [iot-hub-include-x509-ca-signed-file-upload-support-note](../../includes/iot-hub-include-x509-ca-signed-file-upload-support-note.md)]
 
@@ -42,9 +43,7 @@ These files are typically batch processed in the cloud using tools such as [Azur
 
 * [Maven 3](https://maven.apache.org/download.cgi)
 
-* An active Azure account. (If you don't have an account, you can create a [free account](https://azure.microsoft.com/pricing/free-trial/) in just a couple of minutes.)
-
-* Make sure that port 8883 is open in your firewall. The device sample in this article uses MQTT protocol, which communicates over port 8883. This port may be blocked in some corporate and educational network environments. For more information and ways to work around this issue, see [Connecting to IoT Hub (MQTT)](iot-hub-mqtt-support.md#connecting-to-iot-hub).
+* Port 8883 should be open in your firewall. The device sample in this article uses MQTT protocol, which communicates over port 8883. This port may be blocked in some corporate and educational network environments. For more information and ways to work around this issue, see [Connecting to IoT Hub (MQTT)](iot-hub-mqtt-support.md#connecting-to-iot-hub).
 
 [!INCLUDE [iot-hub-associate-storage](../../includes/iot-hub-include-associate-storage.md)]
 
@@ -472,7 +471,7 @@ The following screenshot shows the output from the **read-file-upload-notificati
 
 ## Next steps
 
-In this article, you learned how to use the file upload capabilities of IoT Hub to simplify file uploads from devices. You can continue to explore IoT hub features and scenarios with the following articles:
+In this article, you learned how to use the file upload feature of IoT Hub to simplify file uploads from devices. You can continue to explore this feature with the following articles:
 
 * [Create an IoT hub programmatically](iot-hub-rm-template-powershell.md)
 

articles/iot-hub/iot-hub-node-node-file-upload.md

@@ -14,13 +14,7 @@ ms.custom: mqtt, devx-track-js
 
 # Upload files from your device to the cloud with IoT Hub (Node.js)
 
-[!INCLUDE [iot-hub-file-upload-language-selector](../../includes/iot-hub-file-upload-language-selector.md)]
-
-The article shows you how to:
-
-* Securely provide a device with an Azure blob URI for uploading a file.
-
-* Use the IoT Hub file upload notifications to trigger processing the file in your app back end.
+This article demonstrates how to [file upload capabilities of IoT Hub](iot-hub-devguide-file-upload.md) upload a file to [Azure blob storage](../storage/index.yml), using Node.js.
 
 The [Send telemetry from a device to an IoT hub](../iot-develop/quickstart-send-telemetry-iot-hub.md?pivots=programming-language-nodejs) quickstart and [Send cloud-to-device messages with IoT Hub](iot-hub-node-node-c2d.md) articles show the basic device-to-cloud and cloud-to-device messaging functionality of IoT Hub. The [Configure Message Routing with IoT Hub](tutorial-routing.md) tutorial shows a way to reliably store device-to-cloud messages in Microsoft Azure blob storage. However, in some scenarios, you can't easily map the data your devices send into the relatively small device-to-cloud messages that IoT Hub accepts. For example:
 
@@ -29,7 +23,7 @@ The [Send telemetry from a device to an IoT hub](../iot-develop/quickstart-send-
 * Vibration data sampled at high frequency
 * Some form of pre-processed data.
 
-These files are typically batch processed in the cloud using tools such as [Azure Data Factory](../data-factory/introduction.md) or the [Hadoop](../hdinsight/index.yml) stack. When you need to upland files from a device, you can still use the security and reliability of IoT Hub. This article shows you how.
+These files are typically batch processed in the cloud, using tools such as [Azure Data Factory](../data-factory/introduction.md) or the [Hadoop](../hdinsight/index.yml) stack. When you need to upland files from a device, you can still use the security and reliability of IoT Hub. This article shows you how.
 
 At the end of this article, you run two Node.js console apps:
 
@@ -38,21 +32,19 @@ At the end of this article, you run two Node.js console apps:
 * **FileUploadNotification.js**, which receives file upload notifications from your IoT hub.
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> IoT Hub supports many device platforms and languages, including C, Java, Python, and JavaScript, through Azure IoT device SDKs. Refer to the [Azure IoT Developer Center](https://azure.microsoft.com/develop/iot) for step-by-step instructions on how to connect your device to Azure IoT Hub.
+> IoT Hub supports many device platforms and languages (including C, Java, Python, and JavaScript) through Azure IoT device SDKs. Refer to the [Azure IoT Developer Center](https://azure.microsoft.com/develop/iot) to learn how to connect your device to Azure IoT Hub.
 
 [!INCLUDE [iot-hub-include-x509-ca-signed-file-upload-support-note](../../includes/iot-hub-include-x509-ca-signed-file-upload-support-note.md)]
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-* An active Azure account. (If you don't have an account, you can create a [free account](https://azure.microsoft.com/pricing/free-trial/) in just a couple of minutes.)
-
 * An IoT Hub. Create one with the [CLI](iot-hub-create-using-cli.md) or the [Azure portal](iot-hub-create-through-portal.md).
 
 * A registered device. Register one in the [Azure portal](iot-hub-create-through-portal.md#register-a-new-device-in-the-iot-hub).
 
 * Node.js version 10.0.x or later. The LTS version is recommended. You can download Node.js from [nodejs.org](https://nodejs.org).
 
-* Make sure that port 8883 is open in your firewall. The device sample in this article uses MQTT protocol, which communicates over port 8883. This port may be blocked in some corporate and educational network environments. For more information and ways to work around this issue, see [Connecting to IoT Hub (MQTT)](iot-hub-mqtt-support.md#connecting-to-iot-hub).
+* Port 8883 should be open in your firewall. The device sample in this article uses MQTT protocol, which communicates over port 8883. This port may be blocked in some corporate and educational network environments. For more information and ways to work around this issue, see [Connecting to IoT Hub (MQTT)](iot-hub-mqtt-support.md#connecting-to-iot-hub).
 
 [!INCLUDE [iot-hub-associate-storage](../../includes/iot-hub-include-associate-storage.md)]
 
@@ -303,7 +295,7 @@ You can use the portal to view the uploaded file in the storage container you co
 
 ## Next steps
 
-In this article, you learned how to use the file upload capabilities of IoT Hub to simplify file uploads from devices. You can continue to explore IoT hub features and scenarios with the following articles:
+In this article, you learned how to use the file upload feature of IoT Hub to simplify file uploads from devices. You can continue to explore this feature with the following articles:
 
 * [Create an IoT hub programmatically](iot-hub-rm-template-powershell.md)