acrolinx, touchups

Author: v-thepet

articles/devtest-labs/add-artifact-vm.md

@@ -50,17 +50,17 @@ You can use the Azure portal to add artifacts during VM creation or to add artif
 1. On the **Add artifacts** page, select the arrow next to each artifact you want to add to the VM.
 1. On each **Add artifact** pane, enter any required and optional parameter values, and then select **OK**. The artifact appears under **Selected artifacts** on the **Add artifacts** page, and the number of configured artifacts updates.
 
-   :::image type="content" source="./media/add-artifact-vm/devtestlab-add-artifacts-blade-selected-artifacts.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows adding artifacts on the Add artifacts pane.":::
+   :::image type="content" source="./media/add-artifact-vm/devtestlab-add-artifacts-blade-selected-artifacts.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows adding artifacts.":::
 
 1. By default, artifacts install in the order you add them. To rearrange the order, select the ellipsis **...** next to the artifact in the **Selected artifacts** list, and select **Move up**, **Move down**, **Move to top**, or **Move to bottom**.
 
-   - To edit an artifact's parameters after you add it, select the pencil icon or select **...** next to the artifact and select **Edit** to reopen the **Add artifact** pane.
+   - To edit an artifact's parameters after you add it, select the pencil icon or select **...** next to the artifact and select **Edit** to reopen the artifact pane.
 
    - To delete an artifact from the **Selected artifacts** list, select **...** and then select **Delete**.
 
 1. When you're done adding, arranging, and configuring artifacts, select **OK** on the **Add artifacts** page.
 1. The **Artifacts** section of the **Create lab resource** screen shows the number of artifacts added. To add, edit, rearrange, or delete the artifacts before you create the VM, select **Add or Remove Artifacts** again.
-1. Optionally configure any **Advanced Settings** or **Tags**, and then select **Create** and **Create** again at the bottom of the **Create lab resource** screen to create the VM with added artifacts.
+1. Optionally configure any **Advanced Settings** or **Tags**, and then select **Create** and **Create** again at the bottom of the screen to create the VM with added artifacts.
 
 After you create the VM, the installed artifacts appear on the VM's **Artifacts** page. To see details about each artifact's installation, select the artifact name.
 

articles/devtest-labs/connect-virtual-machine-through-browser.md

@@ -12,11 +12,11 @@ ms.custom: UpdateFrequency2
 
 # Connect to lab VMs through a browser via Azure Bastion
 
-This article describes how to connect to your DevTest Labs virtual machines (VMs) through a browser by using [Azure Bastion](/azure/bastion/index). Bastion provides secure remote desktop protocol (RDP) or secure shell (SSH) access without using public IP addresses or exposing RDP or SSH ports to the internet.
+This article describes how to connect to your DevTest Labs virtual machine (VM) through a browser by using [Azure Bastion](/azure/bastion/index). Bastion provides secure remote desktop protocol (RDP) or secure shell (SSH) access without using public IP addresses or exposing RDP or SSH ports to the internet.
 
 > [!IMPORTANT]
-> The VM and lab must be in an Azure Bastion-configured virtual network that has Bastion connections enabled. For more information, see [Enable browser connection to DevTest Labs VMs with Azure Bastion](enable-browser-connection-lab-virtual-machines.md).
-> You must have ownership or sign-in permissions on the VM.
+> - The VM must be in an Azure Bastion-configured virtual network in a lab that has Bastion connections enabled. For more information, see [Enable browser connection to DevTest Labs VMs with Azure Bastion](enable-browser-connection-lab-virtual-machines.md).
+> - You must have ownership or sign-in permissions on the VM.
 
 To connect to a lab VM through a browser:
 

articles/devtest-labs/devtest-lab-add-devtest-user.md

@@ -19,24 +19,24 @@ Azure DevTest Labs uses Azure [role-based access control](/azure/role-based-acce
 
 The following table shows the actions that the DevTest Labs Owner, Contributor, and DevTest Labs User roles can take.
 
-|Action|Owner|Contributor|DevTest Lab User|
+|Action|Owner|Contributor|DevTest Labs User|
 |------|-----|-----------|----------------|
-|Lab tasks:||||
+|**Lab tasks:**||||
 |Create labs.|X|X||
 |Add users to labs.|X|||
 |Configure user settings and roles.|X|||
 |Update lab virtual machine (VM) policies.|X|X||
 |Update cost settings.|X|X||
-|VM base tasks:||||
+|**VM base tasks:**||||
 |Enable Marketplace images.|X|X||
 |Add, update, and delete VM base formulas.|X|X|X|
 |Add and remove custom images.|X|X||
 |Add, update, and delete formulas.|X|X||
-|Individual VM tasks:||||
+|**Individual VM tasks:**||||
 |Create VMs.|X|X|X|
 |Start, stop, or delete owned VMs.|X|X|X|
 |Add or remove VM data disks.|X|X|X|
-|Artifact and template tasks:||||
+|**Artifact and template tasks:**||||
 |Add and remove lab artifact and template repositories.|X|X||
 |Create artifacts and templates.|X|X|X|
 |Apply artifacts to owned VMs.|X|X|X|
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ Azure subscription [Owners](/azure/role-based-access-control/built-in-roles#owne
 
 Users that are granted the lab Owner role can add and configure Owners, Contributors, and DevTest Labs Users for their own labs. However, added lab Owners have a narrower scope of administration than Azure subscription-based Owners. Added Owners don't have full access to some resources that the DevTest Labs service creates.
 
