incorporate feedback from Jef

Author: markwahl-msft

articles/active-directory/governance/licensing-fundamentals.md

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 The following tables show the licensing requirements for Microsoft Entra ID Governance features
 
 ## Types of licenses
-The following licenses are available for use with Microsoft Entra ID Governance.  The type of licenses you need will depend on the features you're using.
+The following licenses are available for use with Microsoft Entra ID Governance.  The choice of licenses you need in a tenant will depend on the features you're using in that tenant.
 
 - **Free** - Included with Microsoft cloud subscriptions such as Microsoft Azure, Microsoft 365, and others.
-- **Microsoft Azure AD P1** - Azure Active Directory Premium P1 (becoming Microsoft Entra ID P1) is available as a standalone or included with Microsoft 365 E3 for enterprise customers and Microsoft 365 Business Premium for small to medium businesses. 
-- **Microsoft Azure AD P2** - Azure Active Directory Premium P2 (becoming Microsoft Entra ID P2) is available as a standalone or included with Microsoft 365 E5 for enterprise customers.
-- **Microsoft Entra ID Governance** - Entra ID Governance is an advanced set of identity governance capabilities available for Microsoft Entra ID P1 and P2 customers.
+- **Microsoft Azure AD P1** - Azure Active Directory Premium P1 (becoming Microsoft Entra ID P1) is available as a standalone product or included with Microsoft 365 E3 for enterprise customers and Microsoft 365 Business Premium for small to medium businesses. 
+- **Microsoft Azure AD P2** - Azure Active Directory Premium P2 (becoming Microsoft Entra ID P2) is available as a standalone product or included with Microsoft 365 E5 for enterprise customers.
+- **Microsoft Entra ID Governance** - Entra ID Governance is an advanced set of identity governance capabilities available for Microsoft Entra ID P1 and P2 customers, as two products **Microsoft Entra ID Governance** and **Microsoft Entra ID Governance Step Up for Microsoft Entra ID P2**.
 
 >[!NOTE]
 >Microsoft Entra ID Governance scenarios may depends upon other features that are not covered by Microsoft Entra ID Governance.  These features may have additional licensing requirements.  See [Governance capabilities in other Microsoft Entra features](identity-governance-overview.md#governance-capabilities-in-other-microsoft-entra-features) for more information on governance scenarios that rely on additional features.
 
+
 ### Prerequisites
 
-The Microsoft Entra ID Governance capabilities are currently available in two products. These two products provide the same identity governance capabilities, but have different prerequisites.
+The Microsoft Entra ID Governance capabilities are currently available in two products. These two products provide the same identity governance capabilities. The difference between the two products is that they have different prerequisites.
 
 - A subscription to **Microsoft Entra ID Governance** requires that the tenant also have an active subscription to another product, one that contains the `AAD_PREMIUM` or `AAD_PREMIUM_P2` service plan. Examples of products meeting this prerequisite include **Microsoft Azure Active Directory Premium P1** or **Microsoft 365 E3**.
 - A subscription to **Microsoft Entra ID Governance Step Up for Microsoft Entra ID P2** requires that the tenant also have an active subscription to another product, one that contains the `AAD_PREMIUM_P2` service plan.  Examples of products meeting this prerequisite include **Microsoft Azure Active Directory Premium P2** or **Microsoft 365 E5**.
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 ## Starting a trial
 
-A global administrator in a tenant that has an appropriate prerequisite product already purchased, and is not already using or has previously trialed Microsoft Entra ID Governance, may request a trial of Microsoft Entra ID Governance in their tenant.
+A global administrator in a tenant that has an appropriate prerequisite product, such as Microsoft Azure AD Premium P1, already purchased, and is not already using or has previously trialed Microsoft Entra ID Governance, may request a trial of Microsoft Entra ID Governance in their tenant.
 
 1. Sign in to the [Microsoft 365 admin center](https://admin.microsoft.com/AdminPortal/Home) as a global administrator.
 
 1. In the **Billing** menu, select **Purchase services**.
 
 1. In the **Search all product categories** box, type `"Microsoft Entra ID Governance"`.
 
-1. If your tenant has Azure AD Premium P1, then click on **Details** below **Microsoft Entra ID Governance**.  If your tenant has Azure AD Premium P2, then click on **Details** below **Microsoft Entra ID Governance Step-Up for Microsoft Entra ID P2**.
+1. Select **Details** below **Microsoft Entra ID Governance** to view the trial and purchase information for the product.  If your tenant has Azure AD Premium P2, then select  **Details** below **Microsoft Entra ID Governance Step-Up for Microsoft Entra ID P2**.
 
 1. In the product details page, click **Start free trial**.
 
 
-## Features by license type
-The following table shows what features are available with each license type.  Note that not all features are available in all clouds; see [Azure Active Directory feature availability](../authentication/feature-availability.md) for Azure Government.
+## Features by license
+The following table shows what features are available with each license.  Note that not all features are available in all clouds; see [Azure Active Directory feature availability](../authentication/feature-availability.md) for Azure Government.
 
 |Feature|Free|Microsoft Entra ID P1|Microsoft Entra ID P2|Microsoft Entra ID Governance|
 |-----|:-----:|:-----:|:-----:|:-----:|