Merge pull request #208141 from WilliamDAssafMSFT/patch-6

Update overview-database-templates.md

Author: liljack17

articles/synapse-analytics/database-designer/overview-database-templates.md

@@ -3,20 +3,23 @@ title: Overview of Azure Synapse database templates
 description: Learn about database templates
 author: gsaurer
 ms.author: gesaur
+ms.reviewer: wiassaf
 ms.service: synapse-analytics
 ms.subservice: database-editor
 ms.topic: overview
 ms.date: 11/02/2021
 ms.custom: template-overview, ignite-fall-2021
 ---
 
-# What is Azure Synapse database templates
+# What are Azure Synapse database templates?
 
-Data takes many forms as it moves from source systems to data warehouses and data marts with the intent to solve business problems. Database templates can help with the transformation of data into insights. Database templates are a set of business and technical data definitions that are pre-designed to meet the needs of a particular industry. They act as blueprints that provide common elements derived from best practices, government regulations, and the complex data and analytic needs of an industry-specific organization. 
+Data takes many forms as it moves from source systems to data warehouses and data marts with the intent to solve business problems. Database templates can help with the transformation of data into insights. 
 
-These information blueprints can be used by organizations to plan, architect, and design data solutions for data governance, reporting, business intelligence, and advanced analytics. The data models provide integrated business-wide information architectures that can help you implement, in a timely and predictable way, a proven industry data architecture. 
+Database templates are a set of business and technical data definitions that are pre-designed to meet the needs of a particular industry. They act as blueprints that provide common elements derived from best practices, government regulations, and the complex data and analytic needs of an industry-specific organization. 
 
-For example, if you're building a product recommendation solution for your retail customers, you'll need a basic blue-print to understand what the customer purchased and the transaction that led to the purchase. You may also need information about the store where the purchase was made. You also need to understand whether the customer is part of a loyalty program. Just to accomplish this use case we need the following schemas: 
+These schema blueprints can be used by organizations to plan, architect, and design data solutions for data governance, reporting, business intelligence, and advanced analytics. The data models provide integrated business-wide information architectures that can help you implement, in a timely and predictable way, a proven industry data architecture. 
+
+For example, if you're building a product recommendation solution for your retail customers, you'll need to understand what the customer purchased and the transaction that led to the purchase. You may also need information about the store where the purchase was made, and whether the customer is part of a loyalty program. Just to accomplish this use case, consider the following schemas: 
 
 * Product 
 * Transaction 
@@ -25,7 +28,7 @@ For example, if you're building a product recommendation solution for your retai
 * CustomerLoyalty 
 * Store 
 
-You can set up this use case by selecting the six tables in the retail database template. 
+You can set up this use case by selecting the six tables in the **Retail** database template. 
 
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@@ -57,7 +60,7 @@ Currently, you can choose from the following database templates in Azure Synapse
 * **Retail** - For sellers of consumer goods or services to customers through multiple channels.
 * **Utilities** - For gas, electric, and water utilities; power generators; and water desalinators.
 
-As emission and carbon management is an important discussion in all industries, we've included those components in all the available database templates. These components make it easy for companies who need to track and report their direct and indirect greenhouse gas emissions.
+As emission and carbon management is an important discussion in all industries, so we've included those components in all the available database templates. These components make it easy for companies who need to track and report their direct and indirect greenhouse gas emissions.
 
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