Merge pull request #225788 from msjasteppe/index-update

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Author: prmerger-automator[bot]

articles/healthcare-apis/iot/index.yml

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 ### YamlMime:Landing
 
 title: MedTech service documentation
-summary: MedTech service documentation for the Azure Health Data Services. The MedTech service is an optional service of the Azure Health Data Services designed to ingest device message data from multiple and disparate IoT devices, transform the device messages data into FHIR Observations, and persist the FHIR Observations in a FHIR service. 
+summary: MedTech service documentation for the Azure Health Data Services. The MedTech service is a service of the Azure Health Data Services designed to ingest device message data from multiple devices, transform the data into FHIR Observations, which are then persisted in the Azure Health Data Services FHIR service.
 
 metadata:
   title: Azure Health Data Services MedTech service
-  description: MedTech service documentation for the Azure Health Data Services. The MedTech service is an optional service of the Azure Health Data Services designed to ingest device message data from multiple and disparate IoT devices, transform the device messages data into FHIR Observations, and persist the FHIR Observations in a FHIR service. 
+  description: MedTech service documentation for the Azure Health Data Services. The MedTech service is a service of the Azure Health Data Services designed to ingest device message data from multiple devices, transform the data into FHIR Observations, which are then persisted in the Azure Health Data Services FHIR service. 
   services: healthcare-apis
   ms.service: healthcare-apis
   ms.subservice: data-transformation
   ms.topic: landing-page 
   ms.collection: collection
   author: msjasteppe
   ms.author: jasteppe
-  ms.date: 01/27/2023
+  ms.date: 01/31/2023
 
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