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articles/azure-functions/functions-bindings-azure-sql-input.md

@@ -289,7 +289,7 @@ public class ToDoItem {
 <a id="http-trigger-get-multiple-items-java"></a>
 ### HTTP trigger, get multiple rows
 
-The following example shows a SQL input binding in a Java function that is [triggered by an HTTP](./functions-bindings-http-webhook-trigger.md) request and reads from a query and returns the results in the HTTP response.
+The following example shows a SQL input binding in a Java function that is [triggered by an HTTP](./functions-bindings-http-webhook-trigger.md) request. It reads from a query and returns the results in the HTTP response.
 
 ```java
 package com.function;
@@ -327,7 +327,7 @@ public class GetToDoItems {
 <a id="http-trigger-look-up-id-from-query-string-java"></a>
 ### HTTP trigger, get row by ID from query string
 
-The following example shows a SQL input binding in a Java function that is [triggered by an HTTP](./functions-bindings-http-webhook-trigger.md) request and reads from a query filtered by a parameter from the query string and returns the row in the HTTP response.
+The following example shows a SQL input binding in a Java function that is [triggered by an HTTP](./functions-bindings-http-webhook-trigger.md) request. It reads from a query, which is filtered by a parameter from the query string, and it returns the row in the HTTP response.
 
 ```java
 public class GetToDoItem {
@@ -354,7 +354,7 @@ public class GetToDoItem {
 <a id="http-trigger-delete-one-or-multiple-rows-java"></a>
 ### HTTP trigger, delete rows
 
-The following example shows a SQL input binding in a Java function that is [triggered by an HTTP](./functions-bindings-http-webhook-trigger.md) request and executes a stored procedure with input from the HTTP request query parameter.
+The following example shows a SQL input binding in a Java function that is [triggered by an HTTP](./functions-bindings-http-webhook-trigger.md) request. It executes a stored procedure with input from the HTTP request query parameter.
 
 The stored procedure `dbo.DeleteToDo` must be created on the database. In this example, the stored procedure deletes a single record or all records depending on the value of the parameter.
 
@@ -402,7 +402,7 @@ The examples refer to a database table:
 <a id="http-trigger-get-multiple-items-javascript"></a>
 ### HTTP trigger, get multiple rows
 
-The following example shows a SQL input binding that is [triggered by an HTTP](./functions-bindings-http-webhook-trigger.md) request and reads from a query and returns the results in the HTTP response.
+The following example shows a SQL input binding that is [triggered by an HTTP](./functions-bindings-http-webhook-trigger.md) request. It reads from a query and returns the results in the HTTP response.
 
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@@ -477,7 +477,7 @@ module.exports = async function (context, req, todoItems) {
 <a id="http-trigger-look-up-id-from-query-string-javascript"></a>
 ### HTTP trigger, get row by ID from query string
 
-The following example shows a SQL input binding that is [triggered by an HTTP](./functions-bindings-http-webhook-trigger.md) request and reads from a query filtered by a parameter from the query string and returns the row in the HTTP response.
+The following example shows a SQL input binding that is [triggered by an HTTP](./functions-bindings-http-webhook-trigger.md) request. It reads from a query, which is filtered by a parameter from the query string, and it returns the row in the HTTP response.
 
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@@ -553,7 +553,7 @@ module.exports = async function (context, req, todoItem) {
 <a id="http-trigger-delete-one-or-multiple-rows-javascript"></a>
 ### HTTP trigger, delete rows
 
-The following example shows a SQL input binding that is [triggered by an HTTP](./functions-bindings-http-webhook-trigger.md) request and executes a stored procedure with input from the HTTP request query parameter.
+The following example shows a SQL input binding that is [triggered by an HTTP](./functions-bindings-http-webhook-trigger.md) request. It executes a stored procedure with input from the HTTP request query parameter.
 
 The stored procedure `dbo.DeleteToDo` must be created on the database. In this example, the stored procedure deletes a single record or all records depending on the value of the parameter.
 
