Merge pull request #252748 from mbender-ms/ip-services-update-dual-stack

ip services - updates for GH Issue 115118

Author: prmerger-automator[bot]

articles/virtual-network/ip-services/create-vm-dual-stack-ipv6-portal.md

@@ -7,21 +7,21 @@ ms.author: mbender
 ms.service: virtual-network
 ms.subservice: ip-services
 ms.topic: how-to
-ms.date: 08/24/2023
+ms.date: 09/25/2023
 ms.custom: template-how-to, devx-track-linux
 ---
 
 # Create an Azure Virtual Machine with a dual-stack network using the Azure portal
 
-In this article, you'll create a virtual machine in Azure with the Azure portal. The virtual machine is created along with the dual-stack network as part of the procedures.  When completed, the virtual machine supports IPv4 and IPv6 communication.  
+In this article, you create a virtual machine in Azure with the Azure portal. The virtual machine is created along with the dual-stack network as part of the procedures.  When completed, the virtual machine supports IPv4 and IPv6 communication.  
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
 - An Azure account with an active subscription. [Create an account for free](https://azure.microsoft.com/free/?WT.mc_id=A261C142F).
 
 ## Create a virtual network
 
-In this section, you'll create a dual-stack virtual network for the virtual machine.
+In this section, you create a dual-stack virtual network for the virtual machine.
 
 1. Sign-in to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com).
 
@@ -66,7 +66,9 @@ In this section, you'll create a dual-stack virtual network for the virtual mach
 
 ## Create public IP addresses
 
-You'll create two public IP addresses in this section, IPv4 and IPv6. 
+You create two public IP addresses in this section, IPv4 and IPv6. 
+
+### Create IPv4 public IP address
 
 1. In the search box at the top of the portal, enter **Public IP address**. Select **Public IP addresses** in the search results.
 
@@ -76,23 +78,48 @@ You'll create two public IP addresses in this section, IPv4 and IPv6.
 
     | Setting | Value |
     | ------- | ----- |
-    | IP version | Select **Both**. |
-    | SKU | Leave the default of **Standard**. |
-    | **Ipv4 IP Address Configuration** |   |
+    | **Project details** |   |
+    | Subscription | Select your subscription. |
+    | Resource group | Select **myResourceGroup**. |
+    | Location | Select **East US 2**. |
+    | Availability zone | Select **Zone redundant**. |
+    | **Instance details** |   |
     | Name | Enter **myPublicIP-IPv4**. |
+    | IP version | Select **IPv4**. |
+    | SKU | Leave the default of **Standard**. |
+    | Tier | Leave the default of **Regional**. |
+    | **IP address assignment** |   |
     | Routing preference | Leave the default of **Microsoft network**. |
     | Idle timeout (minutes) | Leave the default of **4**. |
-    | **IPv6 IP Address Configuration** |   |
-    | Name | Enter **myPublicIP-IPv6**. |
-    | Idle timeout (minutes) | Leave the default of **4**. |
+    | DNS name label | Enter **myPublicIP-IPv4**. |
+
+4. Select **Review + create** then **Create**.
+
+### Create IPv6 public IP address
+1. In the search box at the top of the portal, enter **Public IP address**. Select **Public IP addresses** in the search results.
+
+2. Select **+ Create**. 
+
+3. Enter or select the following information in **Create public IP address**.
+
+    | Setting | Value |
+    | ------- | ----- |
+    | **Project details** |   |
     | Subscription | Select your subscription. |
     | Resource group | Select **myResourceGroup**. |
     | Location | Select **East US 2**. |
     | Availability zone | Select **Zone redundant**. |
+    | **Instance details** |   |
+    | Name | Enter **myPublicIP-IPv6**. |
+    | IP version | Select **IPv6**. |
+    | SKU | Leave the default of **Standard**. |
+    | Tier | Leave the default of **Regional**. |
+    | **IP address assignment** |   |
+    | DNS name label | Enter **myPublicIP-IPv6**. |
 
-4. Select **Create**. 
+4. Select **Review + create** then **Create**.
 
-### Create virtual machine
+## Create virtual machine
 
 1. In the search box at the top of the portal, enter **Virtual machine**. Select **Virtual machines** in the search results.
 
@@ -137,19 +164,19 @@ You'll create two public IP addresses in this section, IPv4 and IPv6.
 
 7. Select **Create**. 
 
-8. **Generate new key pair** will appear. Select **Download private key and create resource**.
+8. **Generate new key pair** appears. Select **Download private key and create resource**.
 
-9. The private key will download to your local computer. Copy the private key to a directory on your computer. In the following example, it's **~/.ssh**.
+9. The private key downloads to your local computer. Copy the private key to a directory on your computer. In the following example, it's **~/.ssh**.
 
 10. In the search box at the top of the portal, enter **Virtual machine**. Select **Virtual machines** in the search results.
 
 11. Select **myVM**.
 
 12. Stop **myVM**.
 
-### Network interface configuration
+## Network interface configuration
 
-A network interface is automatically created and attached to the chosen virtual network during creation. In this section, you'll add the IPv6 configuration to the existing network interface.
+A network interface is automatically created and attached to the chosen virtual network during creation. In this section, you add the IPv6 configuration to the existing network interface.
 
 1. In the search box at the top of the portal, enter **Virtual machine**. Select **Virtual machines** in the search results.
 
@@ -182,7 +209,7 @@ A network interface is automatically created and attached to the chosen virtual
 
 ## Test SSH connection
 
-You'll connect to the virtual machine with SSH to test the IPv4 public IP address.
+You connect to the virtual machine with SSH to test the IPv4 public IP address.
 
 1. In the search box at the top of the portal, enter **Public IP address**. Select **Public IP addresses** in the search results.