-DevTest Labs Users must have a valid [Microsoft account (MSA)](/windows-server/identity/ad-ds/manage/understand-microsoft-accounts), but they don't need an Azure subscription.
+DevTest Labs Users must have a valid [Microsoft account](/windows-server/identity/ad-ds/manage/understand-microsoft-accounts), but they don't need an Azure subscription.
 
 ## Add a member to a lab
 
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ Lab Owners can add members to lab roles by using the Azure portal or an Azure Po
 
 ### Prerequisite
 
-- Lab Owner role, either by assignment from a subscription owner or by inheritance as a subscription owner.
+- Lab **Owner** role, either by assignment from a subscription owner or by inheritance as a subscription owner.
 
 ### Add a lab member
 
@@ -72,11 +72,11 @@ The following procedure adds a **DevTest Labs User** member to a lab. If you're
 1. On the **Configuration and policies** page, select **Access control (IAM)** from the left navigation.
 1. Select **Add** > **Add role assignment** or select the **Add role assignment** button.
 
-   :::image type="content" source="media/devtest-lab-add-devtest-user/add-role-assignment-menu-generic.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows an access control (IAM) page with the Add role assignment menu open.":::
+   :::image type="content" source="media/devtest-lab-add-devtest-user/add-role-assignment-menu-generic.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows an access control (IAM) page with the role assignment menu open.":::
 
 1. On the **Add role assignment** page, search for and select the **DevTest Labs User** role, and then select **Next**.
 
-   :::image type="content" source="media/devtest-lab-add-devtest-user/add-role-assignment-role-generic.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the Add role assignment page with the DevTest Lab User role selected.":::
+   :::image type="content" source="media/devtest-lab-add-devtest-user/add-role-assignment-role-generic.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows the role assignment page with the DevTest Labs User role selected.":::
 
 1. On the **Members** tab, select **Select members**.
 1. On the **Select members** screen, search for and select the members you want to add, and then select **Select**.
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ The following procedure adds a **DevTest Labs User** member to a lab. If you're
 
 ### Prerequisites
 
-- Lab Owner role, either by assignment from a subscription owner or by inheritance as a subscription owner.
+- Lab **Owner** role, either by assignment from a subscription owner or by inheritance as a subscription owner.
 - Azure PowerShell. You can either:
   - [Use the Azure Cloud Shell PowerShell environment](/azure/cloud-shell/quickstart).
   - [Install Azure PowerShell](/powershell/azure/install-azure-powershell) to use on a physical or virtual machine. If necessary, run `Update-Module -Name Az` to update your installation.
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ This PowerShell script requires the added user to be in the Microsoft Entra ID.
 
 ### Add a member
 
-The following PowerShell script adds a member to a lab with DevTest Labs User role. To use the script, replace the parameter values under the `# Values to change` comment with your own values. You can get the `subscriptionId`, `labResourceGroup`, and `labName` values from the lab's main page in the Azure portal.
+The following PowerShell script adds a member to a lab with **DevTest Labs User** role. To use the script, replace the parameter values under the `# Values to change` comment with your own values. You can get the `subscriptionId`, `labResourceGroup`, and `labName` values from the lab's main page in the Azure portal.
 
 ```azurepowershell
 # Values to change

articles/devtest-labs/enable-browser-connection-lab-virtual-machines.md

@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ This article covers two ways to enable Azure Bastion browser connectivity to Dev
 ## Prerequisites
 
 - To enable and configure Azure Bastion for a lab, you need at least **Contributor**-level permissions in the Azure subscription the lab is in, and **Owner** or **Contributor** role in the lab.
-- To connect to Azure Bastion-enabled lab VMs through a browser, you need at least **DevTest Labs User** role in the lab and sign-in access to the VM.
+- To connect to an Azure Bastion-enabled lab virtual machine (VM) through a browser, you need at least **DevTest Labs User** role in the lab and sign-in access to the VM.
 
 For more information about DevTest Labs user roles and access, see [Add and configure lab users](devtest-lab-add-devtest-user.md).
 
@@ -36,7 +36,10 @@ You can create a new virtual network for your lab with an Azure Bastion subnet a
 1. Select **Create** at the top of the **Virtual networks** page.
 1. On the **Create virtual network** page, enter a **Name** for the new virtual network, and select the same **Subscription**, **Resource group**, and **Region** as your lab.
 1. Select **Next** or the **Security** tab.
-1. On the **Security** page, under **Azure Bastion**, select the **Enable Azure Bastion** checkbox.
+1. On the **Security** page, under **Azure Bastion**, select the **Enable Azure Bastion** checkbox. Accept or configure the values in the **Azure Bastion host name** and **Azure Bastion public IP address** fields.
+
+   :::image type="content" source="media/enable-browser-connection-lab-virtual-machines/create-bastion.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows enabling Azure Bastion on the Security page.":::
+
 1. Select **Next** or the **IP Addresses** tab.
 1. On the **IP Addresses** page, ensure there are two subnets named **default** and **AzureBastionSubnet**, and configure or add IP address ranges if desired.
 
@@ -55,7 +58,7 @@ Follow these instructions to connect your lab to the new Azure Bastion-enabled v
 1. On the **Configuration and policies** page, in the left navigation under **External resources**, select **Virtual networks**.
 1. On the **Virtual networks** page, select **Add**.
 1. On the **Virtual network** page, select **Select virtual network**.
-1. On the **Choose virtual network** page, select the Azure Bastion-enabled virtual network you just created.
+1. On the **Choose virtual network** page, select the Azure Bastion-enabled virtual network you created.
 1. On the **Virtual network** page, select **Save**.
 1. On the **Virtual networks** page, remove any previous virtual network from the lab. Select **...** next to that virtual network, select **Delete**, and then select **Yes**.