edit pass: two-azure-monitor-topics

Author: paulth1

articles/storage/common/monitor-storage.md

@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ The **Overview** page in the Azure portal for each storage resource includes a b
 ## What is Azure Monitor?
 Azure Storage creates monitoring data by using [Azure Monitor](../../azure-monitor/overview.md), a full stack monitoring service in Azure. Azure Monitor provides a complete set of features to monitor your Azure resources and resources in other clouds and on-premises. 
 
-To learn more about Azure Monitor, read the article [Monitoring Azure resources with Azure Monitor](../../azure-monitor/insights/monitor-azure-resource.md). The article describes the following subjects:
+To learn more about Azure Monitor, see [Monitoring Azure resources with Azure Monitor](../../azure-monitor/insights/monitor-azure-resource.md). The article describes the following subjects:
 
 - What is Azure Monitor?
 - Costs associated with monitoring
@@ -51,8 +51,8 @@ Log entries are created only if there are requests made against the service endp
  The following types of authenticated requests are logged:
 
 - Successful requests
-- Failed requests, which includes timeout, throttling, network, authorization, and other errors
-- Requests that use a Shared Access Signature (SAS) or OAuth, which includes failed and successful requests
+- Failed requests, including timeout, throttling, network, authorization, and other errors
+- Requests that use a shared access signature or OAuth, including failed and successful requests
 - Requests to analytics data (classic log data in the **$logs** container and class metric data in the **$metric** tables)
 
 Requests made by the storage service itself, like log creation or deletion, aren't logged. For a full list of the logged data, see [Storage logged operations and status messages](/rest/api/storageservices/storage-analytics-logged-operations-and-status-messages) and [Storage log format](monitor-storage-reference.md).
@@ -340,7 +340,7 @@ Data is stored in these tables.
 
 ### Azure Storage Log Analytics queries in Azure Monitor
 
-Here are some queries that you can enter in the **Log search** search bar to help you monitor your Azure Storage accounts. These queries work with the [new language](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/azure-monitor/log-query/log-query-overview).
+Here are some queries that you can enter in the **Log search** bar to help you monitor your Azure Storage accounts. These queries work with the [new language](https://docs.microsoft.com/azure/azure-monitor/log-query/log-query-overview).
 
 Use these queries to help you monitor your Azure Storage accounts:
 

articles/storage/common/storage-analytics-metrics.md

@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ For full details of the schemas for these tables, see [Storage Analytics metrics
 |20140522T1100|user;QueryEntity|2014-05-22T11:01:16.7650250Z|1|1|538|633|100|3|3|100|  
 |20140522T1100|user;UpdateEntity|2014-05-22T11:01:16.7650250Z|1|1|771|217|100|9|6|100|  
 
-In this example of minute metrics data, the partition key uses the time at minute resolution. The row key identifies the type of information that's stored in the row, which is composed of two pieces of information, the access type and the request type:  
+In this example of minute metrics data, the partition key uses the time at minute resolution. The row key identifies the type of information that's stored in the row. The information is composed of the access type and the request type:  
 
 -   The access type is either **user** or **system**, where **user** refers to all user requests to the storage service and **system** refers to requests made by Storage Analytics.  
 -   The request type is either **all**, in which case it's a summary line, or it identifies the specific API such as **QueryEntity** or **UpdateEntity**.