Merge pull request #189219 from djrmetaswitch/overview-restructure

Overview redraft.

Author: LJSpiller

articles/private-5g-core/how-to-guide-deploy-a-private-mobile-network-azure-portal.md

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ ms.custom: template-how-to
 
 # Deploy a private mobile network through Azure Private 5G Core Preview - Azure portal
 
-Azure Private 5G Core Preview is an Azure cloud service for deploying and managing *private mobile networks* for enterprises. Private mobile networks provide high performance, low latency, and secure connectivity for 5G Internet of Things (IoT) devices on an enterprise's premises. In this how-to guide, you'll use the Azure portal to deploy a private mobile network to match your enterprise's requirements.
+Private mobile networks provide high performance, low latency, and secure connectivity for 5G Internet of Things (IoT) devices. In this how-to guide, you'll use the Azure portal to deploy a private mobile network to match your enterprise's requirements.
 
 You'll create the following resources as part of this how-to guide:
 

articles/private-5g-core/index.yml

@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ landingContent:
       - linkListType: overview
         links:
           - text: Cloud monitoring with Azure Log Analytics
-            url: private-5g-core-overview.md#log-analytics-integration
+            url: private-5g-core-overview.md#azure-centralized-monitoring
       - linkListType: concept
         links:
           - text: Local monitoring with distributed tracing

articles/private-5g-core/key-components-of-a-private-mobile-network.md

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ Each private mobile network contains one or more *sites*. A site is a physical e
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/key-components-of-a-private-mobile-network/site-physical-components.png" alt-text="Diagram displaying the main components of a site in a private mobile network":::
 
-- Each site contains an Azure Stack Edge device that hosts a *packet core instance*. The packet core instance is a cloud-native implementation of the 3GPP standards-defined 5G Next Generation Core (5G NGC or 5GC).
+- Each site contains an Azure Stack Edge device that hosts a *packet core instance*, which is deployed using Azure Private 5G Core. The packet core instance is a cloud-native implementation of the 3GPP standards-defined 5G Next Generation Core (5G NGC or 5GC).
 
     When you add a site to your private mobile network, you'll create a *Kubernetes cluster* on the Azure Stack Edge device. This serves as the platform for the packet core instance.