@@ -644,7 +644,7 @@ The examples refer to a database table:
 <a id="http-trigger-get-multiple-items-powershell"></a>
 ### HTTP trigger, get multiple rows
 
-The following example shows a SQL input binding in a function.json file and a PowerShell function that is [triggered by an HTTP](./functions-bindings-http-webhook-trigger.md) request and reads from a query and returns the results in the HTTP response.
+The following example shows a SQL input binding in a function.json file and a PowerShell function that is [triggered by an HTTP](./functions-bindings-http-webhook-trigger.md) request. It reads from a query and returns the results in the HTTP response.
 
 The following is binding data in the function.json file:
 
@@ -693,7 +693,7 @@ Push-OutputBinding -Name res -Value ([HttpResponseContext]@{
 <a id="http-trigger-look-up-id-from-query-string-powershell"></a>
 ### HTTP trigger, get row by ID from query string
 
-The following example shows a SQL input binding in a PowerShell function that is [triggered by an HTTP](./functions-bindings-http-webhook-trigger.md) request and reads from a query filtered by a parameter from the query string and returns the row in the HTTP response.
+The following example shows a SQL input binding in a PowerShell function that is [triggered by an HTTP](./functions-bindings-http-webhook-trigger.md) request. It reads from a query, which is filtered by a parameter from the query string, and it returns the row in the HTTP response.
 
 The following is binding data in the function.json file:
 
@@ -744,7 +744,7 @@ Push-OutputBinding -Name res -Value ([HttpResponseContext]@{
 <a id="http-trigger-delete-one-or-multiple-rows-powershell"></a>
 ### HTTP trigger, delete rows
 
-The following example shows a SQL input binding in a function.json file and a PowerShell function that is [triggered by an HTTP](./functions-bindings-http-webhook-trigger.md) request and executes a stored procedure with input from the HTTP request query parameter.
+The following example shows a SQL input binding in a function.json file and a PowerShell function that is [triggered by an HTTP](./functions-bindings-http-webhook-trigger.md) request. It executes a stored procedure with input from the HTTP request query parameter.
 
 The stored procedure `dbo.DeleteToDo` must be created on the database. In this example, the stored procedure deletes a single record or all records depending on the value of the parameter.
 
@@ -814,7 +814,7 @@ The examples refer to a database table:
 <a id="http-trigger-get-multiple-items-python"></a>
 ### HTTP trigger, get multiple rows
 
-The following example shows a SQL input binding in a function.json file and a Python function that is [triggered by an HTTP](./functions-bindings-http-webhook-trigger.md) request and reads from a query and returns the results in the HTTP response.
+The following example shows a SQL input binding in a function.json file and a Python function that is [triggered by an HTTP](./functions-bindings-http-webhook-trigger.md) request. It reads from a query and returns the results in the HTTP response.
 
 # [v2](#tab/python-v2)
 
@@ -896,7 +896,7 @@ def main(req: func.HttpRequest, todoItems: func.SqlRowList) -> func.HttpResponse
 <a id="http-trigger-look-up-id-from-query-string-python"></a>
 ### HTTP trigger, get row by ID from query string
 
-The following example shows a SQL input binding in a Python function that is [triggered by an HTTP](./functions-bindings-http-webhook-trigger.md) request and reads from a query filtered by a parameter from the query string and returns the row in the HTTP response.
+The following example shows a SQL input binding in a Python function that is [triggered by an HTTP](./functions-bindings-http-webhook-trigger.md) request. It reads from a query, which is filtered by a parameter from the query string, and it returns the row in the HTTP response.
 
