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articles/reliability/reliability-energy-data-services.md

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 ### Zone down experience
 During a zone-wide outage, no action is required during zone recovery. There may be a brief degradation of performance, until the service self-heals and re-balances underlying capacity to adjust to healthy zones. 
 
-Customers experiencing failures with Microsoft Energy Data Services APIs may need to be retried for 5XX errors.
+If you're experiencing failures with Microsoft Energy Data Services APIs, you may need to implement a retry mechanism for 5XX errors.
 
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