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diff --git a/articles/app-service/media/tutorial-nodejs-mongodb-app/azure-portal-deploy-sample-code-3.png b/articles/app-service/media/tutorial-nodejs-mongodb-app/azure-portal-deploy-sample-code-3.png
diff --git a/articles/app-service/media/tutorial-nodejs-mongodb-app/azure-portal-run-sample-application-3.png b/articles/app-service/media/tutorial-nodejs-mongodb-app/azure-portal-run-sample-application-3.png
diff --git a/articles/app-service/tutorial-dotnetcore-sqldb-app.md b/articles/app-service/tutorial-dotnetcore-sqldb-app.md
@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ Sign in to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com/) and follow these steps
         1. *Runtime stack*: **.NET 8 (LTS)**.
         1. *Engine*: **SQLAzure**. Azure SQL Database is a fully managed platform as a service (PaaS) database engine that's always running on the latest stable version of the SQL Server.
         1. *Add Azure Cache for Redis?*: **Yes**.
-        1. *Hosting plan*: **Basic**. When you're ready, you can [scale up](manage-scale-up.md) to a production pricing tier later.
+        1. *Hosting plan*: **Basic**. When you're ready, you can [scale up](manage-scale-up.md) to a production pricing tier.
         1. Select **Review + create**.
         1. After validation completes, select **Create**.
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@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ Sign in to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com/) and follow these steps
 
 ## 3. Secure connection secrets
 
-The creation wizard generated the connectivity string for you already as [.NET connection strings](configure-common.md#configure-connection-strings) and [app settings](configure-common.md#configure-app-settings). However, the security best practice is to keep secrets out of App Service completely. You'll move your secrets to key vault and change your app setting to [Key Vault references](app-service-key-vault-references.md) with the help of Service Connectors.
+The creation wizard generated the connectivity string for you already as [.NET connection strings](configure-common.md#configure-connection-strings) and [app settings](configure-common.md#configure-app-settings). However, the security best practice is to keep secrets out of App Service completely. You'll move your secrets to a key vault and change your app setting to [Key Vault references](app-service-key-vault-references.md) with the help of Service Connectors.
 
 > [!TIP]
 > To use passwordless authentication, see [How do I change the SQL Database connection to use a managed identity instead?](#how-do-i-change-the-sql-database-connection-to-use-a-managed-identity-instead)
@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@ The creation wizard generated the connectivity string for you already as [.NET c
         1. Select **Review + create**, then select **Create**. Wait for the key vault deployment to finish. You should see "Your deployment is complete."
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-        :::image type="content" source="./media/tutorial-dotnetcore-sqldb-app/azure-portal-secure-connection-secrets-3.png" alt-text="A screenshot showing how secure a key vault with a private endpoint." lightbox="./media/tutorial-dotnetcore-sqldb-app/azure-portal-secure-connection-secrets-3.png":::
+        :::image type="content" source="./media/tutorial-dotnetcore-sqldb-app/azure-portal-secure-connection-secrets-3.png" alt-text="A screenshot showing how to secure a key vault with a private endpoint." lightbox="./media/tutorial-dotnetcore-sqldb-app/azure-portal-secure-connection-secrets-3.png":::
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diff --git a/articles/app-service/tutorial-java-spring-cosmosdb.md b/articles/app-service/tutorial-java-spring-cosmosdb.md
@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ Sign in to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com/) and follow these steps
         1. *Runtime stack*: **Java 21**.
         1. *Java web server stack*: **Java SE (Embedded Web Server)**.
         1. *Engine*: **Cosmos DB API for MongoDB**. Cosmos DB is a fully managed NoSQL, relational, and vector database as a service on Azure.
-        1. *Hosting plan*: **Basic**. When you're ready, you can [scale up](manage-scale-up.md) to a production pricing tier later.
+        1. *Hosting plan*: **Basic**. When you're ready, you can [scale up](manage-scale-up.md) to a production pricing tier.
         1. Select **Review + create**.
         1. After validation completes, select **Create**.
     :::column-end:::
@@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ Having issues? Check the [Troubleshooting section](#troubleshooting).
 
