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Author: sipastak

articles/virtual-desktop/azure-extended-zones.md

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 When deploying Azure Virtual Desktop in an Azure Extended Zone, all of the Azure Virtual Desktop metadata objects you create, such as host post pools, workspaces and application groups remain in the main Azure regions. The control plane components, such as the web service, broker service, gateway service, diagnostics, and extensibility components, are also only available in the main Azure regions. Only the session host virtual machines are deployed in the Azure Extended Zone. 
 
-You can benefit from reduced latency using Azure Extended Zones, due to its proximity and Azure Extended Zones uses [RDP Shortpath](rdp-shortpath.md). RDP Shortpath establishes a direct UDP-based transport between a supported Windows Remote Desktop client and session host. The removal of extra relay points reduces round-trip time, which improves connection reliability and user experience with latency-sensitive applications and input methods. 
+Due to the proximity from the end user to the session host, you can benefit from reduced latency using Azure Extended Zones. Azure Extended Zones uses [RDP Shortpath](rdp-shortpath.md), which establishes a direct UDP-based transport between a supported Windows Remote Desktop client and session host. The removal of extra relay points reduces round-trip time, which improves connection reliability and user experience with latency-sensitive applications and input methods. 
 
 [Azure Private Link](private-link-overview.md) can be used with Azure Extended Zones. Azure Private Link can help with reducing latency and improving security. By creating a [private endpoint](../private-link/private-endpoint-overview.md), traffic between your virtual network and the service remains on the Microsoft network, so you no longer need to expose your service to the public internet.