[OCI] Incorp overview comments

Author: dlepow

articles/virtual-machines/workloads/oracle/oracle-oci-overview.md

@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ Applications you can run in a cross-cloud configuration include:
 * JD Edwards EnterpriseOne
 * PeopleSoft
 * Oracle Retail applications
-* Hyperion
+* Oracle Hyperion Financial Management
 
 The following diagram is a high-level overview of the connected solution. For simplicity, the diagram shows only an application tier and a data tier. Depending on the application architecutre, your solution could include additional tiers such as a web tier in Azure. For more information, see the following sections.
 
@@ -50,11 +50,11 @@ The following diagram is a high-level overview of the connected solution. For si
 
 ## Networking
 
-Enterprise customers often choose to diversify and deploy workloads over multiple clouds for reasons including disaster recovery, high availability, lower cost, and avoiding single vendor lock-in. To diversify, customers interconnect cloud networks using the internet, IPSec VPN, or using the cloud provider’s direct connectivity solution via your on-premises network. Interconnecting cloud networks can require significant investments in time, money, design, procurement, installation, testing, and operations. 
+Enterprise customers often choose to diversify and deploy workloads over multiple clouds for various business and operational reasons. To diversify, customers interconnect cloud networks using the internet, IPSec VPN, or using the cloud provider’s direct connectivity solution via your on-premises network. Interconnecting cloud networks can require significant investments in time, money, design, procurement, installation, testing, and operations. 
 
-To address these customer challenges, Oracle and Microsoft enable an integrated multi-cloud experience. Cross-cloud networking is established by connecting an [ExpressRoute](../../../expressroute/expressroute-introduction.md) circuit in Microsoft Azure with a [FastConnect](https://docs.cloud.oracle.com/iaas/Content/Network/Concepts/fastconnectoverview.htm) circuit in OCI. This connectivity is possible where an Azure ExpressRoute peering location is in proximity to or in the same peering location as the OCI FastConnect. This setup allows for secure, fast connectivity between the two clouds without the need for an intermediate service provider.
+To address these customer challenges, Oracle and Microsoft have enabled an integrated multi-cloud experience. Cross-cloud networking is established by connecting an [ExpressRoute](../../../expressroute/expressroute-introduction.md) circuit in Microsoft Azure with a [FastConnect](https://docs.cloud.oracle.com/iaas/Content/Network/Concepts/fastconnectoverview.htm) circuit in OCI. This connectivity is possible where an Azure ExpressRoute peering location is in proximity to or in the same peering location as the OCI FastConnect. This setup allows for secure, fast connectivity between the two clouds without the need for an intermediate service provider.
 
-Using ExpressRoute and FastConnect, customers can peer a virtual network in Azure with a virtual cloud network in OCI, provided that the private IP address space does not overlap. Peering the two networks allows a resource in the virtual network to communicate to a resource in the OCI virtual cloud network as if they were both in the same network.
+Using ExpressRoute and FastConnect, customers can peer a virtual network in Azure with a virtual cloud network in OCI, provided that the private IP address space does not overlap. Peering the two networks allows a resource in the virtual network to communicate to a resource in the OCI virtual cloud network as if they are both in the same network.
 
 ## Network security
 
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ Additionally, you can set up [security lists](https://docs.cloud.oracle.com/iaas
 
 ## Identity
 
-Identity is one of the core pillars of the partnership between Microsoft and Oracle. Significant work has been done to integrate [Oracle Identity Cloud Service](https://docs.oracle.com/en/cloud/paas/identity-cloud/index.html) (IDCS) with [Azure Active Directory](../../../active-directory/index.yml) (Azure AD). Azure AD is Microsoft’s cloud-based identity and access management service. It helps your employees and users sign in and access various resources. Azure AD also allows you to manage your users and their permissions.
+Identity is one of the core pillars of the partnership between Microsoft and Oracle. Significant work has been done to integrate [Oracle Identity Cloud Service](https://docs.oracle.com/en/cloud/paas/identity-cloud/index.html) (IDCS) with [Azure Active Directory](../../../active-directory/index.yml) (Azure AD). Azure AD is Microsoft’s cloud-based identity and access management service. It helps your users sign in and access various resources. Azure AD also allows you to manage your users and their permissions.
 
 Currently, this integration allows you to manage in one central location, which is Azure Active Directory. Azure AD synchronizes any changes in the directory with the corresponding Oracle directory and is used for single sign-on to cross-cloud Oracle solutions.
 

articles/virtual-machines/workloads/oracle/oracle-overview.md

@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ Run Oracle databases on Azure infrastructure using Linux images available in the
 
 * Oracle Database 12.1, 12.2, and 18.3 Standard Edition 
 
-You can choose to bring other Oracle database images as well as custom images.
+You can also choose to base a solution on a custom image you create from scratch in Azure or upload a custom image from your on-premises environment.
 
 Optionally configure with multiple attached disks and improve database performance by installing Oracle Automated Storage Management (ASM).
 
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ Use Terraform templates to set up Azure infrastructure and install Oracle applic
 * JD Edwards EnterpriseOne
 * PeopleSoft
 * Oracle Retail applications
-* Hyperion
+* Oracle Hyperion Financial Management
 
 Also deploy custom applications in Azure that connect with OCI and other Azure services.
 
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ Use Oracle Database Cloud Services (Autonomous Database, RAC, Exadata, DBaaS, Si
 
 ## Licensing
 
-Deployment of Oracle applications in Azure is based on a "bring your own license" model. It's assumed you are properly licensed to use Oracle software and that you have a current support agreement in place with Oracle. Oracle has guaranteed license mobility from on-premises to Azure. See the Oracle-Azure [FAQ](https://www.oracle.com/cloud/technologies/oracle-azure-faq.htm).
+Deployment of Oracle applications in Azure is based on a "bring your own license" model. It's assumed you are properly licensed to use Oracle software and that you have a current support agreement in place with Oracle. Oracle has guaranteed license mobility from on-premises to Azure. See the Oracle-Azure [FAQ](https://www.oracle.com/cloud/technologies/oracle-azure-faq.html).
 
 ## Next steps