 ## 3. Secure connection secrets
 
-The creation wizard generated the connectivity string for you already as an [app setting](configure-common.md#configure-app-settings). However, the security best practice is to keep secrets out of App Service completely. You'll move your secrets to key vault and change your app setting to a [Key Vault reference](app-service-key-vault-references.md) with the help of Service Connectors.
+The creation wizard generated the connectivity string for you already as an [app setting](configure-common.md#configure-app-settings). However, the security best practice is to keep secrets out of App Service completely. You'll move your secrets to a key vault and change your app setting to a [Key Vault reference](app-service-key-vault-references.md) with the help of Service Connectors.
 
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@@ -216,7 +216,7 @@ The creation wizard generated the connectivity string for you already as an [app
         1. Select **Review + create**, then select **Create**. Wait for the key vault deployment to finish. You should see "Your deployment is complete."
     :::column-end:::
     :::column:::
-        :::image type="content" source="./media/tutorial-java-spring-cosmosdb/azure-portal-secure-connection-secrets-3.png" alt-text="A screenshot showing how secure a key vault with a private endpoint." lightbox="./media/tutorial-java-spring-cosmosdb/azure-portal-secure-connection-secrets-3.png":::
+        :::image type="content" source="./media/tutorial-java-spring-cosmosdb/azure-portal-secure-connection-secrets-3.png" alt-text="A screenshot showing how to secure a key vault with a private endpoint." lightbox="./media/tutorial-java-spring-cosmosdb/azure-portal-secure-connection-secrets-3.png":::
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diff --git a/articles/app-service/tutorial-java-tomcat-mysql-app.md b/articles/app-service/tutorial-java-tomcat-mysql-app.md
@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ Sign in to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com/) and follow these steps
         1. *Runtime stack*: **Java 17**.
         1. *Java web server stack*: **Apache Tomcat 10.1**.
         1. **MySQL - Flexible Server** is selected for you by default as the database engine. If not, select it. Azure Database for MySQL is a fully managed MySQL database as a service on Azure, compatible with the latest community editions.
-        1. *Hosting plan*: **Basic**. When you're ready, you can [scale up](manage-scale-up.md) to a production pricing tier later.
+        1. *Hosting plan*: **Basic**. When you're ready, you can [scale up](manage-scale-up.md) to a production pricing tier.
         1. Select **Review + create**.
         1. After validation completes, select **Create**.
     :::column-end:::
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ Having issues? Check the [Troubleshooting section](#troubleshooting).
 
 ## 3. Secure connection secrets
 
-The creation wizard generated the connectivity string for you already as an [app setting](configure-common.md#configure-app-settings). However, the security best practice is to keep secrets out of App Service completely. You'll move your secrets to key vault and change your app setting to a [Key Vault reference](app-service-key-vault-references.md) with the help of Service Connectors.
+The creation wizard generated the connectivity string for you already as an [app setting](configure-common.md#configure-app-settings). However, the security best practice is to keep secrets out of App Service completely. You'll move your secrets to a key vault and change your app setting to a [Key Vault reference](app-service-key-vault-references.md) with the help of Service Connectors.
 
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diff --git a/articles/app-service/tutorial-nodejs-mongodb-app.md b/articles/app-service/tutorial-nodejs-mongodb-app.md
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ ms.collection: ce-skilling-ai-copilot
 
 [Azure App Service](overview.md) provides a highly scalable, self-patching web hosting service using the Linux operating system. This tutorial shows how to create a secure Node.js app in Azure App Service that's connected to a [Azure Cosmos DB for MongoDB](/azure/cosmos-db/mongodb/mongodb-introduction) database. When you're finished, you'll have an Express.js app running on Azure App Service on Linux.
 
