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Author: v-thepet

articles/iot-hub-device-update/create-device-update-account.md

@@ -29,11 +29,11 @@ A Device Update instance contains updates and deployments associated with its Io
 
 - **Owner** or **User Access Administrator** role permissions in an Azure subscription
 - A Standard (S1) or higher instance of Azure IoT Hub
-- To run Azure CLI commands, you can use the Bash environment in [Azure Cloud Shell](/azure/cloud-shell/quickstart). Select **Launch Cloud Shell** to open Cloud Shell now, or select the Cloud Shell icon in the top toolbar of the Azure portal.
+- The Bash environment in [Azure Cloud Shell](/azure/cloud-shell/quickstart) for running Azure CLI commands. Select **Launch Cloud Shell** to open Cloud Shell now, or select the Cloud Shell icon in the top toolbar of the Azure portal.
 
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-  If you prefer to run Azure CLI commands locally:
+  If you prefer, you can run the Azure CLI commands locally:
 
   1. [Install Azure CLI](/cli/azure/install-azure-cli). Run [az version](/cli/azure/reference-index#az-version) to see the installed Azure CLI version and dependent libraries, and run [az upgrade](/cli/azure/reference-index#az-upgrade) to install the latest version.
   1. Sign in to Azure by running [az login](/cli/azure/reference-index#az-login).
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ A Device Update instance contains updates and deployments associated with its Io
 
 1. On the **Diagnostics** tab, slide the toggle to **Microsoft diagnostics logging Enabled**. Enabling Microsoft diagnostics allows Microsoft to collect, store, and analyze diagnostic log files from your devices if they encounter an update failure.
 
-1. Select **Select Azure Storage account** and then select an Azure Blob storage account to link to your Device Update instance for remote diagnostic log collection. The Storage account details update automatically.
+1. Select **Select Azure Storage Account** and then select an Azure Blob storage account to link to your Device Update instance for remote diagnostic log collection. The Storage account details update automatically.
 
 1. Select **Next: Networking**.
 
@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ You can also configure diagnostics logging as part of the instance creation proc
 
 ## Configure access
 
-Device Update setup automatically assigns **IoT Hub Data Contributor** role to the Device Update service principal. This role allows the Device Update instance to connect and write to the linked IoT hub to run deployment, device management, and diagnostic operations. Scoping access to the Device Update service principal ensures that only this Device Update instance can access this IoT hub.
+Device Update setup automatically assigns **IoT Hub Data Contributor** role to the Device Update service principal. This role allows the Device Update instance to connect and write to the linked IoT hub to run deployment, device management, and diagnostic operations. Only this Device Update service principal can access this IoT hub.
 
 If you have the required **Owner** or **User Access Administrator** permissions in your Azure subscription, you can configure access control to your Device Update resources by using a combination of roles to provide users and applications the right level of access. For more information, see [Configure access control roles for Device Update resources](configure-access-control-device-update.md).