Various doc updates

Author: maud-lv

articles/service-connector/how-to-use-service-connector-in-aks.md

@@ -1,69 +1,71 @@
 ---
-title: How Service Connector helps Azure Kubernetes Service (AKS) connect to other Azure services
-description: Learn how to use Service Connector in Azure Kubernetes Service (AKS). 
+title: Use Service Connector in Azure Kubernetes Service (AKS)
+description: Learn how to use Service Connector to connect AKS to other Azure services. Learn about Service Connector operations, resource management, and troubleshooting.
 author: houk-ms
 ms.service: service-connector
 ms.topic: conceptual
-ms.date: 03/01/2024
+ms.date: 02/06/2025
 ms.author: honc
 ---
+
 # How to use Service Connector in Azure Kubernetes Service (AKS)
 
-Azure Kubernetes Service (AKS) is one of the compute services supported by Service Connector. This article aims to help you understand:
+Azure Kubernetes Service (AKS) is one of the compute services supported by Service Connector. 
+This article aims to help you understand:
 
 * What operations are made on the cluster when creating a service connection.
-* How to use the kubernetes resources Service Connector creates.
-* How to troubleshoot and view logs of Service Connector in an AKS cluster.
+* How to use the Kubernetes resources created by Service Connector.
+* How to troubleshoot and view Service Connector logs in an AKS cluster.
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
 * This guide assumes that you already know the [basic concepts of Service Connector](concept-service-connector-internals.md).
 
-## What operations Service Connector makes on the cluster
+## Learn about operations performed by Service Connector on the AKS cluster
 
 Depending on the different target services and authentication types selected when creating a service connection, Service Connector makes different operations on the AKS cluster. The following lists the possible operations made by Service Connector.
 
-### Add the Service Connector kubernetes extension
+### Adding the Service Connector Kubernetes extension
 
-A kubernetes extension named `sc-extension` is added to the cluster the first time a service connection is created. Later on, the extension helps create kubernetes resources in user's cluster, whenever a service connection request comes to Service Connector. You can find the extension in your AKS cluster in the Azure portal, in the **Extensions + applications** menu.
+A Kubernetes extension named `sc-extension` is added to the cluster the first time a service connection is created. Later on, the extension helps create Kubernetes resources in user's cluster, whenever a service connection request comes to Service Connector. You can find the extension in your AKS cluster in the Azure portal, in the **Extensions + applications** menu.
 
 :::image type="content" source="./media/aks-tutorial/sc-extension.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Azure portal, view AKS extension.":::
 
 The extension is also where the cluster connections metadata are stored. Uninstalling the extension makes all the connections in the cluster unavailable. The extension operator is hosted in the cluster namespace `sc-system`.
 
-### Create kubernetes resources
+### Creating the Kubernetes resources
 
-Service Connector creates some kubernetes resources to the namespace the user specified when creating a service connection. The kubernetes resources store the connection information, which is needed by the user's workload definitions or application code to talk to target services. Depending on different authentication types, different kubernetes resources are created. For the `Connection String` and `Service Principal` auth types, a kubernetes secret is created. For the `Workload Identity` auth type, a kubernetes service account is also created in addition to a kubernetes secret.
+Service Connector creates some Kubernetes resources to the namespace the user specified when creating a service connection. The Kubernetes resources store the connection information, which is needed by the user's workload definitions or application code to talk to target services. Depending on different authentication types, different Kubernetes resources are created. For the `Connection String` and `Service Principal` auth types, a Kubernetes secret is created. For the `Workload Identity` auth type, a Kubernetes service account is also created in addition to a Kubernetes secret.
 
-You can find the kubernetes resources created by Service Connector for each service connection on the Azure portal in your kubernetes resource, in the Service Connector menu.
+You can find the Kubernetes resources created by Service Connector for each service connection on the Azure portal in your Kubernetes resource, in the Service Connector menu.
 
-:::image type="content" source="./media/aks-tutorial/kubernetes-resources.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Azure portal, view Service Connector created kubernetes resources.":::
+:::image type="content" source="./media/aks-tutorial/kubernetes-resources.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Azure portal, view Service Connector created Kubernetes resources.":::
 
 Deleting a service connection doesn't delete the associated Kubernetes resource. If necessary, remove your resource manually, using for example the kubectl delete command.
 
-### Enable the `azureKeyvaultSecretsProvider` addon
+### Enabling the `azureKeyvaultSecretsProvider` add-on
 
 If target service is Azure Key Vault and the Secret Store CSI Driver is enabled when creating a service connection, Service Connector enables the `azureKeyvaultSecretsProvider` add-on for the cluster.
 