-:::image type="content" source="./media/tutorial-nodejs-mongodb-app/azure-portal-browse-app-2.png" alt-text="Screenshot of Node.js application storing data in ComsosDB.":::
+:::image type="content" source="./media/tutorial-nodejs-mongodb-app/azure-portal-browse-app-2.png" alt-text="Screenshot of Node.js application storing data in Cosmos DB.":::
 
 In this tutorial, you learn how to:
 
@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ Sign in to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com/) and follow these steps
         1. *Name*: **msdocs-expressjs-mongodb-XYZ**, where *XYZ* is any three random characters. 
         1. *Runtime stack*: **Node 20 LTS**.
         1. *Engine*: **Cosmos DB API for MongoDB**. Azure Cosmos DB is a cloud native database offering a 100% MongoDB compatible API. Note the database name that's generated for you (*\<app-name>-database*). You'll need it later.
-        1. *Hosting plan*: **Basic**. When you're ready, you can [scale up](manage-scale-up.md) to a production pricing tier later.
+        1. *Hosting plan*: **Basic**. When you're ready, you can [scale up](manage-scale-up.md) to a production pricing tier.
         1. Select **Review + create**.
         1. After validation completes, select **Create**.
     :::column-end:::
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ Having issues? Check the [Troubleshooting section](#troubleshooting).
 
 ## 3. Secure connection secrets
 
-The creation wizard generated the connectivity string for you already as an [app setting](configure-common.md#configure-app-settings). However, the security best practice is to keep secrets out of App Service completely. You'll move your secrets to key vault and change your app setting to a [Key Vault reference](app-service-key-vault-references.md) with the help of Service Connectors.
+The creation wizard generated the connectivity string for you already as an [app setting](configure-common.md#configure-app-settings). However, the security best practice is to keep secrets out of App Service completely. You'll move your secrets to a key vault and change your app setting to a [Key Vault reference](app-service-key-vault-references.md) with the help of Service Connectors.
 
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@@ -217,7 +217,7 @@ The creation wizard generated the connectivity string for you already as an [app
         1. Select **Review + create**, then select **Create**. Wait for the key vault deployment to finish. You should see "Your deployment is complete."
     :::column-end:::
     :::column:::
-        :::image type="content" source="./media/tutorial-nodejs-mongodb-app/azure-portal-secure-connection-secrets-3.png" alt-text="A screenshot showing how secure a key vault with a private endpoint." lightbox="./media/tutorial-nodejs-mongodb-app/azure-portal-secure-connection-secrets-3.png":::
+        :::image type="content" source="./media/tutorial-nodejs-mongodb-app/azure-portal-secure-connection-secrets-3.png" alt-text="A screenshot showing how to secure a key vault with a private endpoint." lightbox="./media/tutorial-nodejs-mongodb-app/azure-portal-secure-connection-secrets-3.png":::
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@@ -563,6 +563,8 @@ The AZD template you use generated the connectivity variables for you already as
 
     `AZURE_COSMOS_CONNECTIONSTRING` contains the connection string to the Cosmos DB database in Azure. You need to use it in your code later. 
 
+1. For your convenience, the AZD template shows you the direct link to the app's app settings page. Find the link and open it in a new browser tab.
+
 Having issues? Check the [Troubleshooting section](#troubleshooting).
 
 ## 4. Modify sample code and redeploy
@@ -587,7 +589,7 @@ Having issues? Check the [Troubleshooting section](#troubleshooting).
 
 # [Without GitHub Copilot](#tab/nocopilot)
 
-1. From the explorer, open *app.js* see that the app creates a Mongoose connection using `MONGODB_URI` (Line 16).
+1. From the explorer, open *app.js* and see that the app creates a Mongoose connection using `MONGODB_URI` (Line 16).
 
 1. Change `process.env.MONGODB_URI` to `process.env.AZURE_COSMOS_CONNECTIONSTRING || process.env.MONGODB_URI`.
 
