Fixed from PRMerge

Author: flang-msft

articles/partner-solutions/index.yml

@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
 ### YamlMime:Hub
 
 title: Azure Native ISV Services
-summary: Azure Native ISV Services enable you to easily provision, manage, and tightly integrate independent software vendor (ISV) software and services on Azure. Azure Native ISV Services are developed and managed by Microsoft and the ISV.
+summary: Azure Native ISV Services enables you to easily provision, manage, and tightly integrate independent software vendor (ISV) software and services on Azure. Azure Native ISV Services is developed and managed by Microsoft and the ISV.
 brand: azure
 
 metadata:
   title: Azure Native ISV Services
-  description: Azure Native ISV Services enable you to easily provision, manage, and tightly integrate independent software vendor (ISV) software and services on Azure. Azure Native ISV Services are developed and managed by Microsoft and the ISV.
+  description: Azure Native ISV Services enables you to easily provision, manage, and tightly integrate independent software vendor (ISV) software and services on Azure. Azure Native ISV Services is developed and managed by Microsoft and the ISV.
 
   ms.topic: hub-page
   ms.custom:
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ metadata:
 highlightedContent:
 
   items:
-    - title: What are Azure Native ISV Services?
+    - title: What is Azure Native ISV Services?
       itemType: overview
       url: ./overview.md
     - title: Find Azure Native ISV Services 
@@ -56,12 +56,12 @@ productDirectory:
       imageSrc: ./media/index/informatica.svg
       links:
         - url: ./informatica/informatica-overview.md
-          text: A comprehensive AI-powered cloud data management platform for data and application integration, data quality, data governance and privacy and master data management.
+          text: A comprehensive AI-powered cloud data management platform for data and application integration, data quality, data governance and privacy, and master data management.
     - title: Neon Serverless Postgres
       imageSrc: ./media/index/neon.svg
       links:
         - url: ./neon/overview.md
-          text: Neon offers a serverless Postgres solution that leverages the principles of serverless computing to provide scalable and flexible database services.
+          text: Neon offers a serverless Postgres solution that uses the principles of serverless computing to provide scalable and flexible database services.
     - title: New Relic
       imageSrc: ./media/index/new-relic.svg
       links:

articles/partner-solutions/pure-storage/manage.md

@@ -34,23 +34,23 @@ Below the essentials, you can navigate to other details about your resource by s
 - Documentation on Microsoft Learn
 - Pure Storage support
 
-### Create a Storage Pool
+## Create a Storage Pool
 
-One you've created a resource, you can create a storage pool. 
+Once you create a resource, you can create a storage pool. 
 
 [!INCLUDE [manage](../includes/manage.md)]
 
-1. Select **Settings > Storage Pool** from the service menu.
+3. Select **Settings > Storage Pool** from the service menu.
 
-1. Select **Create a new storage pool** from the working pane's command bar. 
+4. Select **Create a new storage pool** from the working pane's command bar. 
 
     The *Create a Storage Pool* window appears.
     There are required fields that you need to fill out.
 
     > [!NOTE]
-    > The storage pool will default to the same region as your Pure Storage resource.
+    > The storage pool defaults to the same region as your Pure Storage resource.
 
-1. Enter the values for each required setting.
+5. Enter the values for each required setting.
 
     | Setting                            | Action                                |
     |------------------------------------|---------------------------------------|
@@ -61,18 +61,18 @@ One you've created a resource, you can create a storage pool.
     | Virtual network                    | Choose a virtual network.             |
     | Delegated subnet                   | Choose a delegated subnet.            |
 
-1. Select the **Create** button.
+6. Select the **Create** button.
 
     > [!NOTE]
     > It can take up to 1 hour for deployment to complete.
 
-### Connect a Storage Pool to an Azure VMWare Solution resource
+### Connect a Storage Pool to an Azure VMware Solution resource
 
-Once you've created a storage pool, you can link the storage pool to an Azure VMware Solution resource from the Azure portal.
+Once you create a storage pool, you can link the storage pool to an Azure VMware Solution resource from the Azure portal.
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
 > In order to connect your storage pool to an Azure VMware Solution resource, you must be an "Owner" or "RBACAdministrator" in your subscription.
 
 [!INCLUDE [manage](../includes/manage.md)]
 
-To connect a storage pool to an Azure VMWare Solution resource, select the **Connect Azure VMware Solution** button from the working pane's command bar.
+To connect a storage pool to an Azure VMware Solution resource, select the **Connect Azure VMware Solution** button from the working pane's command bar.

articles/partner-solutions/pure-storage/toc.yml

@@ -1,9 +1,9 @@
 items:
-- name: Azure Native Azure Native Pure Storage Cloud (preview) Documentation
+- name: Azure Native Pure Storage Cloud (preview) Documentation
   href: index.yml
 - name: Overview
   items:
-  - name: What is Azure Native Azure Native Pure Storage Cloud (preview)?
+  - name: What is Azure Native Pure Storage Cloud (preview)?
     href: overview.md 
 - name: Quickstart
   expanded: true