 :::image type="content" source="./media/aks-tutorial/keyvault-csi.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Azure portal, enabling CSI driver for keyvault when creating a connection.":::
 
 Follow the [Connect to Azure Key Vault using CSI driver tutorial](./tutorial-python-aks-keyvault-csi-driver.md)to set up a connection to Azure Key Vault using Secret Store CSI driver.
 
-### Enable workload identity and OpenID Connect (OIDC) issuer
+### Enabling workload identity and OpenID Connect (OIDC) issuer
 
 If the authentication type is `Workload Identity` when creating a service connection, Service Connector enables workload identity and OIDC issuer for the cluster.
 
 :::image type="content" source="./media/aks-tutorial/workload-identity.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the Azure portal, using workload identity to create a connection.":::
 
 When the authentication type is `Workload Identity`, a user-assigned managed identity is needed to create the federated identity credential. Learn more from [what are workload identities](/entra/workload-id/workload-identities-overview), or follow the [tutorial](./tutorial-python-aks-storage-workload-identity.md)to set up a connection to Azure Storage using workload identity.
 
-## How to use the Service Connector created kubernetes resources
+## Use the Kubernetes resources created by Service Connector
 
-Different kubernetes resources are created when the target service type and authentication type are different. The following sections show how to use the Service Connector created kubernetes resources in your cluster workloads definition and application codes.
+Various Kubernetes resources are created by Service Connector depending on the target service type and authentication type. The following sections show how to use the Service Connector created Kubernetes resources in your cluster workloads definition and application codes.
 
-#### Kubernetes secret
+### Kubernetes secret
 
-A kubernetes secret is created when the authentication type is `Connection String` or `Service Principal`. Your cluster workload definition can reference the secret directly. The following snippet is an example.
+A Kubernetes secret is created when the authentication type is `Connection String` or `Service Principal`. Your cluster workload definition can reference the secret directly. The following snippet is an example.
 
 ```yaml
 apiVersion: batch/v1
@@ -87,9 +89,9 @@ spec:
 
 Then, your application codes can consume the connection string in the secret from environment variable. You can check the [sample code](./how-to-integrate-storage-blob.md) to learn more about the environment variable names and how to use them in your application codes to authenticate to different target services.
 
-#### Kubernetes service account
+### Kubernetes service account
 
-Both a kubernetes service account and a secret are created when the authentication type is `Workload Identity`. Your cluster workload definition can reference the service account and secret to authenticate through workload identity. The following snippet provides an example.
+Both a Kubernetes service account and a secret are created when the authentication type is `Workload Identity`. Your cluster workload definition can reference the service account and secret to authenticate through workload identity. The following snippet provides an example.
 
 ```yaml
 apiVersion: batch/v1
@@ -115,13 +117,13 @@ spec:
 
 You may check the tutorial to learn [how to connect to Azure Storage using workload identity](tutorial-python-aks-storage-workload-identity.md).
 
-## How to troubleshoot and view logs
+## Troubleshoot and view logs
 
 If an error happens and couldn't be mitigated by retrying when creating a service connection, the following methods can help gather more information for troubleshooting.
 
-### Check Service Connector kubernetes extension
+### Check Service Connector Kubernetes extension
 
-Service Connector kubernetes extension is built on top of [Azure Arc-enabled Kubernetes cluster extensions](/azure/azure-arc/kubernetes/extensions). Use the following commands to investigate if there are any errors during the extension installation or updating.
+Service Connector Kubernetes extension is built on top of [Azure Arc-enabled Kubernetes cluster extensions](/azure/azure-arc/kubernetes/extensions). Use the following commands to investigate if there are any errors during the extension installation or updating.
 
