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articles/automanage/move-automanaged-configurationprofile.md

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 # Move an Azure Automanage Configuration Profile to a different region
-This article describes how to migrate an Automanage Configuration Profile to a different region. You might want to move your Configuration Profiles to another region for a number of reasons. For example, to take advantage of a new Azure region, to meet internal policy and governance requirements, or in response to capacity planning requirements. You may want to deploy Azure Automanage to some VMs that are in a new region, and may want to do so with a Configuration Profile local to that region..
+This article describes how to migrate an Automanage Configuration Profile to a different region. You might want to move your Configuration Profiles to another region for many reasons. For example, to take advantage of a new Azure region, to meet internal policy and governance requirements, or in response to capacity planning requirements. You may want to deploy Azure Automanage to some VMs that are in a new region.  Some regions may require that you use Automanage Configuration Profiles  that are local to that region..
 
 ## Prerequisites
 * Ensure that your target region is [supported by Automanage](./automanage-virtual-machines.md#prerequisites).
 * Ensure that your Log Analytics workspace region, Automation account region, and your target region are all regions supported by the region mappings [here](../automation/how-to/region-mappings.md).
 
 ## Download your desired Automanage Configuration Profile
 
-This can be done by using PowerShell.  First, perform a `GET` using `Invoke-RestMethod` against the Automanage Resource Provider, substituting the values for your subscription.
+We'll begin by downloading our previous Configuration Profile using PowerShell.  First, perform a `GET` using `Invoke-RestMethod` against the Automanage Resource Provider, substituting the values for your subscription.
 
 ```url
 https://management.azure.com/subscriptions/<yourSubscription>/providers/Microsoft.Automanage/configurationProfiles?api-version=2021-04-30-preview
 ```
 
-This will display a list of Automanage Configuration Profile information, including the settings and the ConfigurationProfile ID
+The GET command will display a list of Automanage Configuration Profile information, including the settings and the ConfigurationProfile ID
 ```azurepowershell-interactive
 $listConfigurationProfilesURI = "https://management.azure.com/subscriptions/<yourSubscription>/providers/Microsoft.Automanage/configurationProfiles?api-version=2021-04-30-preview"
 
 Invoke-RestMethod `
     -URI $listConfigurationProfilesURI
 ```
 
-This will result in a list of your Configuration Profiles created in this subscription, as seen below, edited for brevity.
+Here are the results, edited for brevity.
 
 ```json
     {
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ This will result in a list of your Configuration Profiles created in this subscr
     }
 ```
 
-The next step is to do another `GET`, this time to retrieve the specific profile we would like to create in a new region.  For this example, we will retrieve 'testProfile1'.  We will perform a `GET` against the `id` value for the desired profile.
+The next step is to do another `GET`, this time to retrieve the specific profile we would like to create in a new region.  For this example, we'll retrieve 'testProfile1'.  We'll perform a `GET` against the `id` value for the desired profile.
 
 ```azurepowershell-interactive
 $profileId = "https://management.azure.com/subscriptions/yourSubscription/resourceGroups/yourResourceGroup/providers/Microsoft.Automanage/configurationProfiles/testProfile1?api-version=2021-04-30-preview"
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 Creating the profile in a new location is as simple as changing the `Location` property to our desired Azure Region.
 
-We also will need to create a new name for this profile.  Let's change this to profileUk.  This should be done for the `Name` property within the profile, and also in the URL.  We can use the `-replace` format operator to make this very simple.
+We also will need to create a new name for this profile.  Let's change the name of the Configuration Profile `profileUk`.  We should update the `Name` property within the profile, and also in the URL.  We can use the `-replace` format operator to make this simple.
 
 ```powershell
 $profile.Location = "westeurope"
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 ## Enable Automanage on your VMs
 For details on how to move your VMs, see this [article](../resource-mover/tutorial-move-region-virtual-machines.md).
 
-Once you have moved your pofile to a new region, you may use it as a custom profile for any VM.  Details are available [here](./automanage-virtual-machines.md#enabling-automanage-for-vms-in-azure-portal).
+Once you've moved your profile to a new region, you may use it as a custom profile for any VM.  Details are available [here](./automanage-virtual-machines.md#enabling-automanage-for-vms-in-azure-portal).
 
 ## Next steps
 * [Learn more about Azure Automanage](./automanage-virtual-machines.md)