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Author: tarTech23

articles/defender-for-iot/organizations/update-ot-software.md

@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ This procedure describes how to send a software version update to one or more OT
 
 1. In the **Send package** pane that appears, check to make sure that you're sending the software to the sensor you want to update. To jump to the release notes for the new version, select **Learn more** at the top of the pane.
 
-1. When you're ready, select **Send package**, and the software transfer to your sensor machine is started. You can see the transfer progress in the **Sensor version** column, with the percentage complete automatically updating in the progress bar, showing that the process has started and lets you track its progress. For example:
+1. When you're ready, select **Send package**, and the software transfer to your sensor machine is started. You can see the transfer progress in the **Sensor version** column, with the percentage complete automatically updating in the progress bar, so you can see that the process has started and letting you track its progress until the transfer is complete. For example:
 
     :::image type="content" source="media/update-ot-software/sensor-version-update-bar.png" alt-text="Screenshot of the update bar in the Sensor version column" lightbox="media/update-ot-software/sensor-version-update-bar.png":::