Merge pull request #295982 from DENKEN02MSFT/ADTFreshnessTop40_Row40

ADT Freshness - row 40

Author: JillGrant615

articles/digital-twins/how-to-create-data-history-connection.md

@@ -3,34 +3,34 @@ author: baanders
 description: include file for Azure Digital Twins - set up CLI and the IoT extension
 ms.service: azure-digital-twins
 ms.topic: include
-ms.date: 1/18/2022
+ms.date: 03/07/2025
 ms.author: baanders
 ---
 
 ### Set up CLI session
 
-To start working with Azure Digital Twins in the CLI, the first thing to do is log in and set the CLI context to your subscription for this session. Run these commands in your CLI window:
+To start working with Azure Digital Twins in the CLI, the first thing to do is sign in and set the CLI context to your subscription for this session. Run these commands in your CLI window:
 
 ```azurecli-interactive
 az login
 az account set --subscription "<your-Azure-subscription-ID>"
 ```
 
 > [!TIP]
-> You can also use your subscription name instead of the ID in the command above. 
+> You can also use your subscription name instead of the ID in the previous command. 
 
-If this is the first time you've used this subscription with Azure Digital Twins, run this command to register with the Azure Digital Twins namespace. (If you're not sure, it's ok to run it again even if you've done it sometime in the past.)
+If you're using this subscription with Azure Digital Twins for the first time, run the following command to register with the Azure Digital Twins namespace. (If you're not sure, it's ok to run it again even if you ran it sometime in the past.)
 
 ```azurecli-interactive
 az provider register --namespace 'Microsoft.DigitalTwins'
 ```
 
-Next you'll add the [Microsoft Azure IoT Extension for Azure CLI](/cli/azure/service-page/azure%20iot?view=azure-cli-latest&preserve-view=true), to enable commands for interacting with Azure Digital Twins and other IoT services. Run this command to make sure you have the latest version of the extension:
+Next you add the [Microsoft Azure IoT Extension for Azure CLI](/cli/azure/service-page/azure%20iot?view=azure-cli-latest&preserve-view=true), to enable commands for interacting with Azure Digital Twins and other IoT services. Run this command to make sure you have the latest version of the extension:
 
 ```azurecli-interactive
 az extension add --upgrade --name azure-iot
 ```
 
-Now you are ready to work with Azure Digital Twins in the Azure CLI.
+Now you're ready to work with Azure Digital Twins in the Azure CLI.
 
-You can verify this by running `az dt --help` at any time to see a list of the top-level Azure Digital Twins commands that are available.
+You can verify this status by running `az dt --help` at any time to see a list of the top-level Azure Digital Twins commands that are available.