 1. Install the `k8s-extension` Azure CLI extension.
 
@@ -139,9 +141,9 @@ Service Connector kubernetes extension is built on top of [Azure Arc-enabled Kub
       --name sc-extension
   ```
 
-### Check kubernetes cluster logs
+### Check Kubernetes cluster logs
 
-If there's an error during the extension installation, and the error message in the `statuses` property doesn't provide enough information about what happened, you can further check the kubernetes logs with the followings steps.
+If there's an error during the extension installation, and the error message in the `statuses` property doesn't provide enough information about what happened, you can further check the Kubernetes logs with the followings steps.
 
 1. Connect to your AKS cluster.
 
@@ -163,7 +165,7 @@ If there's an error during the extension installation, and the error message in
    ```Bash
    helm list -n sc-system
    ```
-1. During the extension installation or updating, a kubernetes job called `sc-job` creates the kubernetes resources for the service connection. The job execution failure usually causes the extension failure. Check the job status by running the following commands. If `sc-job` doesn't exist in `sc-system` namespace, it should have been executed successfully. This job is designed to be automatically deleted after successful execution.
+1. During the extension installation or updating, a Kubernetes job called `sc-job` creates the Kubernetes resources for the service connection. The job execution failure usually causes the extension failure. Check the job status by running the following commands. If `sc-job` doesn't exist in `sc-system` namespace, it should have been executed successfully. This job is designed to be automatically deleted after successful execution.
 
    - Check the job exists.
 
@@ -185,73 +187,85 @@ If there's an error during the extension installation, and the error message in
 
 ### Common errors and mitigations
 
-#### Extension creation errors
+#### Extension creation error
+
+**Error message:**
 
-**Error Message:**
 `Unable to get a response from the agent in time`.
 
 **Mitigation:**
+
 Refer to [extension creation errors](/troubleshoot/azure/azure-kubernetes/extensions/cluster-extension-deployment-errors#extension-creation-errors)
 
 
 #### Helm errors
 
-**Error Message:**
+**Error messages:**
+
 - `Timed out waiting for resource readiness`
 - `Unable to download the Helm chart from the repo URL`
 - `Helm chart rendering failed with given values`
 - `Resource already exists in your cluster`
 - `Operation is already in progress for Helm`
 
 **Mitigation:**
+
 Refer to [Helm errors](/troubleshoot/azure/azure-kubernetes/extensions/cluster-extension-deployment-errors#helm-errors)
 
 
 #### Conflict
 
-**Error Message:**
+**Error message:**
+
 `Operation returned an invalid status code: Conflict`.
 
 **Reason:**
-This error usually occurs when attempting to create a service connection while the AKS (Azure Kubernetes Service) cluster is in an updating state. The service connection update conflicts with the ongoing update. It could also happen when your subscription is not registered for the `Microsoft.KubernetesConfiguration` resource provider.
+
+This error usually occurs when attempting to create a service connection while the Azure Kubernetes Service (AKS) cluster is in an updating state. The service connection update conflicts with the ongoing update. This error also occurs when your subscription is not registered with the `Microsoft.KubernetesConfiguration` resource provider.
 
 **Mitigation:**
-- Run the following command to make sure your subscription is registered for `Microsoft.KubernetesConfiguration` resource provider.
+
+1. Ensure your cluster is in a "Succeeded" state and retry the creation.
+1. Run the following command to make sure your subscription is registered with the `Microsoft.KubernetesConfiguration` resource provider.
 
   ```azurecli
   az provider register -n Microsoft.KubernetesConfiguration
   ```
-- Ensure your cluster is in a "Succeeded" state and retry the creation.
-
 
 #### Unauthorized resource access
 
-**Error Message:**
+**Error message:**
+
 `You do not have permission to perform ... If access was recently granted, please refresh your credentials`.
 
 **Reason:**
+
 Service Connector requires permissions to operate the Azure resources you want to connect to, in order to perform connection operations on your behalf. This error indicates a lack of necessary permissions on some Azure resources.
 
 **Mitigation:**
-Check the permissions on the Azure resources specified in the error message. Obtain the required permissions and retry the creation.
 
+Check the permissions on the Azure resources specified in the error message. Obtain the required permissions and retry the creation.
 
 #### Missing subscription registration
-**Error Message:**
+
+**Error message:**
+
 `The subscription is not registered to use namespace 'Microsoft.KubernetesConfiguration'`
 
 **Reason:**
-Service Connector requires the subscription to be registered for `Microsoft.KubernetesConfiguration`, which is the resource provider for [Azure Arc-enabled Kubernetes cluster extensions](/azure/azure-arc/kubernetes/extensions).
+
+Service Connector requires the subscription to be registered with `Microsoft.KubernetesConfiguration`, which is the resource provider for [Azure Arc-enabled Kubernetes cluster extensions](/azure/azure-arc/kubernetes/extensions).
 
 **Mitigation:**
-Register the `Microsoft.KubernetesConfiguration` resource provider by running the following command. For more information on resource provider registration errors, please refer to this [tutorial](../azure-resource-manager/troubleshooting/error-register-resource-provider.md).
+
+Register the `Microsoft.KubernetesConfiguration` resource provider by running the following command. For more information on resource provider registration errors, please refer to [Resolve errors for resource provider registration](../azure-resource-manager/troubleshooting/error-register-resource-provider.md).
 
 ```azurecli
 az provider register -n Microsoft.KubernetesConfiguration
 ```
 
 
-## Next steps
+## Next step
 
 Learn how to integrate different target services and read about their configuration settings and authentication methods.