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 # Microsoft Sentinel Solution for SAP BTP overview
 
-This article introduces the Microsoft Sentinel Solution for SAP BTP. The solution monitors and protects your SAP Business Technology Platform (BTP) system: It collects audits and activity logs from the BTP infrastructure and BTP based apps, and detects threats, suspicious activities, illegitimate activities, and more.
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 SAP BTP is a cloud-based solution that provides a wide range of tools and services for developers to build, run, and manage applications. One of the key features of SAP BTP is its low-code development capabilities. Low-code development allows developers to create applications quickly and efficiently by using visual drag-and-drop interfaces and prebuilt components, rather than writing code from scratch.
 
-:::image type="content" source="media/deploy-sap-btp-solution/sap-btp-solution-overview.png" alt-text="Diagram that shows a SAP BTP landscape integrated with Microsoft Sentinel." lightbox="media/deploy-sap-btp-solution/sap-btp-solution-overview.png" border="false":::
+The Microsoft Sentinel solution for SAP BTP monitors and protects your SAP Business Technology Platform (BTP) system by collecting audits and activity logs from the BTP infrastructure and BTP based apps, and detecting threats, suspicious activities, illegitimate activities, and more.
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+## Solution architecture
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+The following image illustrates how Microsoft Sentinel retrieves the complete BTP's audit log information. he Microsoft Sentinel soluition for SAP BTP provides built-in analytics rules and detections for selected scenarios, which you can extend to cover more of the audit log information and events.
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+:::image type="content" source="media/deploy-sap-btp-solution/sap-btp-solution-overview.png" alt-text="Diagram that shows an SAP BTP landscape integrated with Microsoft Sentinel." lightbox="media/deploy-sap-btp-solution/sap-btp-solution-overview.png" border="false":::
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 ## Why it's important to monitor BTP activity
 
 While low-code development platforms have become increasingly popular among businesses looking to accelerate their application development processes, there are also security risks that organizations must consider. One key concern is the risk of security vulnerabilities introduced by citizen developers, some of whom might lack the security awareness of traditional pro-dev community. To counter these vulnerabilities, it's crucial for organizations to quickly detect and respond to threats on BTP applications.
 
-Beyond the low-code aspect, BTP applications:
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-- Access sensitive business data, such as customers, opportunities, orders, financial data, and manufacturing processes.
-- Access and integrate with multiple different business applications and data stores​.
-- Enable key business processes​.
-- Are created by citizen developers who might not be security savvy or aware of cyber threats.
-- Used by wide range of users, internal and external​.
+Beyond the low-code aspect, BTP applications have the following aspects that make them a target for cyber threats:
 
-Therefore, it's important to protect your BTP system against these risks.
+- **Access sensitive business data**, such as customers, opportunities, orders, financial data, and manufacturing processes.
+- **Access and integrate** with multiple different business applications and data stores​.
+- **Enable key business processes**​.
+- **Are created by citizen developers** who might not be security savvy or aware of cyber threats.
+- **Used by wide range of users**, internal and external​.
 
-See a detailed scenario involving the audit log of the SAP BTP AI Core Service in [this SAP blog post](https://community.sap.com/t5/technology-blogs-by-members/nice-patch-sap-revisiting-your-sap-btp-security-measures-after-ai-core/ba-p/13770662).
+For more information, see [Nice patch SAP! Revisiting your SAP BTP security measures after AI Core vulnerability fix](https://community.sap.com/t5/technology-blogs-by-members/nice-patch-sap-revisiting-your-sap-btp-security-measures-after-ai-core/ba-p/13770662) (blog).
 
 ## How the solution addresses BTP security risks
 
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 ## Next steps
 
-In this article, you learned about the Microsoft Sentinel solution for SAP BTP. See [this SAP blog post](https://community.sap.com/t5/technology-blogs-by-members/nice-patch-sap-revisiting-your-sap-btp-security-measures-after-ai-core/ba-p/13770662) for more details.
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 > [Deploy the Microsoft Sentinel Solution for SAP BTP](deploy-sap-btp-solution.md)