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paulth1 · paulth1 · commit e4eaf72f33e7 · 2022-12-29T16:31:32.000-08:00
diff --git a/articles/azure-monitor/app/automate-with-logic-apps.md b/articles/azure-monitor/app/automate-with-logic-apps.md
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ You can also add other actions. The Logic Apps feature of Azure App Service make
 
 ## Create a logic app for Application Insights
 
-In this tutorial, you learn how to create a logic app that uses the Analytics autocluster algorithm to group attributes in the data for a web application. The flow automatically sends the results by email. This example shows how you can use Application Insights Analytics and Logic Apps together.
+In this tutorial, you learn how to create a logic app that uses the Log Analytics autocluster algorithm to group attributes in the data for a web application. The flow automatically sends the results by email. This example shows how you can use Application Insights analytics and Logic Apps together.
 
 ### Create a logic app
 1. Sign in to the [Azure portal](https://portal.azure.com).
@@ -62,10 +62,10 @@ For this step, you need an application ID and an API key for your resource.
 
     ![Screenshot that shows the Logic App Designer flow connection window.](./media/automate-with-logic-apps/7connection.png)
 
-### Specify the Analytics query and chart type
-In the following example, the query selects the failed requests within the last day and correlates them with exceptions that occurred as part of the operation. Analytics correlates the failed requests based on the `operation_Id` identifier. The query then segments the results by using the autocluster algorithm.
+### Specify the Log Analytics query and chart type
+In the following example, the query selects the failed requests within the last day and correlates them with exceptions that occurred as part of the operation. Log Analytics correlates the failed requests based on the `operation_Id` identifier. The query then segments the results by using the autocluster algorithm.
 
-When you create your own queries, verify that they're working properly in Analytics before you add them to your flow.
+When you create your own queries, verify that they're working properly in Log Analytics before you add them to your flow.
 
 1. In the **Query** box, add the following Log Analytics query:
 
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ When you create your own queries, verify that they're working properly in Analyt
 
 1. In the **Chart Type** box, select **Html Table**.
 
-    ![Screenshot that shows the Analytics query configuration window.](./media/automate-with-logic-apps/8query.png)
+    ![Screenshot that shows the Log Analytics query configuration window.](./media/automate-with-logic-apps/8query.png)
 
 ### Configure the logic app to send email
 
@@ -130,5 +130,5 @@ When you create your own queries, verify that they're working properly in Analyt
 
 ## Next steps
 
-- Learn more about creating [Analytics queries](../logs/get-started-queries.md).
+- Learn more about creating [Log Analytics queries](../logs/get-started-queries.md).
 - Learn more about [Logic Apps](../../logic-apps/logic-apps-overview.md).
diff --git a/articles/azure-monitor/app/deprecated-java-2x.md b/articles/azure-monitor/app/deprecated-java-2x.md
@@ -191,7 +191,7 @@ Now publish your app to the server, let people use it, and watch the telemetry s
 
   * [Microsoft Visual C++ Redistributable](https://www.microsoft.com/download/details.aspx?id=40784)
 
-    (This component enables performance counters.)
+    This component enables performance counters.
 
 ### Azure App Service, Azure Kubernetes Service, VMs config
 
@@ -576,7 +576,9 @@ To search for individual instances of dependency, exception, and method reports,
 
 Learn more about how to [diagnose dependency issues](./asp-net-dependencies.md#diagnosis).
 
-### Questions? Problems?
+### Questions or problems?
+
+Use the following resources:
 
 * No data? [Set firewall exceptions](./ip-addresses.md).
 * [Troubleshoot Java](java-2x-troubleshoot.md).
@@ -850,49 +852,49 @@ On your Linux server machines:
 1. Edit `/etc/collectd/collectd.conf`:
    * Ensure that [the Java plug-in](https://collectd.org/wiki/index.php/Plugin:Java) is enabled.
    * Update the JVMArg for the `java.class.path` to include the following jar. Update the version number to match the one you downloaded:
-   * `/usr/share/collectd/java/applicationinsights-collectd-1.0.5.jar`
+       * `/usr/share/collectd/java/applicationinsights-collectd-1.0.5.jar`
    * Add this snippet by using the instrumentation key from your resource:
 