 # [v2](#tab/python-v2)
 
@@ -981,7 +981,7 @@ def main(req: func.HttpRequest, todoItem: func.SqlRowList) -> func.HttpResponse:
 <a id="http-trigger-delete-one-or-multiple-rows-python"></a>
 ### HTTP trigger, delete rows
 
-The following example shows a SQL input binding in a function.json file and a Python function that is [triggered by an HTTP](./functions-bindings-http-webhook-trigger.md) request and executes a stored procedure with input from the HTTP request query parameter.
+The following example shows a SQL input binding in a function.json file and a Python function that is [triggered by an HTTP](./functions-bindings-http-webhook-trigger.md) reques. It executes a stored procedure with input from the HTTP request query parameter.
 
 The stored procedure `dbo.DeleteToDo` must be created on the database. In this example, the stored procedure deletes a single record or all records depending on the value of the parameter.
 

articles/azure-functions/functions-bindings-azure-sql-output.md

@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ The examples refer to a `ToDoItem` class and a corresponding database table:
 
 :::code language="sql" source="~/functions-sql-todo-sample/sql/create.sql" range="1-7":::
 
-To return [multiple output bindings](./dotnet-isolated-process-guide.md#multiple-output-bindings) in our samples, we'll create a custom return type:
+To return [multiple output bindings](./dotnet-isolated-process-guide.md#multiple-output-bindings) in our samples, we create a custom return type:
 
 ```cs
 public static class OutputType
@@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ CREATE TABLE dbo.RequestLog (
 )
 ```
 
-To use an additional output binding, we add a class for `RequestLog` and  modify our `OutputType` class:
+To use an extra output binding, we add a class for `RequestLog` and  modify our `OutputType` class:
 
 ```cs
 using System;
@@ -378,7 +378,7 @@ public class ToDoItem {
 <a id="http-trigger-write-record-to-table-java"></a>
 ### HTTP trigger, write a record to a table
 
-The following example shows a SQL output binding in a Java function that adds a record to a table, using data provided in an HTTP POST request as a JSON body. The function takes an additional dependency on the [com.google.code.gson](https://github.com/google/gson) library to parse the JSON body.
+The following example shows a SQL output binding in a Java function that adds a record to a table, using data provided in an HTTP POST request as a JSON body. The function takes another dependency on the [com.google.code.gson](https://github.com/google/gson) library to parse the JSON body.
 
 ```xml
 <dependency>
@@ -423,7 +423,7 @@ public class PostToDo {
 <a id="http-trigger-write-to-two-tables-java"></a>
 ### HTTP trigger, write to two tables
 