-```xml
-
-     LoadPlugin "com.microsoft.applicationinsights.collectd.ApplicationInsightsWriter"
-     <Plugin ApplicationInsightsWriter>
-        InstrumentationKey "Your key"
-     </Plugin>
-```
-
-Here's part of a sample configuration file:
-
-```xml
-
-    ...
-    # collectd plugins
-    LoadPlugin cpu
-    LoadPlugin disk
-    LoadPlugin load
-    ...
-
-    # Enable Java Plugin
-    LoadPlugin "java"
-
-    # Configure Java Plugin
-    <Plugin "java">
-      JVMArg "-verbose:jni"
-      JVMArg "-Djava.class.path=/usr/share/collectd/java/applicationinsights-collectd-1.0.5.jar:/usr/share/collectd/java/collectd-api.jar"
-
-      # Enabling Application Insights plugin
-      LoadPlugin "com.microsoft.applicationinsights.collectd.ApplicationInsightsWriter"
-
-      # Configuring Application Insights plugin
-      <Plugin ApplicationInsightsWriter>
-        InstrumentationKey "12345678-1234-1234-1234-123456781234"
-      </Plugin>
-
-      # Other plugin configurations ...
-      ...
-    </Plugin>
-    ...
-```
+        ```xml
+        
+             LoadPlugin "com.microsoft.applicationinsights.collectd.ApplicationInsightsWriter"
+             <Plugin ApplicationInsightsWriter>
+                InstrumentationKey "Your key"
+             </Plugin>
+        ```
+        
+        Here's part of a sample configuration file:
+    
+        ```xml
+        
+            ...
+            # collectd plugins
+            LoadPlugin cpu
+            LoadPlugin disk
+            LoadPlugin load
+            ...
+        
+            # Enable Java Plugin
+            LoadPlugin "java"
+        
+            # Configure Java Plugin
+            <Plugin "java">
+              JVMArg "-verbose:jni"
+              JVMArg "-Djava.class.path=/usr/share/collectd/java/applicationinsights-collectd-1.0.5.jar:/usr/share/collectd/java/collectd-api.jar"
+        
+              # Enabling Application Insights plugin
+              LoadPlugin "com.microsoft.applicationinsights.collectd.ApplicationInsightsWriter"
+        
+              # Configuring Application Insights plugin
+              <Plugin ApplicationInsightsWriter>
+                InstrumentationKey "12345678-1234-1234-1234-123456781234"
+              </Plugin>
+        
+              # Other plugin configurations ...
+              ...
+            </Plugin>
+            ...
+        ```
 
 Configure other [collectd plug-ins](https://collectd.org/wiki/index.php/Table_of_Plugins), which can collect various data from different sources.
 
@@ -909,12 +911,12 @@ By default, the Application Insights plug-in sends all the data collected by all
 To exclude data from specific plug-ins or data sources:
 
 * Edit the configuration file.
-* In `<Plugin ApplicationInsightsWriter>`, add directive lines like the ones in the following table.
+* In `<Plugin ApplicationInsightsWriter>`, add directive lines like the ones in the following table:
 
-| Directive | Effect |
-| --- | --- |
-| `Exclude disk` |Exclude all data collected by the `disk` plug-in. |
-| `Exclude disk:read,write` |Exclude the sources named `read` and `write` from the `disk` plug-in. |
+    | Directive | Effect |
+    | --- | --- |
+    | `Exclude disk` |Exclude all data collected by the `disk` plug-in. |
+    | `Exclude disk:read,write` |Exclude the sources named `read` and `write` from the `disk` plug-in. |
 
 Separate directives with a newline.
 
@@ -980,7 +982,8 @@ Follow these steps:
 
      `azure.application-insights.instrumentation-key=<your-instrumentation-key-here>`
 1. Build your application and run it.
-1. The preceding steps should get you up and running with pre-aggregated metrics autocollected to Azure Monitor.
+
+The preceding steps should get you up and running with pre-aggregated metrics autocollected to Azure Monitor.
 
 ### Use Spring 2.x
 
@@ -1006,7 +1009,8 @@ Follow these steps:
 
      `azure.application-insights.instrumentation-key=<your-instrumentation-key-here>`
 1. Build your application and run it.
-1. The preceding steps should get you running with pre-aggregated metrics autocollected to Azure Monitor. For more information on how to fine-tune Application Insights Spring Boot starter, see the [readme on GitHub](https://github.com/Microsoft/azure-spring-boot/releases/latest).
+
+The preceding steps should get you running with pre-aggregated metrics autocollected to Azure Monitor. For more information on how to fine-tune Application Insights Spring Boot starter, see the [readme on GitHub](https://github.com/Microsoft/azure-spring-boot/releases/latest).
 
 Default metrics:
 
diff --git a/articles/azure-monitor/app/java-standalone-arguments.md b/articles/azure-monitor/app/java-standalone-arguments.md
@@ -1,16 +1,16 @@
 ---
-title: Add the JVM arg - Azure Monitor Application Insights for Java
-description: Learn how to add the JVM arg that enables Azure Monitor Application Insights for Java.
+title: Add the JVM arg - Application Insights for Java
+description: Learn how to add the JVM arg that enables Application Insights for Java.
 ms.topic: conceptual
 ms.date: 12/14/2022
 ms.devlang: java
 ms.custom: devx-track-java
 ms.reviewer: mmcc
 ---
 
-# Tips for updating your JVM args: Azure Monitor Application Insights for Java
+# Update your JVM args: Application Insights for Java
 
-## Azure App Services
+## Azure App Service
 
 For more information, see [Application monitoring for Azure App Service and Java](./azure-web-apps-java.md).
 
diff --git a/articles/azure-monitor/app/usage-impact.md b/articles/azure-monitor/app/usage-impact.md
@@ -28,18 +28,18 @@ To use the Impact analysis workbook, in your Application Insights resources go t
 
 :::image type="content" source="./media/usage-impact/selected-event.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows where to choose an initial page view, custom event, or request." lightbox="./media/usage-impact/selected-event.png":::
 
-1. Select an event from the **Selected event** dropdown list.
-1. Select a metric from the **analyze how its** dropdown list.
-1. Select an event from the  **Impacting event** dropdown list.
+1. From the **Selected event** dropdown list, select an event.
+1. From the **analyze how its** dropdown list, select a metric.
+1. From the  **Impacting event** dropdown list, select an event.
 1. To add a filter, use the **Add selected event filters** tab or the **Add impacting event filters** tab.
 
 ## Is page load time affecting how many people convert on my page?
 
 To begin answering questions with the Impact workbook, choose an initial page view, custom event, or request.
 
-1. Select an event from the **Selected event** dropdown list.
+1. From the **Selected event** dropdown list, select an event.
 1. Leave the **analyze how its** dropdown list on the default selection of **Duration**. (In this context, **Duration** is an alias for **Page Load Time**.)
-1. For the **Impacting event** dropdown list, select a custom event. This event should correspond to a UI element on the page view you selected in step 1.
+1. From the **Impacting event** dropdown list, select a custom event. This event should correspond to a UI element on the page view you selected in step 1.
 
    :::image type="content" source="./media/usage-impact/impact.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows an example with the selected event as Home Page analyzed by duration." lightbox="./media/usage-impact/impact.png":::
 
@@ -49,11 +49,11 @@ Impact supports both standard and custom properties and measurements. Use whatev
 
 ## Do users from different countries or regions convert at different rates?
 
-1. Select an event from the **Selected event** dropdown list.
-1. Choose **Country or region** from the **analyze how its** dropdown list.
-1. For the **Impacting event** dropdown list, select a custom event that corresponds to a UI element on the page view you chose in step 1.
+1. From the **Selected event** dropdown list, select an event.
+1. From the **analyze how its** dropdown list, select **Country or region**.
+1. From the **Impacting event** dropdown list, select a custom event that corresponds to a UI element on the page view you chose in step 1.
 
-:::image type="content" source="./media/usage-impact/regions.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows an example with the selected event as GET analyzed by country and region." lightbox="./media/usage-impact/regions.png":::
+   :::image type="content" source="./media/usage-impact/regions.png" alt-text="Screenshot that shows an example with the selected event as GET analyzed by country and region." lightbox="./media/usage-impact/regions.png":::
 
 ## How does the Impact analysis workbook calculate these conversion rates?
 