-The following example shows a SQL output binding in a JavaS function that adds records to a database in two different tables (`dbo.ToDo` and `dbo.RequestLog`), using data provided in an HTTP POST request as a JSON body and multiple output bindings. The function takes an additional dependency on the [com.google.code.gson](https://github.com/google/gson) library to parse the JSON body.
+The following example shows a SQL output binding in a JavaS function that adds records to a database in two different tables (`dbo.ToDo` and `dbo.RequestLog`), using data provided in an HTTP POST request as a JSON body and multiple output bindings. The function takes another dependency on the [com.google.code.gson](https://github.com/google/gson) library to parse the JSON body.
 
 ```xml
 <dependency>
@@ -1098,7 +1098,7 @@ The [C# library](functions-dotnet-class-library.md) uses the [SqlAttribute](http
 | Attribute property |Description|
 |---------|---------|
 | **CommandText** | Required. The name of the table being written to by the binding.  |
-| **ConnectionStringSetting** | Required. The name of an app setting that contains the connection string for the database to which data is being written. This isn't the actual connection string and must instead resolve to an environment variable. | 
+| **ConnectionStringSetting** | Required. The name of an app setting that contains the connection string for the database to which data is being written. This value isn't the actual connection string and must instead resolve to an environment variable. | 
 
 
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@@ -1111,7 +1111,7 @@ In the [Java functions runtime library](/java/api/overview/azure/functions/runti
 | Element |Description|
 |---------|---------|
 | **commandText** | Required. The name of the table being written to by the binding.  |
-| **connectionStringSetting** | Required. The name of an app setting that contains the connection string for the database to which data is being written. This isn't the actual connection string and must instead resolve to an environment variable.| 
+| **connectionStringSetting** | Required. The name of an app setting that contains the connection string for the database to which data is being written. This value isn't the actual connection string and must instead resolve to an environment variable.| 
 |**name** |  Required. The unique name of the function binding. | 
 
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@@ -1126,7 +1126,7 @@ The following table explains the properties that you can set on the `options` ob
 | Property | Description |
 |---------|----------------------|
 | **commandText** | Required. The name of the table being written to by the binding.  |
-| **connectionStringSetting** | Required. The name of an app setting that contains the connection string for the database to which data is being written. This isn't the actual connection string and must instead resolve to an environment variable. Optional keywords in the connection string value are [available to refine SQL bindings connectivity](./functions-bindings-azure-sql.md#sql-connection-string). |
+| **connectionStringSetting** | Required. The name of an app setting that contains the connection string for the database to which data is being written. This value isn't the actual connection string and must instead resolve to an environment variable. Optional keywords in the connection string value are [available to refine SQL bindings connectivity](./functions-bindings-azure-sql.md#sql-connection-string). |
 
 # [Model v3](#tab/nodejs-v3)
 
@@ -1138,7 +1138,7 @@ The following table explains the binding configuration properties that you set i
 |**direction** | Required. Must be set to `out`. |
 |**name** | Required. The name of the variable that represents the entity in function code. | 
 | **commandText** | Required. The name of the table being written to by the binding.  |
-| **connectionStringSetting** | Required. The name of an app setting that contains the connection string for the database to which data is being written. This isn't the actual connection string and must instead resolve to an environment variable. Optional keywords in the connection string value are [available to refine SQL bindings connectivity](./functions-bindings-azure-sql.md#sql-connection-string). |
+| **connectionStringSetting** | Required. The name of an app setting that contains the connection string for the database to which data is being written. This value isn't the actual connection string and must instead resolve to an environment variable. Optional keywords in the connection string value are [available to refine SQL bindings connectivity](./functions-bindings-azure-sql.md#sql-connection-string). |
 
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@@ -1154,7 +1154,7 @@ The following table explains the binding configuration properties that you set i
 |**direction** | Required. Must be set to `out`. |
 |**name** | Required. The name of the variable that represents the entity in function code. | 
 | **commandText** | Required. The name of the table being written to by the binding.  |
-| **connectionStringSetting** | Required. The name of an app setting that contains the connection string for the database to which data is being written. This isn't the actual connection string and must instead resolve to an environment variable. Optional keywords in the connection string value are [available to refine SQL bindings connectivity](./functions-bindings-azure-sql.md#sql-connection-string). |
+| **connectionStringSetting** | Required. The name of an app setting that contains the connection string for the database to which data is being written. This value isn't the actual connection string and must instead resolve to an environment variable. Optional keywords in the connection string value are [available to refine SQL bindings connectivity](./functions-bindings-azure-sql.md#sql-connection-string). |
 
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@@ -1168,7 +1168,7 @@ The `CommandText` property is the name of the table where the data is to be stor
 
 The output bindings use the T-SQL [MERGE](/sql/t-sql/statements/merge-transact-sql) statement which requires [SELECT](/sql/t-sql/statements/merge-transact-sql#permissions) permissions on the target database.
 
-If an exception occurs when a SQL output binding is executed then the function code stop executing. This may result in an error code being returned, such as an HTTP trigger returning a 500 error code. If the `IAsyncCollector` is used in a .NET function then the function code can handle exceptions throw by the call to `FlushAsync()`.
+If an exception occurs when a SQL output binding is executed, then the function code stops executing. This behavior may result in an error code being returned, such as an HTTP trigger returning a 500 error code. If the `IAsyncCollector` is used in a .NET function, then the function code can handle exceptions throw by the call to `FlushAsync()`.
 
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